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kuch sawal, Kuch jawab -- By Palak, Rohin -
20th September 2005, 06:57 AM
Hi Everyone,
Kuch sawal ... kuch jawab... phir sawal aur phir kuch jawab... yeh silsila shayad chalta hi rehta... magar bus kuch khayal aap sab ke samne hum dono ki taraf se.... Kabhi poochiyega apne pyaar se phursat mein... ya phir apne aap se.... *********************************************** kuch sawal, Kuch jawab.. Jab bhi udte panchi ko dekhti ho To kya sochti ho..? Ki kash mere paas bhi par hote Udkar tere dar par hum chale aate Jab bhi tum phoolon ko dekhte ho.. To Kya sochte ho..?? Ki phool nahi khoobsurat utna Jitni ki mere sanam tum ho Jab bhi behte jharne ko dekhte ho To kya sochte ho..? Ki beh jaon mein bhi is kadar Mil jaye tere pyaar ka samandar Jab bhi tum Bijli chamkti dekhti ho To Kya sochti ho..? Ki kash tum mere kareeb hote Aur mujhe bahoon mein samet lete Jab bhi tum Barste paani ko dekhte ho To kya sochte ho..? Ki bheegi bheegi tum khadi ho Chamkate hue payal muskura rahi ho Jab bhi tum Chaand ko dekhti ho... To kya sochti ho...?? ki chaand itna door kyon hai... Hum itne majboor kyon hai Jab bhi tasveer tum meri dekhte ho To Kya sochte ho? Ki nikal aao tum tasveer se Aur jud jao meri taqdeer se Jab bhi haath ki lakeeron ko dekhti ho To kya sochti ho..? Ki hoti ek lakeer Tumhare naam ki To saari khudayi bhi juda na kar paati Jab bhi sochte hain, Khud se poochte hai Ki kyon karte hain hum pyaar itna To Dil jawab hi nahi de pata Bus dhadakta hai ...dhak dhak.. dhak dhak -- Palak & Rohin *********************************************** |
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20th September 2005, 07:11 AM
While writing we both just couldn't control ourselves...
Jab bhi udte panchi ko dekhti ho To kya sochti ho..? phurrrr phurrrrrrrr phurrrr phurrr phurrrrrrrrrr Jab bhi tum phoolon ko dekhte ho.. To Kya sochte ho..?? Ki kash tum hoti is phool jitni khoobsurat To mera phoota naseeb bhi jaag gaya hota Jab bhi behte jharne ko dekhte ho To kya sochte ho..? Chalo doobki lagayein Chalo doobki lagayein Jab bhi tum Bijli chamkti dekhti ho To Kya sochti ho..? Hai tumhare gusse se kudrat bhi ghabraye Jab bhi tum Barste paani ko dekhte ho To kya sochte ho..? Acha hai tum nahi barsi ho Jab bhi tum Chaand ko dekhti ho... To kya sochti ho...?? Ki kitna has raha hai chaand meri halat dekh kar Jab bhi tasveer tum meri dekhte ho To Kya sochte ho? Acha hai tasveer mein hi ho Jab bhi haath ki lakeeron ko dekhti ho To kya sochti ho..? Acha hai meri lakeeron mein tum nahi ho... Tabhi mein sochon mein itna dhanvan kyon hoon Jab bhi sochte hain, Khud se poochte hai Ki kyon karte hain hum pyaar itna Abhi tak koi aur mila nahi re.... Palak kehti thi... tum itna mushkil sawal kyon poochte ho Mein to itna aasan poochti hoon Rohin Kehta tha.. Mushkil sawal poochne ke liye ....... Palak kehti thi... Shut up....hehehehehehe -------------------- lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol lol ----------------------- |
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20th September 2005, 07:12 AM
Dear Palak and Rohin
Wah! kyabaat hai dosto! behad khoobsurat i like them all....i cant say which one..aapne sare sawaal jawaab likh diye....jo ye nadaan dil pucha hai samajhta hi nahi bas....very good i really liked it  likhtey rahiye i really liked this post Dil Se Luv ya Both Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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20th September 2005, 07:13 AM
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hehehhe gol gol tood good Luv ya Both Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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20th September 2005, 07:31 AM
Jab bhi udte panchi ko dekhti ho
To kya sochti ho..? Ki kash mere paas bhi par hote Udkar tere dar par hum chale aate Kya baat hai...? Jab bhi tum phoolon ko dekhte ho.. To Kya sochte ho..?? Ki phool nahi khoobsurat utna Jitni ki mere sanam tum ho Well said....! Jab bhi behte jharne ko dekhte ho To kya sochte ho..? Ki beh jaon mein bhi is kadar Mil jaye tere pyaar ka samandar Beauifulll.....! Jab bhi tum Bijli chamkti dekhti ho To Kya sochti ho..? Ki kash tum mere kareeb hote Aur mujhe bahoon mein samet lete Waaah... kya baat kahi hai....! Jab bhi tum Barste paani ko dekhte ho To kya sochte ho..? Ki bheegi bheegi tum khadi ho Chamkate hue payal muskura rahi ho Waaaaaaaaahhh....! Jab bhi tum Chaand ko dekhti ho... To kya sochti ho...?? ki chaand itna door kyon hai... Hum itne majboor kyon hai hmmmmmmmmmm......! Jab bhi tasveer tum meri dekhte ho To Kya sochte ho? Ki nikal aao tum tasveer se Aur jud jao meri taqdeer se Kaash........! Jab bhi haath ki lakeeron ko dekhti ho To kya sochti ho..? Ki hoti ek lakeer Tumhare naam ki To saari khudayi bhi juda na kar paati So true.....! Jab bhi sochte hain, Khud se poochte hai Ki kyon karte hain hum pyaar itna To Dil jawab hi nahi de pata Bus dhadakta hai ...dhak dhak.. dhak dhak Well said again...! Dearest Rohin and Palak, Bahut hi pyaara likha hai tum dono ne milkar...Evry word has been beautifully expressed....! Pehli baar tum dono ko milkar ishq pyaar pe likhte hue  Not bad...Mujhe to bahut pasand aayi tumhari yeh koshish...! Aise hi likhte rhao.. tab tak main zara comic version padh looon Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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20th September 2005, 07:36 AM
