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tere sath hi sahar ki ye gali badalane ko hai -
23rd October 2006, 05:03 PM
num aankhe hain aanshu chhalakane ko hai mera dil aaj mujhse bichhadane ko hai kab mujhe ehsaas hua mujhe kuchh pata nahi aaj mere ehsaas jehan mein thaherne ko hai murjhaayi surat tumhari serd padane ko hai mere dil ke hajaar tukade samay kerne ko hai yah pal jo meri jindagi se chalane ko hai lagta hai ab dil ki dhadakan thamane ko hai tinke tinke jo jamaye the maine teri chaht ke berf vahi prem ki ab to bas pighalane ko hai tham na jaay dagar meri jindagi ke safar ki tere sath hi sahar ki ye gali badalane ko hai Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd October 2006, 10:42 PM
mere dost akant ji namaskaar
are wah kya kahu aapki ye peshkas ke bare me sach me abhot hi achhe ehsas ke zariye aapne ise pesh ki hai puri ki puri peshkas lajawab hai bahot hi achha laga ise padhke aaj aapko bahot din baad padha wakehi me umda likha hai aapne, aapse mujhe aur bhi bahot kuch sikhne ko milenga apna khayal rakhiyenga khus rahiye mere dost aapka dost dhaval |
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24th October 2006, 09:15 AM
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kab mujhe ehsaas hua mujhe kuchh pata nahi aaj mere ehsaas jehan mein dam todne ko hai sorry akant sahab aapke is sher main maine ek cheng kar diya pata nahi accha lagega ki nahi per mujhe behad accha laga................ wanki aapka kalam khoobsurat hai.... dil se daad kabool farmaiyega aapka ek begana sa dost dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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hi -
24th October 2006, 11:52 AM
yah pal jo meri jindagi se chalane ko hai
lagta hai ab dil ki dhadakan thamane ko hai tinke tinke jo jamaye the maine teri chaht ke berf vahi prem ki ab to bas pighalane ko hai tham na jaay dagar meri jindagi ke safar ki tere sath hi sahar ki ye gali badalane ko hai akant ji appko raj ka bhut sara pyaar or namaskaar.....ajj bhut dino baad appka kalaam parha......or meri subha ka khub surat aagaaz hua....bhut pyari gazal bani hai meri daad kabool kijiye...yu hee likhte rehna.....take care.......raj......... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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24th October 2006, 03:09 PM
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sakhi with wishes शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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Thank you very much... for appreciating me.. dhaval yah aapka badppan hai jo aapne mujhe etani terjeeh dee. well main apani her koshis kerunga aage likhane ki aap sabko padhane aur apane vicharo ko adan-pradan kerne ki.. aap bhi sada khush rahein...esi tarah aate rahana.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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sorry nahi kahate bhai...aapne jo change kiye hain jayaj hai.. eske liye aapko mera special thanks.. jaha tak tharane shabd likhane ki baat hai to maine koshis ki hai ki ehsaas hamesha ke liye jeevant bana rahe(thaher jaaye) jehan mein.. ehssas tutane na paaye.. kyonki ehssas per hi sari prem ki dhuri tiki huyi hai.. dam todane shabd pahale sher ke hisab se saufisdi satik hai...ant mein aapka bahut bahut dhanyvaad jo aapne apane kimati vichar diye.. aur mujhe margdershit kiye.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Namaskaar... main bahut dino baad hi kuchh likha hoon.. vah bhi online maine likha tha.. aapko pasand aayi aayi.. sach bahut khushi mahsus kiya maine. yah ghajal mujhe bhi achchhi lagi.. jab main likh raha tha tab laga ki main ese shayd pura na ker pau per luikh dala.. aap sabka pyar hamesha esi tarah milta rahega.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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27th October 2006, 10:51 AM
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kaisi hain aap?? bahut dino baad aap ke shabdo se rubaru ho raha hoon. Thanks that you have visited this page...aap aayi laga ki abhi bhi kuchh senior member shayri ke aate rahate hain.. vaise main sach kahu to bahut bada swarthi hoon. main apani dhadakano, dil apane aapko surakshit rakhata hoon.. main apani care khud kerta hoon.. koshis kerta hoon ki hamesha khush rahu..esliye hi to kaha ki main swarthi hoon.. aajakal samay ki kami ki vajah se kam visit kerta hoon site per.. apana kheyal rakhiyega.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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27th October 2006, 12:22 PM
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mein achi hun.haan kuch din ke liye mein yahn nahi aa pati thi lekin koshish yahi rahi ki mein iske sampark mein hamesha rahun.aap apni care khud karte hai janke acha laga. karni bhi chahiye kyun ki apka khyaal koi aur kaise rakhega jab aap khud apna khyaal na rakh sako. aap bhi apna pahle ki tarah khyal rakhiye aur khush rahiye. sakhi  शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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30th October 2006, 11:10 AM
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Akant jii, Namaskaar, aaj bohat dino ke baad aap ko paRhe ka mauqa mila hai... aap ki yeh khoobsuurat gahzal nazar nawaz hoi. wah kiya khoob ghazal hai. iske sabhi ash'aar behtareen haiN, matle se lekta maqte tak.. kis kis sher ki taareef ki jaye? meri dili dad aur mubarakbad qubool kareiN. Mayank |
