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27th June 2011, 06:40 PM
Yuhi koi mil gaya tha sare raah chalte chalte.....is gaana se mutacir hokar kuch apne alfaaz me likhne ki kosish ki hai.....ummid hai aapko pasand aayegi...
Chale jaane kis raah, hum Chalte Chalte Behekne lage haiN qadam Chalte Chalte Yaqeen ki hadoN se guzarne lage haiN Na ulfat ka toote bharam Chalte Chalte Wafa ko meri tum wafa se nibhana Milay bewafa har qadam Chalte Chalte Huway harf zaaya jo phaili siyaahi Ruka kyuN na jaane qalam Chalte Chalte SitaaroN se aage ghazab ki hai dunia Milenge wahiN per sanam Chalte Chalte UjaaloN se keh do nazar na lagaayeiN Nasha raat ka na ho kam Chalte Chalte Ata jo kiye haiN zamaane ne humko Bhula denge saare wo gham Chalte Chalte Wo ik ajnabi yuN mila muskurakar Bana hamsafar hamqadam Chalte Chalte Kisi ne jo poocha mera saath doge To humne bhi kha lii kasam Chalte Chalte Ajab uljhi raaheiN mohabbat ki 'Zainy' KahiN kho na jaana, sanam Chalte Chalte Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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27th June 2011, 07:21 PM
Wafa ko meri tum wafa se nibhana
Milay bewafa har qadam Chalte Chalte Huway harf zaaya jo phaili siyaahi Ruka kyuN na jaane qalam Chalte Chalte UjaaloN se keh do nazar na lagaayeiN Nasha raat ka na ho kam Chalte Chalte Kisi ne jo poocha mera saath doge To humne bhi kha lii kasam Chalte Chalte Good One ... Zainy Ji ! Very Impressive Creation .... Nice Expressions .... ! Bahut DinoN Baad Sahii ... Ek AchChhii Ghazal Huii Saahibaa Ji !!! Tahe Dil Se DheroN Daad ....   YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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radhe radhe bahut khoob likha hai aapne bahut dino baad kuchh padhne ko mila hai aapki taraf se har ashar khoob rahe ye ashar to bas man ko bahut bhaya hai SitaaroN se aage gazab ki hai dunia Milenge wahiN per sanam Chalte Chalte UjaaloN se keh do nazar na lagaayeiN Nasha raat ka na ho kam Chalte Chalte duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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28th June 2011, 10:33 AM
Zainy Jee,
Ek lambe arse ke baad aap ki Ghazal padhne mili.. ek khubsurat ghazal par dil se daad.. har sher dil ko chhu gaya.... Aap ki Dost Purvi  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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Shukriyah Naresh ji.............. Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Bohat bohat shukraiyah Rajinder ji...mujhe khushi hai ke aapko meri ghazal psasand aayi... yuhi saath dete rahiye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Thanks a lot Purvi ji...... chaliye isi bahaane aapne SDC per kuch tou post kiya... Aap sab ke comments mere liye bohat mayine rakhte hain.. yuhi saath deti rahiye... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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3rd July 2011, 02:42 AM
Adaab Zainy Ji!
One thing which always stands out in your work is the flow and the rhythm! As if your work takes the reader on a free & smooth ice skating ride. And when it stops the inertia still keeps you movin. Some of our fellow members are also gifted wth the same ability! Anyways its not only the structure but also the depth that you 'somehow' pack in ya works that stands out. May the Almighty Shower More Success! Khush Rahein! |
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3rd July 2011, 07:55 AM
Wafa ko meri tum wafa se nibhana
Milay bewafa har qadam Chalte Chalte Huway harf zaaya jo phaili siyaahi Ruka kyuN na jaane qalam Chalte Chalte bahot khub Zainy Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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3rd July 2011, 03:39 PM
Yaqeen ki hadoN se guzarne lage haiN
Na ulfat ka toote bharam Chalte Chalte Huway harf zaaya jo phaili siyaahi Ruka kyuN na jaane qalam Chalte Chalte zainy ji, bahut khoob rahi aapki ye ghazal....uppar waale dono sher behad kareeb rahe dil ke.... daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega... aapka dost, vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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chalte chalte -
6th July 2011, 07:47 AM
zainy ji,
aap keh aheshashaat padeh, bahut gehere alfazh deekhe, daad hamari bhi qabool kijiyegha aur dua mein yaad kijiyegha. eik poorana saathi.. |
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6th July 2011, 10:39 AM
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7th July 2011, 01:12 PM
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8th July 2011, 09:25 AM
Zainy ji..... bahut khub likha hai apne.... yunhi likhtew rahe
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8th July 2011, 05:08 PM
zainy jee:
namaste! Ghazal bahot hi Khoob kahi hay... yeh Sher dil ke qareeb rahaa Quote:
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10th July 2011, 04:08 AM
daad...bahut daad...bahut achchi rahi gazal......baagi
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Shukriyah Praneeta............ Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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26th September 2011, 03:35 PM
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26th September 2011, 05:19 PM
Zainy Ji..........!