Jab bhi udte panchi ko dekhti ho
To kya sochti ho..? phurrrr phurrrrrrrr phurrrr phurrr phurrrrrrrrrr Lolzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz....! furr furr hehe Jab bhi tum phoolon ko dekhte ho.. To Kya sochte ho..?? Ki kash tum hoti is phool jitni khoobsurat To mera phoota naseeb bhi jaag gaya hota Sahi hai.... ! Jab bhi behte jharne ko dekhte ho To kya sochte ho..? Chalo doobki lagayein Chalo doobki lagayein Lagao lagao...magar dhyaan se Jab bhi tum Bijli chamkti dekhti ho To Kya sochti ho..? Hai tumhare gusse se kudrat bhi ghabraye Gussaa... Its injurious to health...  Jab bhi tum Barste paani ko dekhte ho To kya sochte ho..? Acha hai tum nahi barsi ho he he .. yeh barasti to tumhara kya hota...! Jab bhi tum Chaand ko dekhti ho... To kya sochti ho...?? Ki kitna has raha hai chaand meri halat dekh kar nice one...! Jab bhi tasveer tum meri dekhte ho To Kya sochte ho? Acha hai tasveer mein hi ho sahi hai...! Jab bhi haath ki lakeeron ko dekhti ho To kya sochti ho..? Acha hai meri lakeeron mein tum nahi ho... Tabhi mein sochon mein itna dhanvan kyon hoon hmmmmmmmmm......! Jab bhi sochte hain, Khud se poochte hai Ki kyon karte hain hum pyaar itna Abhi tak koi aur mila nahi re.... hahahahahaha.... Bhai log yeh version bhi badiya thha...Infact this one was beter...Aise hi likhte raho... Do take care of urself... Keep Smiling Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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20th September 2005, 06:40 PM
hey palak n rohin
it was really wonderful to read...... first one was amazin and the second version was quite funny both were very nice and i liked this one a lott Jab bhi tasveer tum meri dekhte ho To Kya sochte ho? Ki nikal aao tum tasveer se Aur jud jao meri taqdeer se take care both of u luv u Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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20th September 2005, 07:59 PM
bhaiya.........
ek dum romantic ke baad humorous....!!!! kya baat hai yaar......... hans hans ke lot-pot ho gayi main doosra version padhkar...... but jo creation hai........its outstanding.......... try maarungi real life me.....dekhte hain wats the reply..... and thanx 2 u both......... luv ya, KaSaK........... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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20th September 2005, 08:20 PM
Rohin & Palak,
Fabulous! Like the second one as well. Likhte raho aur khush raho! |
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20th September 2005, 08:22 PM
bhaiya maine to kai baar kaha hai ki do log jab bhi kuch mil kar likhte hain to mujhe bahut ahcha lagta hai.aur ye wali bhi mujhe kaafi ahchi lagi.aur bhaiya aaj kal aapki jo bhi post aa rahi hai unka naya pan dekh kar to bas dil yahi kehta hai ki main bhi kash kabhi aisa likh paun.bas yunhi likhte rahiye aap.
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20th September 2005, 09:45 PM
Dearest Priya,
Chal tere do reply hain ek ka jawaab hum dete hain doosre ka rohin denge...hehe... Serious waale ka hum dete hain...are yara uhin mood kiya isliye likh diya...waise sahi mai do log likhte hain to hamesha accaha likhte hain...dekh humari wajah se rohin ne kitna acacha likha hai... lolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll luv ya palak and rohin =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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21st September 2005, 09:40 AM
bahut pyaare sawaal aur awesome jawaab...... pyaar sach me kya kya nahi kehlwa deta...both of u ...gr888888 job...... palak madamm...bahut achheee..... n mr. rohin.... aapke baare me to kya kahe..... khayaal rakhna apna ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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22nd September 2005, 09:36 AM
nice work
palak n rohin .. palak well said unknow i007 well not exactlly u know palak luv ya palak later rohin |
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23rd September 2005, 10:31 AM
Hello Rohin and Palak
A very good effort made by both of you.........sawaal bhi khaoobsurat hain aur jawab bhi........ di ki tahe-dil se daad kabul karna.........Tumhare yeh rachna dekh mughey apni ek rachna ke kuch lafz yaad aa gaye.....would like to share few lines of that rachna.......... Neele Amber mein do panchiyon ko dekh Ek Safer par main chal padi Anjani si kachi sadak par main chal padi..... Apney ghar ki dager par main chal padi Keep writing and the combined efforts take more efforts and u both have beautifully expressed ur imaginations in the poetry. Keep Smiling Take care di |
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23rd September 2005, 12:29 PM
Palak Rohin...Bahhot achha laga padh kar dil behel gaya..kuch halka ho gaya...thx so much both of u!
tc komal |
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