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7th November 2006, 01:16 PM
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der se reply ker raha hoon.. eska khed hai.. aap punah es page per aayiN aur aapke vicharo ko padhker man khushi mahsoos kiya.. khus rahiye aap.. yahi dua hai... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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7th November 2006, 01:23 PM
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namaskaar, der se reply ker raha hoon.. vajah yah hai ki main kareeb one week out of station tha.. aur jab aaya to too much work load ki vajah se main website per nahi aa paya.. aaj hi aaya hoon site per to aapko reply ker raha hoon.. aapne es ghajal ko pasand kiya aur yathochit reply bhi likhe.. man prasann hoon.. bahut dino baad hi yah ghazal online likhi thi maine.. aap dosto ko pasand aayi to hausala phir badhane laga ki punah likhane ki koshis ki jaani chahiye.. promise to nahi per koshis kerunga aage bhi likhane ki.. aap ki daad aur mubrakabaad dono kubul hai dear.. aur meri shubhkamnaye sada aapke sang rahegi... Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd November 2006, 12:13 PM
Dosto,
main Kolkata se Kanpur shift ho raha hoon.. es vajah se shayd main shayri website per kab aunga kahana abhi mere liye muskil hai. aap sabhi log esi tarah se apani creation ko post kerte rahe. main naa bhi padh paunga to bhi meri duaye hamesha aap sabke sath rahengi.. sabhi ko anant shubhkamnaye aapka ek sathi Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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23rd November 2006, 01:32 PM
Namaskaar Akant Ji
Aaj bahaut lambey antraal ke baad aapne humey aapko parhney ka awsar diya hai. Aapki in panktiyon ne bahaut hee gehntaa se khud ka parichay diya hai. Inhe parhna bahaut bahaut accha raha. Yunhi hee jald parhney ka awsar dijiyega. Bitiya ko pyaar dijiyega aabhaar aapka vipin 
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30th November 2006, 08:53 PM
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ummid kerta hoon ki aap achchhe se honge. Bitiya thik hai aur main ab kanpur se likh raha hoon. bas etan hi likh paunga aaj. apna kheyal rakhiyega.. Aapka dost Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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1st December 2006, 06:13 PM
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Namaskaar, aap phir aaye achchha laga aur antraal zeyaadah lamba nahiiN raha... antraal jab chhota ho tabhi achchha lagta hai... ummeed hai kii aap kanpur meiN Theek se hoNge.. Mayank |
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8th May 2007, 09:50 PM
mayank ji
namskaar... aaj bahut dino baad mauka mila to kuchh pal ke liye site per aa gaya hoon.. aur dekha to aapka reply to bahut khushi mili.. well main kanpur mein achchhe se hi hoon net ki problem thodi ho rahi hai.. but jald hi ummid kerta hoo ki problem se nijat mil jayegi phir shayd regular milenge.. apna kheyal rakhiyega... Aapka Akant... Quote:
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1st November 2012, 04:07 PM
sach hi hai tere sath vo gali badal gayi....
Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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 YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th January 2013, 02:42 PM
Sir ji,
aapko bahut bahut dhanyvaad.. kyonki aapki vajah se apni likhi es ghazal ko main dobara share ker pa raha hoon.. apke hausla afzaai ke liye aapko bahut bahut saadhuvaad... Akant... Quote:
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19th October 2013, 12:55 AM
aaj kal vishvash nahi hota ki ek din maine hi ese likha tha.. vo bhi kya din the jab bhavnao ko shbado mein piroya kerta tha....
Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Bahot acchi peshkash hai Akant ji.... aisaa lag raha hai ke dil se likhaa huaa kalaam hai.. ehsaas hame aapke behad pasand aaye... likhte rahiye... Shaad... |
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20th October 2013, 01:42 PM
Jazbaat se labrez aashaar par daad Akaant ji
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bahut bahut dhanyvaad... sach yah dil se likhi gayi hai.. shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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aapki dost .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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1st October 2014, 11:04 PM
akant jee.....wonderful work done......nice flow of words......
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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Namaste !!! aapne etani purani likhi rachana ko padha aur apane viharo se mujhe rubru keraya.. sach dil se aapko dhanyvaad gyapit kerta hu.. es rachan mein kuchh parivartan maine kiye the jise punah yahi post ker raha hu... num aankhe hain aanshu chhalakane ko hai mera dil aaj mujhase bichhadane ko hai murjhaayi surat tumhari ab sard padane ko hai mere dil ke hajaar tukade kerne ko hai tinke -tinke jamaaye the teri chaahat ke jo berf vahi prem ki ab pighalane ko hai na jaane kab chhod de jindagi ko ab ye sanse meri tere saath hi shahar ki gali badalne ko hai.. Shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Akant ji...aap es rachna ko new version karke nya thread banaye...taaki sab pad sake .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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