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12th June 2010, 09:14 PM
Wajah.......(ek kaaran) bewajah nahi rota ishq mein koi wajah, aag ka ek dariya bhi to hai aise hi nahi doobta sahil pe koi wajah, lahrooN ka khatra bhi to hai kahan kar paya sagar ko khaali koi wajah, boond boond se bharta bhi to hai jab bhi dil chaha to kiya hasil koi wajah, inkar se wo darta bhi to hai dushman bhi mujhe karta hai pyar koi wajah, ladne se wo marta bhi to hai (isme ka.e batein maine apne vyaktitva ko le kar bhi kahi hain jaisa main hoon) mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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12th June 2010, 09:23 PM
kahan kar paya sagar ko khaali koi
wajah, boond boond se bharta bhi to hai premise jo establish kiya hai bahut outlandish hai phir bhi accha laga this is the best daad regards |
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13th June 2010, 01:41 AM
Secrect Bhai......
Kya baat hai lagta hia ab to aapko neta manna hi padeNga mujhe.....  Karan batao notice ko achche se bataya hai aapne.......   Bahut sahin achcha laga sabhi wajah durust hai sahab.... Aur yeh wajah to wakai behad umdaa rahi..... kahan kar paya sagar ko khaali koi wajah, boond boond se bharta bhi to hai Keep it up..... changes makes change the world.... Aapke likhane mein is tarha ki changing, bahut khoob lagi.... Likhate raho, Khush raho..... Khuda Hafez...... 
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13th June 2010, 12:09 PM
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aapke kisi comment par comment karna to suraj ko aankh dikhane ke barabar hai...............  phir bhi koshish ko sarahne ke liye dil se aapka dhanywad sath dete rahiyega....... aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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13th June 2010, 12:18 PM
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maine apne ek sher me kaha bhi tha kabhi main vade karte hi vade to.D deta hoon beech rah me karwa.N chhod deta hoon badlaav ka to main bhi shaukiN hoon janab sameer bhai yuhin apna sath banaye rakhiyega........... aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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16th June 2010, 05:56 PM
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superb creation dear... aapki batayi gayi saari wajah bilkul durust hai... lafzon me kaafi dum hai... aapki kalam to ghazab dhaane lagi hai... Allah kare aapki is be-khauff kalam ko kisi ki buri nazar naa lage... yuhi likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye..  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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17th June 2010, 10:28 AM
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aapko meri koshish pasand aayi mujhe accha laga jaan kar.........meri kalam ko kya kisi ki buri nazar lagegi.........wo kahte hain na ke jab paya hi hai shyam rang maine to kajal ka teeka kyun lagauN.......... aap ho na meri nazar utarne ke liye....... aapka mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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17th September 2010, 04:02 PM
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Tumhari gazal padhkar sach me bahut hi acha lga....thoda ehsaas, thoda dard, thodi khamoshi aur pyaar saaf saaf jhalak raha hai.....tumhare is kalaaam par dil se daad hazir. qubool krna..... tumhari gazal padhkar ek gazal yaad aa gai............ wo mujhse meri udasiyo ki wajah puchte hai kitne bedard hai raat ke sannate ki wajah puchte hai wo mujhse mere aansuoo ki wajah poochte hai kitne jalim hai baarish ki barashne ki wajah puchte hai wo mujhse meri pasand puchte hai kitne pagal hai wo khud apne bare me puchte hai wo mujhse mere rone ki wajah puchte hai kitne chalak hai mujhe rulane ki wajah dhundte hai wo mujhse mere wafa ki inteha puchte hai kitne bhole hai sahil par khade samandar ki gharai puchte hai aaj bhi jane kyun ye kambakht dil use pyar karta hai ek wo hai jo door jane ke raste dhundte hai Tumhari Dost Kavita Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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17th September 2010, 08:31 PM
bahut achhi bhaavpuran rachna hai aapki . dhanyabaad
07666027379,09041116001,09876442643, 09417142513,09914097007,09625494246 Mail: parveenkomal@parveenkomal.com www.parveenkomal.com/blog { BURA NA SUNENGE BURA NA DEKHENGE BURA NA BOLENGE ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE }  Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de }QadeerToopchi{ |
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17th September 2010, 08:32 PM
[QUOTE=secret admirer;396009]
