Tasweer pe Tahreer- December.. -
4th December 2015, 11:13 PM
Namaskaar doston..
lijiye hazir hun is mahine ki tasweer ke sath..
mujhe maloom hai aap jaise hunarmand shayron ke liye tasweer ko shabdon me dhalna koi mushkil baat nahi...isiliye is baar bhi mujhe poora yakeen hai ki har baar ki tarah aap sab ki khoobsoorat tahreer mujh tak zaroor pahunchengi...
kuch buniyadi batein kahna chahoongi yahaan par..
1) aapke khayaalaat tasweer se milte hon, dhyaan rakhiye khayaal tasweer ke jitne nazdeeq honge, kalaam utnaa hi sabko attract karegaa....
2) Kalaam khud kaa likhaa huaa ho.. ham maazrat ke saath kahnaa chahenge ke kisii aur ka likha hua kalaam hame na bhejen, warna use is muqaable me shaamil na kiyaa jaaegaa.... as per the rules of TPT.
3) aapkaa kalaam kisii aur website, Facebook ya personally kisii ko bhii share naa karen, jo aap TPT me dene waale hain... aapke kalaam me takhallus ya shaayar ka naam bhi shaamil na kijiyegaa...
4) ek member ek hi post hame bhej sakta hai...... agar us kalaam me kuch mistakes ho gayee hon to wo sudhaarii jaa saktee hain...par kalaam change nahi kiya ja sakega...
5) isme Behar ki koi bandish nahii rakhii jaa rahii hai so that any one can take part.. lekin jo behar me likhnaa jaante hain wo iska istemaal kar sakte hain....
ek akhiri aur sabse important baat...
6)apne kalam aap sirf aur sirf mujhe pm karenge yani madhu ko...
ji haan pm ke zariye bheji gayi entries ko hee qubool kiya jayega..dhyaan rakhein...aapka koi sawaal koi confusion ho to kisi aur se share na karein...mujhe pm karke pooch sakte hain...
taki voting procedure fair ho...ummeed karti hoon aap sab ko sabhi points clear honge...
submission ka aakhri din hoga18 dec..
shubhkamnayein doston..
aapki tahreer ke intzaar me..
apki dost madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
Last edited by sameer'shaad'; 10th January 2016 at 10:15 AM..
I hope iss tasweer se bohut se ehsaas jaagenge aur shayar bhai behno Ki kalam farraate se dodne lagegi.
Koshish karungi Ki main bhi iss khoobsoorat tasweer par likh paaun.
Thank u sarika..khushi hai aapko pasand aayi tasweer..
Ummeed to mujhe yahi hai ki sabhi doston ko pasand aayi hogi aur sabhi participate bhi karenge.....
Aap ki entry ka intzaar rahega mujhe...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
Madhu bahut hi pyari tasveer di hai es baar, pichali saari TasveeroN se khaas tasveer hai yeh...yakeen.an es baar entries umeed se jayada aayeNgi
sabhi likhne waloN ko meri shub-kaamnaye.
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
wahhhhhhhhhhh waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh kyaa baat hai .............bahut hi sundar tasvir ...........dil khush ho gyaaa..................
shukriyaa es khubsurat tasvir ke liye.......... mere hisaab se SDC par post tasviroN mein se ab tak ki sabse achhi tasvir...........100000000000000000000000000000000 likes
are==are meri kalam kahaN hai........?????????/
maNzil pr nazar rakhtaa huN
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !!
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wahhhhhhhhhhh waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh kyaa baat hai .............bahut hi sundar tasvir ...........dil khush ho gyaaa..................
shukriyaa es khubsurat tasvir ke liye.......... mere hisaab se SDC par post tasviroN mein se ab tak ki sabse achhi tasvir...........100000000000000000000000000000000 likes
are==are meri kalam kahaN hai........?????????/
Aapne bahut tareef kar di rajeev ji...par khushi huyi ki tasweer pasand aayi apko..
Sath dene ka behad shukriya....
Takecare
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
Tasveer ko aapki tehreer ka intezaar hai umeed hai ab tak aapke entries Madhu tak pahuch gaye honge aur agar nahi to ab bhi chaar din baaki hai jaldi kijiyeGaa
Qasid
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