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1st March 2007, 04:40 PM
Laakhi chhe kavita pan nathi khabar sa mate? Pream to tamane kario chhe pan nathi khabar kevi rite? Tamaara thi aalag thai chhata aalag nathi thai; Tamne gumavine jane mein maara swapan khoya; Tamari yaado haju pan mara maan ma rahe chhe; Bhulvani ghani koshis kari pan badhi vyarth; Jyara jyare aankho bandh kari tyaremein tame joya chhe; Jayaare kashu na sjiu tyare tamne j yaad kariya chhe; Saamay reti ni jem haath mathi nikadi gayo, Chhata mrugjal sama tame mane na madiya; Ghanu medaviu jeevan ma pan; Tamne gumavi badhu chhe gumaviu aaje; Mara pream nu to thau visarjan; Chhata tame jeevam "aashish" mai vitavo chhe evi ichha; Tamaru jeevan hamesha aanad mai bane; Aavi j chhe "mitali"ni tammana... Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste, Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse, KYUNKI Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste..... TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN JO AAB KHABHI JUD NAHI PAYEGA... 
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6th March 2007, 02:37 PM
Bahuj sundar lakhyu chhe tame Mitaliji... aavi ritnaj tame lakhta raho..!!
Aapno Mitra Ek PaTThar ki bhi taQdeer saNwaR sAkti hai, SharT yE hAi kE SaleKe sE TaRaShA JaYe...!!!!  --------------------------- |
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7th March 2007, 03:23 PM
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thank u so much. tamari dost, mitali Teri yaad me jeeye jayenge haste haste, Gilana hoga khabhi aapko humse, KYUNKI Aap ka har waada nibha jayenge haste haste..... TERE PYAR MEIN EK TUTA HUA KHWAB HU MEIN JO AAB KHABHI JUD NAHI PAYEGA...
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17th March 2008, 02:32 PM
tamari tarif karva mate mari pase koi sabdo nathi.......
lage raho mit4 u |
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16th May 2008, 12:05 AM
kuva ni gehraii mapvi;
ke tamari shairi vaanchvi; badhu ek sarkhuj che too good didi nick |
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10th August 2008, 04:49 PM
hii body i m mayank soni new in shayri .com shayer hai dile k ghayal hai mut satao inha zyada varna aanshuo she baha denge jag shara i donto hauto creat a may pag i hope u all tichh me
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24th August 2008, 12:33 PM
hi mitali how r u ?
i m prem from ahmedabad so what r u doing now ? |
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27th August 2008, 12:14 PM
roj jou chu hu tane ane tu jue che mane chatai puchto nathi
tane k tu kem jue che mane pan roj roj nu taara metrak nu jaane akdaave che mane, chataai puchto nathi tane k tu kem jue che mane pan ankho taari j kahe che mane k tu prem kare che mane. bye. |
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21st September 2008, 01:40 PM
nice writing mitali keep on by the way i m JYOTISH
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