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14th June 2015, 10:05 PM
Ek baar deedaar ho jaaye
Dil, tera bimaar ho jaaye
Tujhko mujhse pyar ho jaaye
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Waqt jo Thodi mohlaT de de
Tere husn kii daulat de de
Mujhko meri mohabbat de de
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Nazar nazar se pee kar dekhuN
Sajni tujhko jee bhar dekhuN
LaboN se laboN ko sii kar dekhuN
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Karne haiN kuchh waade tujh se
Rab jo mujhe milaa de tujh se
Nazdikiyaan baDha de tujh se
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
RishTe naaTe chhoD ke aaja
Saare bandhan ToD ke aaja
Ishq di chunri oDh ke aaja
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Ab kis baat kii duuri hai
Aisi kyaa majbuuri hai
Milna bohot zaruuri hai
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Basi hai Tuu nigaahoN meiN
Khada huuN Teri raahoN meiN
Kab aayegi baahoN mein
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Sagar Aashna
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14th June 2015, 10:30 PM
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Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Ek baar deedaar ho jaaye
Dil, tera bimaar ho jaaye
Tujhko mujhse pyar ho jaaye
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Waqt jo Thodi mohlaT de de
Tere husn kii daulat de de
Mujhko meri mohabbat de de
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Nazar nazar se pee kar dekhuN
Sajni tujhko jee bhar dekhuN
LaboN se laboN ko sii kar dekhuN
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Karne haiN kuchh waade tujh se
Rab jo mujhe milaa de tujh se
Nazdikiyaan baDha de tujh se
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
RishTe naaTe chhoD ke aaja
Saare bandhan ToD ke aaja
Ishq di chunri oDh ke aaja
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Ab kis baat kii duuri hai
Aisi kyaa majbuuri hai
Milna bohot zaruuri hai
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Basi hai Tuu nigaahoN meiN
Khada huuN Teri raahoN meiN
Kab aayegi baahoN mein
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
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Sagar jiii....kya baat hai....ek muskarahat chha gayi chehre par....itni pyari nazm likhi hai aapne ki bas kya kahoon...izhaar ikraar intzaar aur itna sara pyaar subhan allah...har ek stanza par dil se daad....bahut dilkash peshkash......
Likhte rahiye...aur mahfil me yoon hee ishq ki roshni bikherate rahiye......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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15th June 2015, 11:08 AM
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Sagar jiii....kya baat hai....ek muskarahat chha gayi chehre par....itni pyari nazm likhi hai aapne ki bas kya kahoon...izhaar ikraar intzaar aur itna sara pyaar subhan allah...har ek stanza par dil se daad....bahut dilkash peshkash......
Likhte rahiye...aur mahfil me yoon hee ishq ki roshni bikherate rahiye......
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Nawazish, shukriyaa, karam, mehrbaani.
Nacheez ka iss qadar hausla baDhane keliye tah-e-dil se shukriya.
SaaTh banaaye rakheiN, aur bhi achha likhne ki koshish karenagae.
Sagar Aashna
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15th June 2015, 01:09 PM
aap ne jo is bar afzon ko geet ka roop diyaa hai wo beshkeemtii khazaanaa hai SDC ki bazm me.....
aapko padhnaa har baar hi accha lagta hai sagar saahab.... hamaari khushnaseebi hai jo aap hamaare sath hain... aate raha kijiye....
Shaad....
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16th June 2015, 04:54 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Ek baar deedaar ho jaaye
Dil, tera bimaar ho jaaye
Tujhko mujhse pyar ho jaaye
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Waqt jo Thodi mohlaT de de
Tere husn kii daulat de de
Mujhko meri mohabbat de de
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Nazar nazar se pee kar dekhuN
Sajni tujhko jee bhar dekhuN
LaboN se laboN ko sii kar dekhuN
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Karne haiN kuchh waade tujh se
Rab jo mujhe milaa de tujh se
Nazdikiyaan baDha de tujh se
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
RishTe naaTe chhoD ke aaja
Saare bandhan ToD ke aaja
Ishq di chunri oDh ke aaja
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Ab kis baat kii duuri hai
Aisi kyaa majbuuri hai
Milna bohot zaruuri hai
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Basi hai Tuu nigaahoN meiN
Khada huuN Teri raahoN meiN
Kab aayegi baahoN mein
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
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kamaal karte hai aap....etna kuch chah kar bhi kehte ho ki "phir na kuch bhi chaahunga"
Jagdish ji.....bahut pyari pyari rachna hai, payre pyare ehsaas hai...hame yakeen hai jiske liye likhi hai aapne wo bhi bahut pyari pyari hongi
yu hi pyar bhare geet likhte rhiye aur hame bhi khush karte rhiye
duaon ke saath
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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17th June 2015, 12:30 PM
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Ek baar deedaar ho jaaye
Dil, tera bimaar ho jaaye
Tujhko mujhse pyar ho jaaye
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Waqt jo Thodi mohlaT de de
Tere husn kii daulat de de
Mujhko meri mohabbat de de
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Nazar nazar se pee kar dekhuN
Sajni tujhko jee bhar dekhuN
LaboN se laboN ko sii kar dekhuN
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Karne haiN kuchh waade tujh se
Rab jo mujhe milaa de tujh se
Nazdikiyaan baDha de tujh se
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
RishTe naaTe chhoD ke aaja
Saare bandhan ToD ke aaja
Ishq di chunri oDh ke aaja
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Ab kis baat kii duuri hai
