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suna hai........... - 11th August 2005, 04:09 PM

suna hai asar hota hai baaton mein,
tum bhi bhool jaoge do chaar mulaqaton mein,
humse rooth kar jaoge kahan,
tumhe paane ki lakeer hai in haathon mein....
   
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11th August 2005, 06:19 PM

Nice try...

I didn't find the stanza(s) co-relates each other.

It used to happen me when I started posting initallly, not sure I am upto that mark. Please keep posting.


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