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Chhukar u.nhe nasha hua utra na phir kabhi............

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19th September 2016, 07:59 PM
Vah sunita ji

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Easey toofani mei aksar rasta hota nahi
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22nd September 2016, 09:09 AM
Sabaa ji khoob hai...assuming next is 'na'

na tumse kuch gila na zamaane se hai humdum
thi apni hi khataa ki pyaar kar na sake hum...

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22nd September 2016, 03:12 PM
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Sabaa ji khoob hai...assuming next is 'na'

na tumse kuch gila na zamaane se hai humdum
thi apni hi khataa ki pyaar kar na sake hum...

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Buhet acha likha qasid saheb

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hai saazish tumhari ya behkaa sa dil hai
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24th September 2016, 02:26 PM

Hum toh woh they key seedhi bat b na samjhtey kabhi
Aor ab sikha dia tum ney kahavten karna
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Hum toh woh they key seedhi bat b na samjhtey kabhi
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Agar merey mohabbat ka yu charcha na hua hota
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Bahut khoob mujahid bhai....ta se agla sher pesh hai

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ruswaayi zindagi se kuch aise nibhaayi humne

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Bahut khoob mujahid bhai....ta se agla sher pesh hai

tamaam shab teri furkat mein bitaayi humne
ruswaayi zindagi se kuch aise nibhaayi humne

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na Gubaar me.n na gulaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa
mere dard kii aab-o-tab me.n mujhe dekhanaa
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