Aisi kyaa majbuuri hai
Milna bohot zaruuri hai
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Basi hai Tuu nigaahoN meiN
Khada huuN Teri raahoN meiN
Kab aayegi baahoN mein
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
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likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
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18th June 2015, 08:32 AM
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Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Ek baar deedaar ho jaaye
Dil, tera bimaar ho jaaye
Tujhko mujhse pyar ho jaaye
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Waqt jo Thodi mohlaT de de
Tere husn kii daulat de de
Mujhko meri mohabbat de de
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Nazar nazar se pee kar dekhuN
Sajni tujhko jee bhar dekhuN
LaboN se laboN ko sii kar dekhuN
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Karne haiN kuchh waade tujh se
Rab jo mujhe milaa de tujh se
Nazdikiyaan baDha de tujh se
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
RishTe naaTe chhoD ke aaja
Saare bandhan ToD ke aaja
Ishq di chunri oDh ke aaja
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Ab kis baat kii duuri hai
Aisi kyaa majbuuri hai
Milna bohot zaruuri hai
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Basi hai Tuu nigaahoN meiN
Khada huuN Teri raahoN meiN
Kab aayegi baahoN mein
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
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Jagdish bhai
Mazaa aa gaya janaab, saari chahte bhi bayaan kar di aur kaha ki phir na kuch bhi chahunga
Bahut khoob janaab, yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
Qasid
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क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
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21st June 2015, 09:48 PM
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aap ne jo is bar afzon ko geet ka roop diyaa hai wo beshkeemtii khazaanaa hai SDC ki bazm me.....
aapko padhnaa har baar hi accha lagta hai sagar saahab.... hamaari khushnaseebi hai jo aap hamaare sath hain... aate raha kijiye....
Shaad....
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Aapki nawazishoN ka karzdaar huN saHb, aapke iss qadar pyaar se bohot himmat milti hai aur SDC par baar-ha aane par majbuur ho jaate haiN.
SaaTh ka yeh tasalsul jaari rakhiye. Apna khayaal rakhiye.
Khair andesh
Sagar Aashna
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15th July 2015, 10:43 PM
Dii, aapki nazar-e-karam paD gayii to meri koshish kaamyaab ho gayii.
yuNhi apna ashirwaad sar pe rakhiyega.
Koshish rahegii aur achha likhne ki.
Regards
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16th July 2015, 12:04 PM
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wah sagar bhai khoobsoorat ehsaason ko aapne sundar shabdon me piroya hai
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Bohot bohot shukriyaa jenaab aapki aamad ka.
yuNhi hausla baDhaate rahiyega.
Sagar Aashna
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21st July 2015, 04:44 PM
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Originally Posted by Sagar Aashna
Ek baar deedaar ho jaaye
Dil, tera bimaar ho jaaye
Tujhko mujhse pyar ho jaaye
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Waqt jo Thodi mohlaT de de
Tere husn kii daulat de de
Mujhko meri mohabbat de de
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Nazar nazar se pee kar dekhuN
Sajni tujhko jee bhar dekhuN
LaboN se laboN ko sii kar dekhuN
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Karne haiN kuchh waade tujh se
Rab jo mujhe milaa de tujh se
Nazdikiyaan baDha de tujh se
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
RishTe naaTe chhoD ke aaja
Saare bandhan ToD ke aaja
Ishq di chunri oDh ke aaja
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Ab kis baat kii duuri hai
Aisi kyaa majbuuri hai
Milna bohot zaruuri hai
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
Basi hai Tuu nigaahoN meiN
Khada huuN Teri raahoN meiN
Kab aayegi baahoN mein
Phir na kuchh bhi chaahuNga
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Wah wah kya rawaanii hai...... Bas nadi ke paani ki tarah behti chali gayi.
Kya mithaas hai misri ki tarah ghulti si chali gayi
Waah waah....hats off to u for this one
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21st July 2015, 05:13 PM
Sagar bhai
Namaste
Dil se daad aapko... bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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1st September 2015, 12:50 PM
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Jagdish bhai
Mazaa aa gaya janaab, saari chahte bhi bayaan kar di aur kaha ki phir na kuch bhi chahunga
Bahut khoob janaab, yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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Bohot bohot Shukriyaa bhai.
Aap saaTh dete raheN, koshish rahegii k likhte raheN.
Sagar Aashna
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1st September 2015, 12:55 PM
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Wah wah kya rawaanii hai...... Bas nadi ke paani ki tarah behti chali gayi.
Kya mithaas hai misri ki tarah ghulti si chali gayi
Waah waah....hats off to u for this one
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Nawazish keliye shukriya Sarika ji.
Itna achha to nahi likha hai par aapko achha laga, ye meri khushnaseebi.
Aate rahiye.
satTh dene keliye ek baar phir se shukriya.
Sagar Aashna
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6th September 2015, 12:55 AM
Hmmm...!
Itna kuch chahne par bhi aapne phir kuch na chaaha, waah waah, Sagar Ji...! Ashiqui mizaaj ka bhi kya kehna...!
Very romantic creation, I really appreciate it...!
Keep it up, ok...?
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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