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yeh kaali raat me.n bikhri kyun chandni yahaan? -
26th May 2011, 08:18 PM
ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai
duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai
Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?
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26th May 2011, 09:02 PM
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Originally Posted by Mayank
ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai
duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai
Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?
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Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
bahut acha likhaa hai bhayee....
ban,ne aur bigaDne ke is khel ne . bahut pasand aayaa ye to.....
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
iski nazuki bhi dil ko choo gayeee.....
nice to read u
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26th May 2011, 10:45 PM
Rachnaa MeN Bahut Khoobsurat ChitR KhincheN HaiN Aapne ... MayanK Ji !
Komal Panktiyaa Boond-Boond Antar Bheegne Ka Abhaas Karaati Pratiik Hoti HaiN ... Inn Behad Umdaa EhsaasoN Ko ... Tahe Dil Se DheroN Daad ...
Aise Hi Likhte RaheN Aur Aate Rahen .... Aage Bhi ! Khush RaheN ... !
DuaaoN Ke Saath .... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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26th May 2011, 11:36 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mayank
ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai
duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai
Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?
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Mayank Ji
radhe radhe
bahut khoobsurat ..... dilee mubaarakbaad ....
yuhi likhte rahiye ........
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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27th May 2011, 01:20 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mayank
ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai
duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai
Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?
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OO...Ho... aap aisa bhi likhte hai.....hmmmmmmm.......Bhaut Sunder.......
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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31st May 2011, 12:49 PM
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Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
bahut acha likhaa hai bhayee....
ban,ne aur bigaDne ke is khel ne . bahut pasand aayaa ye to.....
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
iski nazuki bhi dil ko choo gayeee.....
nice to read u
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shukriya Vikash jee, nawaazish hai aap ki.............
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31st May 2011, 12:51 PM
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Rachnaa MeN Bahut Khoobsurat ChitR KhincheN HaiN Aapne ... MayanK Ji !
Komal Panktiyaa Boond-Boond Antar Bheegne Ka Abhaas Karaati Pratiik Hoti HaiN ... Inn Behad Umdaa EhsaasoN Ko ... Tahe Dil Se DheroN Daad ...
Aise Hi Likhte RaheN Aur Aate Rahen .... Aage Bhi ! Khush RaheN ... !
DuaaoN Ke Saath .... !
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Naresh jee
aap ko rachana pasand aayi, behad khushii huii jaan kar... aap ki muravvat ke liye aabhaari huu.n...
-Mayank
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31st May 2011, 12:53 PM
Radhe Radhe.....
Kavya ki pasandagii ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah!
Mayank
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31st May 2011, 12:54 PM
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OO...Ho... aap aisa bhi likhte hai.....hmmmmmmm.......Bhaut Sunder.......
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jee haan... kabhi kabhaar aise bhi kaam chala dete hai.n
aap ko pasand aayii, khushi huii jaan kar.. apna waqt dene ke liye aur paDhne ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah......
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31st May 2011, 02:34 PM
wah janab, asli roop mei aa rahe ho
bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne, milan ki khushi bhi zahir hue aur birha ki tadap ka ahsaas bhi karvaya...har ahsaas khoob lga...aapki yeh tazza-tareen poetry hame behad pasand aaye..hamesha ki tarah.
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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1st June 2011, 12:34 AM
Mayank Ji,
Bahot khoob rahi aapki ye rachnaa...
Har pankti me masoomiyat si hai, har pankti laajawaab....
Dili daad
Rashid
Quote:
Originally Posted by Mayank
ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai
duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai
Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?
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Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko
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2nd June 2011, 11:22 AM
beautiful mayank.
chandni ek khayal ban pighalti hai
chand ki mehfil mein shama si jalti hai...
A
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6th June 2011, 11:08 AM
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ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai
duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai
Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?
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Good one Mayank ji...Quite romantic............
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
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11th June 2011, 01:10 PM
asli roop me,.n matlab? main hardum asli roop mainhi rehta huu.n
khair! mazaaq ki baat ek taraf , yeh kavita aap ko achchhi lagii, jaan kar behad khushii huii... skoshish karuunga ki aage bhi aise hii kuchh na kuchh gaahe-ba-gaahe pesh karta rahuunga...
daad aur pasandagii ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah!
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13th June 2011, 04:28 PM
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ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai
duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai
Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai
taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai
yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?
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bahut khoob ..................
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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15th June 2011, 01:17 PM
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Mayank Ji,
Bahot khoob rahi aapki ye rachnaa...
Har pankti me masoomiyat si hai, har pankti laajawaab....
Dili daad
Rashid
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Rashid jee:
aap ki hausala aur izzat afzaayi ke liye behad shukr-guzaar huun.. ummeed hai aage bhi yuun hi bazm me.n aate rahe.nge...
Mayank
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15th June 2011, 01:21 PM
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beautiful mayank.
chandni ek khayal ban pighalti hai
chand ki mehfil mein shama si jalti hai...
A
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Thanks Ankita........................
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15th June 2011, 01:22 PM
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Good one Mayank ji...Quite romantic............
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Thank u very much Zainy jee ..
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15th June 2011, 07:58 PM
Bahot khoob Mayank saab.. aapki ye kaawish bahot dil-azeez rahi.. accha laga aapke khayaalon se rubaroo hona... ek acchi peshkash ke liye laakhoN phool daad ke, peshe khidmat hain.... Likhte rahiye.. shukriya
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bahut khoob ..................
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12th July 2011, 02:43 PM
nice one Mayank ji
Regards
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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31st July 2011, 01:50 PM
Reminded me of my youth the good old days...when love was like the truth easy to find...!
Very well written, Mayank Ji...!
Keep it up and take care,ok...?
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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1st August 2011, 09:59 AM
Mayank Bhai,
Ek arse baad hoon aapki post par aur hiraaN hoon ki aaj bhi waisi hi tasveer ban rahi hai padhte padhte jaisi pichle 6-7 saalo se banti aa rahi hai
aapne apni nayaab rachnaa se rubaruu karwaaya shukrguzaar hooN
YunHi likhte rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa
Qasid
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