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Dillagi bhi humaari raas aati nahin kisi ko... - 5th July 2015, 01:29 PM

Kal ek dost se baat karte huwe, uski bhaavnaaon ko sun kucch khayal aa gaye dimaag me, wahi likhne ki koshish ki hai.

Kucch kehden hum, sab log bigadh jaate hain
Hum hain ke sabki sunkar bhi muskuraate hain

Dekh paate nahin kisi apne ki aankh me aansoo
Patthar dil par har baar rakhaa paate hain

Dillagi bhi humaari raas aati nahin kisi ko
Ek hum jo dard chhupa sabko hansaate hain

Ji karta hai ji khol ke ro loon ek baar
Par kambakht yeh aansu bhi nahin aate hain

Kaash kisi roz koi humko bhi manaale aakar
Har baar kyun hum khud hi maan jaate hain

Dikhta nahin kucch us bebaak chehre ke peeche
Dard mardon ko bhi lekin utne hi sataate hain


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5th July 2015, 01:32 PM

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Kal ek dost se baat karte huwe, uski bhaavnaaon ko sun kucch khayal aa gaye dimaag me, wahi likhne ki koshish ki hai.

Kucch kehden hum, sab log bigadh jaate hain
Hum hain ke sabki sunkar bhi muskuraate hain

Dekh paate nahin kisi apne ki aankh me aansoo
Patthar dil par har baar rakhaa paate hain

Dillagi bhi humaari raas aati nahin kisi ko
Ek hum jo dard chhupa sabko hansaate hain

Ji karta hai ji khol ke ro loon ek baar
Par kambakht yeh aansu bhi nahin aate hain

Kaash kisi roz koi humko bhi manaale aakar
Har baar kyun hum khud hi maan jaate hain

Dikhta nahin kucch us bebaak chehre ke peeche
Dard mardon ko bhi lekin utne hi sataate hain
bahut khoob pulkit bhai wah har ashar sundar hai.......
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath


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5th July 2015, 10:07 PM

Waahh pulkit jiii bahut khoob ehsason ko alfaz diye hain is baar aapne.......dil se daad...likhte rahiye...



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6th July 2015, 07:08 AM

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Kal ek dost se baat karte huwe, uski bhaavnaaon ko sun kucch khayal aa gaye dimaag me, wahi likhne ki koshish ki hai.

Kucch kehden hum, sab log bigadh jaate hain
Hum hain ke sabki sunkar bhi muskuraate hain

Dekh paate nahin kisi apne ki aankh me aansoo
Patthar dil par har baar rakhaa paate hain

Dillagi bhi humaari raas aati nahin kisi ko
Ek hum jo dard chhupa sabko hansaate hain

Ji karta hai ji khol ke ro loon ek baar
Par kambakht yeh aansu bhi nahin aate hain

Kaash kisi roz koi humko bhi manaale aakar
Har baar kyun hum khud hi maan jaate hain

Dikhta nahin kucch us bebaak chehre ke peeche
Dard mardon ko bhi lekin utne hi sataate hain
Are bhai kaunse dost hai jo itna kehar dhaane par majboor kar rahe hai humhe bhi to batao?? Bahut khoob likha hai yunhi likhte raho.....



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Kal ek dost se baat karte huwe, uski bhaavnaaon ko sun kucch khayal aa gaye dimaag me, wahi likhne ki koshish ki hai.

Kucch kehden hum, sab log bigadh jaate hain
Hum hain ke sabki sunkar bhi muskuraate hain

Dekh paate nahin kisi apne ki aankh me aansoo
Patthar dil par har baar rakhaa paate hain

Dillagi bhi humaari raas aati nahin kisi ko
Ek hum jo dard chhupa sabko hansaate hain

Ji karta hai ji khol ke ro loon ek baar
Par kambakht yeh aansu bhi nahin aate hain

Kaash kisi roz koi humko bhi manaale aakar
Har baar kyun hum khud hi maan jaate hain

Dikhta nahin kucch us bebaak chehre ke peeche
Dard mardon ko bhi lekin utne hi sataate hain


Dear Pulkit..........ehsaas bahut kash-m-kash wale lge, aapke ehsaas padkar aise lga jaise dil aur majboori ne pakad rakha hai. gazal ki hi baat ki jaaye to bahut accha likha hai, yu hi likhtey rhiye aur yu hi regular aate rhiye.

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6th July 2015, 10:29 AM

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Kal ek dost se baat karte huwe, uski bhaavnaaon ko sun kucch khayal aa gaye dimaag me, wahi likhne ki koshish ki hai.

Kucch kehden hum, sab log bigadh jaate hain
Hum hain ke sabki sunkar bhi muskuraate hain

Dekh paate nahin kisi apne ki aankh me aansoo
Patthar dil par har baar rakhaa paate hain

Dillagi bhi humaari raas aati nahin kisi ko
Ek hum jo dard chhupa sabko hansaate hain

Ji karta hai ji khol ke ro loon ek baar
Par kambakht yeh aansu bhi nahin aate hain

Kaash kisi roz koi humko bhi manaale aakar
Har baar kyun hum khud hi maan jaate hain

Dikhta nahin kucch us bebaak chehre ke peeche
Dard mardon ko bhi lekin utne hi sataate hain


waahhh waahh kya abaat hai pulkit bhai.......... bahut hi khoob peshkash huii aapki is baar bhii..........

Kaash kisi roz koi humko bhi manaale aakar
Har baar kyun hum khud hi maan jaate hain

ye line bahut areeb rahii dil ke... likhte rahen...

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Shukriya doston! Aap logon ka hi kamaal hai aah pe bhi waah waah karte hain Thanks for all the nice words


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