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hausla - 28th June 2008, 07:02 PM
likhte hain hum dard ko ek naye andaaz mein
ho sake to gam mein bhi muskurana seekh lo

aazmaaish ho rahi hai har ghadi insaan ki
ho sake khud ko zara to aazmaana seekh lo

muddatein jaati rahi waqt bhi thamta nahi
khud sambhalna aur dil ko jalaana seekh lo

koshishon mein kyun rehta hai bebas
bebasi ko bhi khushi apni banana seekh lo

har taraf hai aag tishna aur jalte dil mile
aag ko chandni dhadkano se zindagi ab sajaana seekh lo

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28th June 2008, 07:15 PM
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likhte hain hum dard ko ek naye andaaz mein
ho sake to gam mein bhi muskurana seekh lo

aazmaaish ho rahi hai har ghadi insaan ki
ho sake khud ko zara to aazmaana seekh lo

muddatein jaati rahi waqt bhi thamta nahi
khud sambhalna aur dil ko jalaana seekh lo

koshishon mein kyun rehta hai bebas
bebasi ko bhi khushi apni banana seekh lo

har taraf hai aag tishna aur jalte dil mile
aag ko chandni dhadkano se zindagi ab sajaana seekh lo

koshishon mein kyun rehta hai bebas
bebasi ko bhi khushi apni banana seekh lo


tishna ji aapka likha acha laga ye sher khas tor per bohat acha laga likhti rahiye

Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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28th June 2008, 07:16 PM
very Good Dear ... bahut khoob rahi yeh ghazal
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29th June 2008, 12:33 AM
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6th July 2008, 07:58 PM
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waooo best poetry really
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Thumbs up waooo best poetry really - 8th July 2008, 05:27 PM
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likhte hain hum dard ko ek naye andaaz mein
ho sake to gam mein bhi muskurana seekh lo

aazmaaish ho rahi hai har ghadi insaan ki
ho sake khud ko zara to aazmaana seekh lo

muddatein jaati rahi waqt bhi thamta nahi
khud sambhalna aur dil ko jalaana seekh lo

koshishon mein kyun rehta hai bebas
bebasi ko bhi khushi apni banana seekh lo

har taraf hai aag tishna aur jalte dil mile
aag ko chandni dhadkano se zindagi ab sajaana seekh lo

buhat buhat buhat achi laagi hai apki ghazal khas kar apka dosra sher tu buhat hi acha hai

buhat shukriya ise share karne ke liye hum sab k sath

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9th July 2008, 12:33 AM
thanks aap ko pasand aayi mujhe bahot accha laga
aap ka bahot bahot shukriya aapne apna waqt diya

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9th July 2008, 01:21 AM
hi salam
wowwwwwwww tishna bohut achi ghazal hai appki aisay hi likhte rahain app........ ok thanxxxxxxx 4r sharingggggg


New friends are like POEMS..
but old friends are like ALPHABETS...
donot forget ur old friends,
because, u always need ALPHABETS to read POEMS..

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9th July 2008, 07:21 PM
thanks a lot sanaji

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10th July 2008, 06:13 AM
Hi Tishna..

aapko phelii baar padhna naseeb hua .... aur aapki ghazal bhaut hi khoobsurat hai .... yu hi likhte rahye

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likhte hain hum dard ko ek naye andaaz mein
ho sake to gam mein bhi muskurana seekh lo

aazmaaish ho rahi hai har ghadi insaan ki
ho sake khud ko zara to aazmaana seekh lo

muddatein jaati rahi waqt bhi thamta nahi
khud sambhalna aur dil ko jalaana seekh lo

koshishon mein kyun rehta hai bebas
bebasi ko bhi khushi apni banana seekh lo

har taraf hai aag tishna aur jalte dil mile
aag ko chandni dhadkano se zindagi ab sajaana seekh lo
its very very nice really tishna ji

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10th July 2008, 06:50 PM
hi
kisi dard ko sambhal pana asan nahi.
haste hue pal ko sambhal pana asan nahi
zindgi me har koi dil me nahi bas pata
aur us 1 base hue ko nikal pana asan nahi
   
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10th July 2008, 06:52 PM
Unhe Lagta hai ki hum har chere ko dekhte
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10th July 2008, 06:54 PM
Phoolo ke bicch khade ho kar bhi khusboo ki kami hei
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Love very good - 10th July 2008, 06:57 PM
Phoolo ke bicch khade ho kar bhi khusboo ki kami hei
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10th July 2008, 07:00 PM
BAGO ME PHUL TO BAHUT HAI PAR
KAISE KAHE NAZAR AATI HAI UNME AAPKI SURAT
SURATE TO BAHUT DEAKHI HAI HAMNE PAR
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10th July 2008, 07:02 PM
Teri doori ka ehsaas jab satane laga.
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Jab bhi bhulane ki koshish ki.
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10th July 2008, 07:03 PM
Lamhe ye Suhane saath ho na ho,
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10th July 2008, 08:51 PM
hey thanks a lot aap ka bahot bahot shukriya

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10th July 2008, 08:55 PM
dheeraj ji thank you very much
kabhie kabhie insaan bahot kam likh kar bahot kuch bol deta hai aap ki tareef ki ek line main ne kam az kam 6 se 7 baar padi
shukriya yaar main aur accha likhne ki koshish karoonga
yahan itne saalon se SDc par hoon par koi aisa shaks nahi hai jis se main acche se waaqif hoon bas yeh zara sa kharaab lagta hai

aap ne jab itni tareef ki hai to main chahunga ki aap mere liye ek kaam aur karen mujhe koi subject den jis par main likhon mujhe dekhna ki kya main aap ke liye kuch likh sakta hoon ki nahin
zaroor madad karna meri aur koi accha sa subject dena
thanks once again

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16th July 2008, 08:57 PM
doston shukriya karam meharbaani
aaj kal busy schedule ki wajah se waqt nahi nikaal pata
lekin phir bhi aap sab doston ka pyaar dekh kar main
baar baar yahan aa jaata hoon thanks a lot

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16th July 2008, 10:32 PM
Ahat ahat intezar kar k dekhna.
Kabhi kisi se pyar kar k dekhna.
Toot tay hain khoon k rishtey bhi,
Galtiyan do char kar k dekhna.
Agar zindagi ka falsafa samjhna ho,
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17th July 2008, 09:20 AM
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18th July 2008, 10:08 PM
wow very nice

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