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dosto.n jaise kii title se aap samjh gaye ho.nge , kii aap ko kya akarna hai?
aap ko apne pasandidah aashaar likhane hai, woh chaahe kisii bhii shaayar kaa ho.. to shuruaat mai.n hee karta huu.n
vo dil hi kya tere milne ki jo dua na kare
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Aapne shayar ka naam mention nahin kiya..shayad Qateel sifai ji ka likha hua hain...I am not sure....
Mujhe yeh sher bahut pasand hain..yeh sanjoo ne likha hain......usne sirf do hi sher likhe the..mujhe kaha tha ho sake to kabhi mere liye complete karna par sorry sanju..main na kar payi...
a^e kafir tujhsa humne nahi dekha
tera khuda ba-khuda humne nahi dekha..
tujhe pathar mai nazar aata hai sab kuch
kabhii a^esa ho khuda humne nahi dekha..
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yaaro kisii qaatil se kabhii pyaar na maa.Ngo
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Tanha hu to rehne de tanha mujhko u hi
Jalne me bhi mazaa hain jalne de mujhko u hi
kisne likha hain yaad nahin.....
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yaade^n maazii azaab hai yaarab
chiiN le koii aakar haafizaa meraa...
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vo aaye ghar me.n hamaare Khudaa kii qudrat hai
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7th October 2007, 02:09 AM
Kisi ki yaad aanay per
bohat se log rotay hain
k rona ik rawayat hai...
rawayat tor jata hon
tumhari yaad aanay per
main akser muskurata hoon...
Ek se musaafir hain, Ek sa muqaddar hai...
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jal ke aashiyaan apna, khaak ho chuka kab ka
aaj tak yeh aalam hai roshani se darte hai
jab na hosh tha hum ko, dushmani se darte the
ab jo hosh aaya hai, dosti se darte hai
-Khumaar Baarabankwi
one more sher
ab meri mohabbat ko nahi iski bhi parwaa
woh yaad mujhe karte haiN ya bhool gaye hai
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15th October 2007, 12:24 PM
Kabhi kisi ko mukaamal jahaN nahi milta,
kahi zameeN to kahi aasmaaN nahi milta,
tere jahaN meiN aisa nahi ki pyar na ho,
jaha umeed ho eski waha nahi milta,
buja saka hai bhala kaun waqt ke sholey,
yeh aise aag hai jis meiN dua.N nahi milta.......
yeh gazal film ahista ahista ki hai aur eske writer shayad NIDA FAZILI ji haiN, not sure. par mujhe behadddddd pasand haiN yeh chand sher.
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Ashaar jo Maham ki zindagi ki sab se khubsoorat haqeeqat bhi hein aur buahat ache bhi lagte hein hamae
Haazir kar rahe hein
Dil in ashaar ko akcar gungunata hoa pata hai beirada
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22nd October 2007, 02:32 PM
ai mere ham-nashii.n chal kahii.n aur chal is chaman me.n ab apanaa guzaaraa nahii.n
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zindgi yu hue basar tanha,
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apne saye se chonk jate haiN,
umr gujri hai es kadar tanha,
din gujrata nahi hai logo.n mein
raat hoti nahi basar tanha..
mujhe behad apni c lagti hai yeh gazal....apni zindgi ke kareeb si lagti hai yeh gazal, mere dard ki saheli si lagti hai yeh gazal....!
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Silsile tod gaya vo sabhi jaate jaate
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Kabhi kisi ko mukaamal jaha nahi milta,
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tere jaha.n mein aisa nahi ki pyar na ho,
jaha umeed ho eski waha nahi milta....
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Manzielen durr bhi hain manzilen nazadik bhi hain
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woh ek dard jo mera hai tumhara bh..
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tere bager koi pal guzar nahi pata..
tere bager ek umra ko guzara bhi...
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humare shouk ki ye intaah thi..
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umr bhar re.ngate rahane kii sazaa hai jiinaa
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Yeh kahaan ki dosti hai ke bane hain dost naaseh
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Jahaan diwaane do milkar sanam ki baat karte hain..
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yeh masaa'il-e-tasavvuf, yeh tira bayaan, "Ghalib!"
tujhe ham wali samajhte jo na baada_Khowaar hota
shaa'ir kaa naam mujhe pataa nahiiN
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MuKhlis bhai .... Yeh na thi hamari Qismat ... ke Ghalib ka shaa'ir yaad hota
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Tamaam umr kahaaN koi saath detaa hai
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Guzaren jo mere ghar se to ruk jayen sitare
Is tarah meri rat ko chamkao kisi din
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25th May 2008, 02:33 PM
Eh aasmaa.n wale zamee.n par uttar kar dekh,
hoti hai kaya judai tu bhi bichad kar dekh.......
wah wah its really great shayri. You can see reproduction of these things in Klimt reproductions monet, Van Gogh reproductions, etc.
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ibadat bhi khuda hai,bagavat bhi khuda hai
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bata e louh e kalam chin gayi to kya gam hai
ki khoon e dil me ungliya dubo li hamne
(sayar ka naam nahi pata)
''baagi'' sahab ye she'r Faiz Ahmad ''Faiz'' sahab ka hai aour iskii asl shakl kuchh yooN hai....
mata-e-loh-o-qalam chhin gayii, to kya gham hai
ki khoon-e-dil meN dubo lii haiN ungaliyaaN maiN ne
''Faiz''
mazahab ko_ii lauTaale aur uskii jagah de-de
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ab ye mausam merii pahchaan talab karte haiN
jab maiN aaya thaa yahaN taaza hawaa laaya thaa
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yaad bhi kuch esa hi hai agar kuch aage peeche ho gaya ho to bataiyega.sukriya.
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din bhii guzaarnaa hai taRhap kar isii tarah
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saaya hai kam khajoor ke ooNche darakht ka
ummiid baaNdhiye na baRhe aadamii ke saath
''Kaif'' Bhopali
mazahab ko_ii lauTaale aur uskii jagah de-de
taHzeeb saleeke kee, insaan qareene ke
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saaya hai kam khajoor ke ooNche darakht ka
ummiid baaNdhiye na baRhe aadamii ke saath
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daayam paDa huaa tere dar par naheeN hooN maiN
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Ik karb e wafa musalsal mujhe sone nahi deta
dil sabar ka aadi kabhi rone nahi deta
main uska hoon ye raaz to woh jaan gaya hai
woh kis ka hai ahsaas ye hone nahi deta
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
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jinke liye ham mar gaye unka ye haal hai
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