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Love aaj ek bichhada hua saathi - 4th January 2012, 07:47 PM

aaj ek bichhada hua saathi yaad aaya hai
jise main aksar dreamgirl kaheta tha

na subah ka pata tha na khabar shaam ki thi
har pal har lamha uski aagosh me raheta tha

uski hasi bachho jaisi aur gussa aag se tez tha
phir bhi us se baat kiye bina ek pal nahi gujarta tha

meri zindagi me aake jisne zindagi sawar di thi
uska pyaar khuda ki khudai se jyada achha lagta tha

kaheti thi kabhi chor ke mat jana jee nahi paungi
uski is baat pe saath zindagi bitane ke sapne dekhta tha

jaise waqt badalta gaya wo bhi saath badalti gai
phir bhi kambakht dil usi se pyaar karta tha

uski zindagi me kisi aur ke aane se khush thi wo
akela main kone me baith ke aansu bahata tha

kyu aai thi wo meri zindagi me jab jana hi tha use
bas yahi ek sawal apne khuda se karta raheta tha

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4th January 2012, 08:59 PM

TakhleeQ Ke Khayaalaat Behad Khoobsurat Likhe HaiN ... Krenil Ji !

AchChhi Peshkash ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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4th January 2012, 09:07 PM

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TakhleeQ Ke Khayaalaat Behad Khoobsurat Likhe HaiN ... Krenil Ji !

AchChhi Peshkash ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!

dil se sukhriya ada karta hu naresh jii aise hi saath dete rahiye
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5th January 2012, 05:04 PM

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aaj ek bichhada hua saathi yaad aaya hai
jise main aksar dreamgirl kaheta tha

na subah ka pata tha na khabar shaam ki thi
har pal har lamha uski aagosh me raheta tha

uski hasi bachho jaisi aur gussa aag se tez tha
phir bhi us se baat kiye bina ek pal nahi gujarta tha

meri zindagi me aake jisne zindagi sawar di thi
uska pyaar khuda ki khudai se jyada achha lagta tha

kaheti thi kabhi chor ke mat jana jee nahi paungi
uski is baat pe saath zindagi bitane ke sapne dekhta tha

jaise waqt badalta gaya wo bhi saath badalti gai
phir bhi kambakht dil usi se pyaar karta tha

uski zindagi me kisi aur ke aane se khush thi wo
akela main kone me baith ke aansu bahata tha

kyu aai thi wo meri zindagi me jab jana hi tha use
bas yahi ek sawal apne khuda se karta raheta tha

very nice feelings .................. !


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5th January 2012, 07:37 PM

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very nice feelings .................. !


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Love 6th January 2012, 05:49 AM

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aaj ek bichhada hua saathi yaad aaya hai
jise main aksar dreamgirl kaheta tha

na subah ka pata tha na khabar shaam ki thi
har pal har lamha uski aagosh me raheta tha

uski hasi bachho jaisi aur gussa aag se tez tha
phir bhi us se baat kiye bina ek pal nahi gujarta tha

meri zindagi me aake jisne zindagi sawar di thi
uska pyaar khuda ki khudai se jyada achha lagta tha

kaheti thi kabhi chor ke mat jana jee nahi paungi
uski is baat pe saath zindagi bitane ke sapne dekhta tha

jaise waqt badalta gaya wo bhi saath badalti gai
phir bhi kambakht dil usi se pyaar karta tha

uski zindagi me kisi aur ke aane se khush thi wo
akela main kone me baith ke aansu bahata tha

kyu aai thi wo meri zindagi me jab jana hi tha use
bas yahi ek sawal apne khuda se karta raheta tha

Krenil ji
bahot achchi koshish hai aap ki
ehsaas dil ke qareeb lage
daad qabul farmayen

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Krenil ji
bahot achchi koshish hai aap ki
ehsaas dil ke qareeb lage
daad qabul farmayen

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6th January 2012, 11:21 AM

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aaj ek bichhada hua saathi yaad aaya hai
jise main aksar dreamgirl kaheta tha

na subah ka pata tha na khabar shaam ki thi
har pal har lamha uski aagosh me raheta tha

uski hasi bachho jaisi aur gussa aag se tez tha
phir bhi us se baat kiye bina ek pal nahi gujarta tha

meri zindagi me aake jisne zindagi sawar di thi
uska pyaar khuda ki khudai se jyada achha lagta tha

kaheti thi kabhi chor ke mat jana jee nahi paungi
uski is baat pe saath zindagi bitane ke sapne dekhta tha

jaise waqt badalta gaya wo bhi saath badalti gai
phir bhi kambakht dil usi se pyaar karta tha

uski zindagi me kisi aur ke aane se khush thi wo
akela main kone me baith ke aansu bahata tha

kyu aai thi wo meri zindagi me jab jana hi tha use
bas yahi ek sawal apne khuda se karta raheta tha

kernil ji,

ek achhi koshish pe daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega....


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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6th January 2012, 01:17 PM

Krenil JI............! Aap Boht Meethi Meethi Yaaden Le Kr Bazm Me Aaye Hain...... Aap Ke Ahsaasaat Ke Liye Daad..... Yunhi Koshish Krtay Rahen....... Likhtay Rahen........Khush Rahen




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aaj ek bichhada hua saathi yaad aaya hai
jise main aksar dreamgirl kaheta tha

na subah ka pata tha na khabar shaam ki thi
har pal har lamha uski aagosh me raheta tha

uski hasi bachho jaisi aur gussa aag se tez tha
phir bhi us se baat kiye bina ek pal nahi gujarta tha

meri zindagi me aake jisne zindagi sawar di thi
uska pyaar khuda ki khudai se jyada achha lagta tha

kaheti thi kabhi chor ke mat jana jee nahi paungi
uski is baat pe saath zindagi bitane ke sapne dekhta tha

jaise waqt badalta gaya wo bhi saath badalti gai
phir bhi kambakht dil usi se pyaar karta tha

uski zindagi me kisi aur ke aane se khush thi wo
akela main kone me baith ke aansu bahata tha

kyu aai thi wo meri zindagi me jab jana hi tha use
bas yahi ek sawal apne khuda se karta raheta tha

bohat khoob...............................




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