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Cool yeh kaali raat me.n bikhri kyun chandni yahaan? - 26th May 2011, 08:18 PM

ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai

duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai

Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?

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ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai

duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai

Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?


Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

bahut acha likhaa hai bhayee....

ban,ne aur bigaDne ke is khel ne . bahut pasand aayaa ye to.....


taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

iski nazuki bhi dil ko choo gayeee.....

nice to read u

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Rachnaa MeN Bahut Khoobsurat ChitR KhincheN HaiN Aapne ... MayanK Ji !

Komal Panktiyaa Boond-Boond Antar Bheegne Ka Abhaas Karaati Pratiik Hoti HaiN ... Inn Behad Umdaa EhsaasoN Ko ... Tahe Dil Se DheroN Daad ...

Aise Hi Likhte RaheN Aur Aate Rahen .... Aage Bhi ! Khush RaheN ... !

DuaaoN Ke Saath .... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai

duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai

Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?

Mayank Ji
radhe radhe

bahut khoobsurat ..... dilee mubaarakbaad ....

yuhi likhte rahiye ........


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ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai

duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai

Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?

OO...Ho... aap aisa bhi likhte hai.....hmmmmmmm.......Bhaut Sunder.......



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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

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Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

bahut acha likhaa hai bhayee....

ban,ne aur bigaDne ke is khel ne . bahut pasand aayaa ye to.....


taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

iski nazuki bhi dil ko choo gayeee.....

nice to read u

shukriya Vikash jee, nawaazish hai aap ki.............
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Aise Hi Likhte RaheN Aur Aate Rahen .... Aage Bhi ! Khush RaheN ... !

DuaaoN Ke Saath .... !

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Mayank Ji
radhe radhe

bahut khoobsurat ..... dilee mubaarakbaad ....

yuhi likhte rahiye ........

Radhe Radhe.....

Kavya ki pasandagii ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah!

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jee haan... kabhi kabhaar aise bhi kaam chala dete hai.n

aap ko pasand aayii, khushi huii jaan kar.. apna waqt dene ke liye aur paDhne ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah......

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wah janab, asli roop mei aa rahe ho

bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne, milan ki khushi bhi zahir hue aur birha ki tadap ka ahsaas bhi karvaya...har ahsaas khoob lga...aapki yeh tazza-tareen poetry hame behad pasand aaye..hamesha ki tarah.



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Mayank Ji,

Bahot khoob rahi aapki ye rachnaa...

Har pankti me masoomiyat si hai, har pankti laajawaab....

Dili daad

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ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai

duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai

Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?



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ek deep tuu ne mere
dil mai.n jalaaya hai
jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai

duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai

Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?

Good one Mayank ji...Quite romantic............




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bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne, milan ki khushi bhi zahir hue aur birha ki tadap ka ahsaas bhi karvaya...har ahsaas khoob lga...aapki yeh tazza-tareen poetry hame behad pasand aaye..hamesha ki tarah.

asli roop me,.n matlab? main hardum asli roop mainhi rehta huu.n

khair! mazaaq ki baat ek taraf , yeh kavita aap ko achchhi lagii, jaan kar behad khushii huii... skoshish karuunga ki aage bhi aise hii kuchh na kuchh gaahe-ba-gaahe pesh karta rahuunga...

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ek deep tuu ne mere
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jeewan main prem ka
prakash phailaaya hai

duur rehkar bhi tuu
yaad aati rahii sada
is bichhadan ne prem ko
aur zyaadah baDhaaya hai

Kali ghataao.n ke ban,ne
aur bigaDne ke is khel ne
teri zulfo.n ko
rah rah kar yaad karaaya hai

taaze phoolo.n par jamii
shabnamii bundo.n ne tere
raat me.n rone ka
raaz ab bataaya hai

yeh kaali raat me.n
bikhri kyun chandni yahaa.n
kyaa dupaTTe ko tuu ne
chehre se sarkaaya hai?

bahut khoob ..................


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Mayank Ji,

Bahot khoob rahi aapki ye rachnaa...

Har pankti me masoomiyat si hai, har pankti laajawaab....

Dili daad

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Good one Mayank ji...Quite romantic............

Thank u very much Zainy jee ..
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Bahot khoob Mayank saab.. aapki ye kaawish bahot dil-azeez rahi.. accha laga aapke khayaalon se rubaroo hona... ek acchi peshkash ke liye laakhoN phool daad ke, peshe khidmat hain.... Likhte rahiye.. shukriya

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Shukriyah Rashmi jee is Kavita ko pasand karne ke liye ....
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Reminded me of my youth the good old days...when love was like the truth easy to find...!

Very well written, Mayank Ji...!

Keep it up and take care,ok...?



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Mayank Bhai,

Ek arse baad hoon aapki post par aur hiraaN hoon ki aaj bhi waisi hi tasveer ban rahi hai padhte padhte jaisi pichle 6-7 saalo se banti aa rahi hai

aapne apni nayaab rachnaa se rubaruu karwaaya shukrguzaar hooN

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