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Post Baitbaazi-e-Dard - 18th January 2004, 02:54 PM
All Shayri Frenz Adaab,
Ham Yahan par ek naya thread shuroo kar rahe hain,Baitbaazi-e-Dard, aap sab se guzaarish hai ki is mein shirkat farmaa kar lutfandoz hon.....

There is only single rule ki aapko sirf Dard par hi sher likhna hai.

Chaliye Taajdaar-e-Sukhanwari,"Mirza Ghalib" ke sher se hi shuruaat karte hain......

Dard se mere hai tujhko beqaraari haaye haaye
kyaa huaa zaalim teri Ghafalatashi'aari haaye haaye

tere dil mein gar na tha aashob-e-Gham kaa hausalaa
tuu ne phir kyun ki thi meri Gham-gusaari haaye haaye

Mirza Ghalib

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18th January 2004, 03:57 PM
QayaMaT Kuch is TaRaH..... PesH Hai

HukuM HakeeM ka hai FaryaaD JawaNi Ruk jaye
DiL ki BehTi Huyi GanGa ki RvaNi Ruk Jaye

KaoM Kahti hai Hawa Band ho Pani Ruk Jaye
PaR Yeh MumKiN NahiN Ab JosHe JawaNi Ruk Jaye

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jo dard mila hai madine se mila hai
allah ka isfan unke ghar se mila hai
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18th January 2004, 06:16 PM
Madhegum Sahab,

Dhyaan rakhen ki sher mein Dard ka zikr hona behad zaroori hai.......

Dard minnat kashe-davaa na huaa
main na achchaa huaa, buraa na huaa

jamaa karte ho kyun raqibon ko
ik tamaashaa huaa gilaa na huaa

kuchch to parhiye ki log kahte hain
aaj 'Ghalib' Ghazal saraa na huaa

Mirza Ghalib

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19th January 2004, 02:40 PM
Frenz reply in this thread plzzzzzzzz, ham intzaar kar rahe hain.
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19th January 2004, 05:51 PM
Sajda.......Gazal.

Dard se mera daman vharde yea Allah
dard se mera daman vharde yea Allah
phir chaahe deewana karde yea Allah
dard se mera daman vharde yea Allah

Meine tujhse chaand sitaare kab mange
Meine tujhse chaand sitaare kab mange
roshan dil bedaar nazar de yea Allah
phir chaahe deewana karde yea Allah
Dard se mera daman vharde yea Allah.......
Unknown writer.

*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
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20th January 2004, 02:28 PM
Dear Shimul, the writer of that nazm /ghazal is "Qateel Shifai" , ok ab aage barhte hain......

Dard ki had se guzarnaa to abhi baaqi hai
Toot kar meraa bikharnaa to abhi baaqi hai

paas aake meraa dukh-dard baatnevaale
mujhse katraa ke guzarnaa to abhi baaqi hai

Rashid Kamil

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20th January 2004, 02:42 PM
Aap bohot achha likhte hein, mein keya hu? Likhte rahiyega.
Ek gazal.

Aankhon meh jalraha hein kyu bujhta nehi dhuya
aankhon meh jalraha hein kyu bujhta nehi dhuya
khata toh hein ghata sa barasta nehi dhuya
aankhon meh jalraha hein kyu bujhta nehi dhuya
Choole nehi jalaye yea basti hi jalgayi
kuch roz woh gaye hein ab uthta nehi dhuya
ankhon meh jalraha hein kyu bujhta nehi dhuya.......



*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
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21st January 2004, 11:40 AM
Ankhon mein jal raha hai kyun uthtaa nahin dhuaan
Uthtaa to hai ghataa sa, barastaa nahin dhuaan

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21st January 2004, 03:16 PM
Dear Sahi Jee, achha likhha hein aapne. Likhte rahiyega. Shukriya.

Dilki baat labo par lakar aab tak hum dukh sehete hein
dilki baat labo par lakar aab tak hum dukh sehete hein
hum yeh suna tha ish basti meh dilwale bhi rahte hein
hum yeh suna tha ish basti meh dilwale bhi rahte hein
dil ki baat.......
Ek hume awaara kehna koi bada ilzam nehi
ek hume awaara kehna koi bada ilzam nehi
duniya wale dilwalo ko aur bohot kuch kehte hein
duniya wale dilwalo ko aur bohot kuch kehte hein
dilki baat.......
Habib Jalib

*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
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23rd January 2004, 01:55 PM
Please continue.......

*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
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2nd September 2008, 11:55 AM
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Loag To Dou Kori Bhi na Dein

Per Ham nay Bari Qemat deykar

Dard Khareda thaa

So ab Ussi Ko

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