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rabb - 24th October 2009, 08:00 PM
tu satikarea,main hankarea hadd na karja kidre.
mainu dei rakh ilzam koi,main rabb na bnja kidre.

aiwe na neer bahaiya kar.
mainu apni hond samjhaiya kar.
bhul k teri hasti,taitho alag na bnja kidre.
mainu deyi rakh ilzam koi.....

teri chup nu aida saah na de.
mainu bolan da aina mauka na de.
bolda -2 jyada hi,uccha na khad ja kidre.
mainu deyi rakh ilzam koi....

tere chnge hon da v hakaar na ho jave.
eh "deep" kidre aukato bahar na ho jave.
apni hi kalam di main bekadri krda haan,khud koi mada shabad na bnja kidre.
mainu deyi rakh ilzam koi,main rabb na bnja kidre......
   
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28th October 2009, 02:31 PM
Deep ji agar poetry de sikhar te vi pahunch jaoogey taaN vi eh nazm tuhaadiaaN best nazmaaN wichoN hoyegee. Bahut hi shaandaar. IK IK lafz sahit da sikhar si.

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28th October 2009, 02:37 PM
teri chup nu aida saah na de.
mainu bolan da aina mauka na de.

Ethey teri di jagah Meri te nahi si???

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28th October 2009, 07:48 PM
hmmm teri chup means...chup j saah lai rhi aa..ta quitness is still thr... so dnt b quiet..that was ma point i think..thanx 4 reading ji
   
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rabb posted by deep ji - 4th November 2009, 09:56 AM
main rabb na bnja kidre

bahut khoob deep ji
   
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6th November 2009, 09:02 PM
Hello Deep

tuhadi eh poetry ta kammaaaal di aa,
das hor ki kiha?

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6th November 2009, 10:12 PM
Deep ji tusi bahut hi vadiya likhiya hai...........vaise taan har lafz khaas hai par 1st 2 lines te bahuttttttt hi khaas lagiya......superb

tu satikarea,main hankarea hadd na karja kidre.
mainu dei rakh ilzam koi,main rabb na bnja kidre.


wasde raho
rabb raakha

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