Adaab shaad jee..
Aapki is kahani par kuch din pahle hee nazar padi meri..pahle to bahut shukriya ki ise samne laaye aap..aur hame padhne ka mauka mila....
Mujhe ummeed nhi thi ki 2 saal se zyada lage aapko jis kahani ko likhne me lage use main in 3-4 dino me padh loongi...
Par aapki kahani ne aise bandha mujhe ki bas fir nazar hee nahi hata saki..
Shuruaat bahut achchi rahi...
Fir jaise jaise aage badhi aur bhi dilchasp hoti gayi kahani..abba ka kadakpan amma ka pyaar..bhai bahano ki nokjhonk sab lazmi hai..
Aur mukhtaar ke nature me vaqt ke sath jo parivartan aaye vo bahut achche lage..ek ziddi ladke se zimmedaar pita banne tak ka safar bahut dilchasp raha..
Readers ki sympathy use zaroor milegi..
Kirdaaron ko bahut hee dilchasp andaz me introduce karaya aapne sab ke sab ankhon ke samne dikhayi dete hain.....khaskar ladkiyon ke kirdaar sabhi bade pyaare hain..unke naamon ki tarah..
Farha ke jane se thodi mayoosi huyi mujhe..par kahani ki maang thi to...
Fir kahani ko badi khoobsoorti se aage badhaya aapne...kahkeshan ka india aana aur vapas jana.. kahani ko nayi disha deta hai aur akhir me ek achche end pe le jata hai......
Kahaani mere dil ko chhoo lene me kammyaab huyi...meri ankhon me ansoo chalak padhe akhir me..aur muskaan bhi sath hee sath aa gayi chehre par........
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Muhabbat aur insaniyat ke rishon ko dikhati ye kahani...apne sheershak ko bakhoobi bayaan karti hai...aur aisa bilkul nahi lagta ki aapki ye pahli koshish hai...aapki mehnat aur lagan saaf jhalak rahi hai isame...
shayad jitni khushi hasil huyi ise padhkar use
Bayaan nahi kar pa rHi main.bahut sari tareef ke hakdaar hain aap....aapki gazalon ke sath sath..kahaniyon ke bhi fan ho gaye ham to.....
.bas dil se dher saaaaaari mubaarak baad aapko is dilchasp kahani ke liye...
Bas dil se yahi duayein hain ki aap din par din aur achcha likhein..logon ko entertain karein..
Khush rahein....