Wajah.......(ek kaaran) bewajah nahi rota ishq mein koi wajah, aag ka ek dariya bhi to hai aise hi nahi doobta sahil pe koi wajah, lahrooN ka khatra bhi to hai kahan kar paya sagar ko khaali koi wajah, boond boond se bharta bhi to hai jab bhi dil chaha to kiya hasil koi wajah, inkar se wo darta bhi to hai dushman bhi mujhe karta hai pyar koi wajah, ladne se wo marta bhi to hai (isme ka.e batein maine apne vyaktitva ko le kar bhi kahi hain jaisa main hoon) hi bhai, or kaha ho mere secret admirer aaj kal, bahot dino baad ol aaya or aap ki is wajah se yaha aane ki wajah badh gayi hai. aap ki wajah pad ke tho kon sa dushman hoga jo aap se dushmani jaari rakhe. or batao kaise hain aap mujhe lagta hai bhul hi gaye hain main is waqt mumbai aaya hua hoon aur agle mahine Chicago ja raha hoon bhai plz. mumbai aao...na arif bhai aapki bahut tareef karte hain wo bhi apse milna chahte hain aur dad ko mat batatana main mumbai mein hooon plz. sambhal lena....ok bhai...bye |
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17th September 2010, 10:56 PM
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aur tu mumbai mein kya kar raha hai aur Arif bhi tere sath hai...hahhahaha kar le masti jitni karni hai nahi kahunga tere Dad se, tension mat le yehi din hain masti ke...(main shayad agle hafte ek din k liye mumbai aaunga) bahut khush hua main aaj tere comments dekh kar sach mein.. chal apna khayal rakhna, tera bhai, SA.... mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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18th September 2010, 10:20 AM
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Kavi....kahte hain bure waqt mein jo sath de wohi accha dost hota hai pichle kuch dino mein jo sath tumne mera nibhaya hai, mere apno ne bhi nahi nibhaya....ishwar har ek ko tum jaisa dost de... Aur ............kya kahun? hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm......haan, tumhari nazam bhi mujhe acchi lagi....main samajh gaya jo tum mujhe samjhana chahti ho  Tumhara Dost, ****** ***** mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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29th September 2010, 03:16 PM
Dear Secret admirer Ji!
Wajh aur imkaan ko khoob barta hai aapne. Aik munfarid takhleeq, hazaron daad qubul kijiye. (Waquif Ansari) Quote:
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30th September 2010, 01:05 AM
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...Dhanyawaad mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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30th September 2010, 02:31 AM
[QUOTE=secret admirer;410259]
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 07666027379,09041116001,09876442643, 09417142513,09914097007,09625494246 Mail: parveenkomal@parveenkomal.com www.parveenkomal.com/blog { BURA NA SUNENGE BURA NA DEKHENGE BURA NA BOLENGE ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE } Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de }QadeerToopchi{ |
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30th September 2010, 04:21 PM
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 ..bacche ki umar hai khelne aur shararat karne ki bhul gaye kya aap apne din.... mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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4th October 2010, 06:20 PM
Ehsaas acche lage Secret admirer sahab.................
Ghazal ki techniques ko follow karke likhenge tou aur bhi khoobsurat lagega aapka kalaam. Yuhi likhte rahiye Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th October 2010, 12:26 PM
bahut acha likha secreat ji aapne.....behad khoobsoorat ehsas..
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5th October 2010, 02:55 PM
aise hi nahi doobta sahil pe koi
wajah, lahrooN ka khatra bhi to hai kahan kar paya sagar ko khaali koi wajah, boond boond se bharta bhi to hai khoob, bahoot khoob................. path par kaante bahut hain tere par manjil par jaana too.ne dar na jatilata se jeewan ki isko saral banana too.ne pasat na hone paye honsle khud ka sahas khud hi juta le 
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5th October 2010, 05:08 PM
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woww...its just awesome........................i like it......good going.....  If you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it, change your attitude......
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5th October 2010, 07:11 PM
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waise umeed karta hoon kitab urdu mein nahi hogi... Namaste !!! mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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17th October 2010, 07:54 PM
kahan kar paya sagar ko khaali koi
wajah, boond boond se bharta bhi to hai Bahut Khoob ........ Secret Ji ! Very Very Impressive Indeed ! dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aage bhi ....khush rahen ... duaaon ke saath ....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th October 2010, 12:46 PM
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radhe radhe bahut khoob..................................... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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