Kia Khoob Kalam Se Mutafeez Karwaya Hai Aap Ne.....! Hr Sher Hee Qabil-e-Daad Hai Or Kalaam Ki Rawani Pr Khususi Daad.... Andaz-e-Bayan Kamal Ka Raha... Yunhi Likhti Rahen Or Khush Rahen Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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Wafa ko meri tum wafa se nibhana Milay bewafa har qadam Chalte Chalte bahut acha hai ji .... kisi ne jo pocha mera saah doge ye israa sabse acha laga saani nahi zama iske hisaab se mai kuch yuN kahta ise .. kisi ne jo poocha mera saath doge chale saath uske fir hum chalte chalte yaa magar kaise khaate baham chalte chalte pata ni fir bhi jo oolaa hai aapkaa woh bahut acha hai koe saani hi nahi mil raha ek aur aayaa hai.. kisi ne jo poocha mera saath doge liyaa humne bhi fir na dam... chalte chalte SitaaroN se aage gazab ki hai dunia Milenge wahiN per sanam Chalte Chalte oolaa ko mai yun kahtaa ... sitaroN ke aage ki duniaa ajab hai milenge wahiN HUM sanam chalte chalte maktaa bhi bahut khoob hai ..... khaas daad uske liye repsss |
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30th October 2011, 06:55 PM
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30th October 2011, 11:13 PM
Behad hi Khoobsurat ghazal lagee aapkee zainy ji. Itne Gehrey ehsaason ko phool jaise alfaazon mein samet liya hai yehi iski khasiyat lagee. Aapko bahaut bahaut daad aur mubarakbaad.
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3rd November 2011, 12:32 PM
SitaaroN se aage gazab ki hai dunia
Milenge wahiN per sanam Chalte Chalte Zainy Sahiba... Boht khoobsorat ghazal likhi hai, be-had umdah... behtareen lafzooN ka istemaal! Quoted verse boht acha laga! DuaooN k saath ijazat, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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Bohat khoob -
3rd November 2011, 02:01 PM
Bohat khoob kaha hai zainy sahibah!
Daad qubuul farmaayeN! Quote:
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3rd November 2011, 11:49 PM
Chale jaane kis raah, hum Chalte Chalte
Behekne lage haiN qadam Chalte Chalte Yaqeen ki hadoN se guzarne lage haiN Na ulfat ka toote bharam Chalte Chalte bahot ache.. Wafa ko meri tum wafa se nibhana Milay bewafa har qadam Chalte Chalte Huway harf zaaya jo phaili siyaahi Ruka kyuN na jaane qalam Chalte Chalte waah SitaaroN se aage gazab ki hai dunia Milenge wahiN per sanam Chalte Chalte UjaaloN se keh do nazar na lagaayeiN Nasha raat ka na ho kam Chalte Chalte waah waah waah Ata jo kiye haiN zamaane ne humko Bhula denge saare wo gham Chalte Chalte Wo ik ajnabi yuN mila muskurakar Bana hamsafar hamqadam Chalte Chalte Kisi ne jo poocha mera saath doge To humne bhi kha lii kasam Chalte Chalte acha hai Ajab uljhi raaheiN mohabbat ki Zainy KahiN kho na jaana, sanam Chalte Chalte zainy ji, kaafi arse pehle ise padha tha..aaj phir padha..waqai achi ghazal hai..aur kuch sher to behad pasand aaye..god bless u always aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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4th November 2011, 01:07 PM
aaj fir se tumhair ghazal padhi...
achi lagi bas ek sawaal hai... hope ki bataogi... Huway harf zaaya jo phaili siyaahi Ruka kyuN na jaane qalam Chalte Chalte saani maiN.. Ruka kyuN na jaane qalam Chalte Chalte ruki kyN na .... jane Qalam ......... kyun nahi likhaa... i means ... gender mai thoda confusion hai... hope aap clear karenge... confusion ka mahol hai SDc pe kab se use door kare MOD sahibaa |
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OH DEAR!!...aapka confusion abhi door nahi hua..??....hahaha.. Well!!..let me put it this way...pencil likhti hai aur pen likhta hai....  .Ab jiskay haath me jo ho woh wahi likhega/likhengi apne kalaam me... ..Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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Are mujhe confusion hai.. ye kisne kaha ...Quote:
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Qalam means something which writes, ..be it a pencil or pen.. so u see , all confusions start right here.....  .....Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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4th November 2011, 04:09 PM
[QUOTE=zainy;432586]
Aapne hi kaha hai..oopar apne comment meiN padhiye...... [COLOR=SeaGreen] maine kaha SDc mai confusion hai..... sdc mai maiN hi to nahi hun na .. [COLOR=Black][B]Qalam means something which writes, ..be it a pencil or pen.. so u see , all confusions start right here..... .....ahahh qalam mera nahi chaltaa...... ab aap isko samjhne ke liye ... english mai translate to nahi karengi na.... urdu mai likh rahe hai to... example bhi iurdu mai deN..... uske grammar ke hisaab se.... isme english kaha se aa gayeee ..agar aap khane ke liye paneer maangte hai to... kya aapko biryani milti hai .... hahha waise aapse yahi poochaa thaa... ki Ruka kyuN na jaane qalam Chalte Chalte qalam ruka kyun... ruki kyun nahi.... ab aap qalam ki jagah pen likh leN... to aapke rebuttal kuch kaam kar jayeN.... barnaa ... qalam ke hi hisaab se chalen |
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