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Arrow chan kagaj ke tukde - 8th November 2013, 11:43 AM
tere liye to wo chand tukde the kagaz ke
per meri to umar bhar ki dastan likhi thi
pad kar fenk diya kone mein aakhbar ki tarah
in khaton mein mere khoon ki siyahi lagi thi
sulgte rahe jajbaat dehke aangaroon se
tum ko khabar na hui ye khata meri thi
dil ke chaaloon ko jo chua zara
to dard sailab ki tarah nikla tha
gujra to tha tere kuche ki har gali se mera paigam
tumne nahi saraha ye khata meri thi
mere aashqon ki zuban tum samajh nahi paye
chahat ko khatton mein bayan hum kar nahi paaye
likhte to rahe saari raat mohabbat ka fsana
beith kar tere pehlu mein hale dil tum ko sunana
tumko ye bhi bata nahi paaye ye khatta bhi meri thi
taqdir to badal sakti thi shakir ki
tumne kabhi chaha hi nahi
kismat ke milne se kismat badal sakti thi
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hi - 8th November 2013, 01:55 PM
Hi dear,

aap ka prayas sarahniy hai... koshis kerte rahiye.. avashya aap sunder likhenge..jo dil ko chhu jayegi..

shubhkamnao sahit,
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8th November 2013, 02:43 PM
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9th November 2013, 05:38 PM
Waah .... Superb ... Ek dahakte huwe shikwe ko nazm ka khoobsurat pairahan pehnaya hai .... Dheron daad Shakir ji ....
   
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11th November 2013, 10:58 AM
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11th November 2013, 01:43 PM
Shakir ji,
Shayar wo nahi jo kalam (pen) se likhe, wo to dil ki daastaan bayan karta hai. Aur aapke is qlaam me to dil ki baat khulkar bahar aati hai. Bas me ye kahunga ki...
Ye Gazal nahi, wo bhi sahi, humne kahaan Gazal kahi hai?
Ye to dil ki daastaan hai jo ragon se hoke kagaz pe utri hai

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11th November 2013, 02:37 PM
sulgte rahe jajbaat dehke aangaroon se
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dil ke chaaloon ko jo chua zara
to dard sailab ki tarah nikla tha
gujra to tha tere kuche ki har gali se mera paigam
tumne nahi saraha ye khata meri thi


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15th November 2013, 06:34 AM
shakir g is khoobsurat kalaam pe apke bahut bahut badhai....ek baat kehna chahunga apse ..thoda sa presentation sahi karein..thoda gap dein lines ke beech me, padne wale ko easy hota hai...har sher ke baad thoda gap ho to accha present hota hai...asha karta hun aapne meri baaton ka matlab samjha hoga...thanx..


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aru bhai aapne bahut achi baat batai hai
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