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लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो - 5th March 2013, 12:11 PM

लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो



लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो
जिधर से आया है उधर ही बढने दो
हो सकता है ये कबूतर आतमघाती हो
बेगानी शादी में दुल्ला बाराती हो
इस के अन्डों में भी ज़हर हो सकता है
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लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो



लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो
जिधर से आया है उधर ही बढने दो
हो सकता है ये कबूतर आतमघाती हो
बेगानी शादी में दुल्ला बाराती हो
इस के अन्डों में भी ज़हर हो सकता है
इस की गुटर गूं में भी कहर हो सकता है
बारूद के ढेर से पैदा हुआ ये परिन्दा नादान नहीं
इस्का कोइ राम नहिं कोइ रह्मान नहीं
ये गुटर गूं से मोहित कर देता है हमारे बिग बौस को
जिसके भोलेपन से सह्ना पडता है हमे बेहद लौस को
अपना मनमोहक कबूतर गुटर गूं की मस्ति में आंख मीच लेता है
और लोटन कबूतर काट देता है कुछ सर और प्राण खीच लेता है
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लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो



लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो
जिधर से आया है उधर ही बढने दो
हो सकता है ये कबूतर आतमघाती हो
बेगानी शादी में दुल्ला बाराती हो
इस के अन्डों में भी ज़हर हो सकता है
इस की गुटर गूं में भी कहर हो सकता है
बारूद के ढेर से पैदा हुआ ये परिन्दा नादान नहीं
इस्का कोइ राम नहिं कोइ रह्मान नहीं
ये गुटर गूं से मोहित कर देता है हमारे बिग बौस को
जिसके भोलेपन से सह्ना पडता है हमे बेहद लौस को
अपना मनमोहक कबूतर गुटर गूं की मस्ति में आंख मीच लेता है
और लोटन कबूतर काट देता है कुछ सर और प्राण खीच लेता है
Waaahhh Praveen saahab kyaa kehne... aapki adaakari ki baat hi alag hai... aapki kalam se kya kyaa lafaaz nikalte hain.... wyang ke upyog se aap teevr kutharaghaat kart hain aapki samajik samasyaaoN pe... bahot achi lagi aapki ye kavita bhi... likhte rahiyega

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Waah Waah Parveen Ji Bahot Hi Khub.............................................. .......


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लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो



लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो
जिधर से आया है उधर ही बढने दो
हो सकता है ये कबूतर आतमघाती हो
बेगानी शादी में दुल्ला बाराती हो
इस के अन्डों में भी ज़हर हो सकता है
इस की गुटर गूं में भी कहर हो सकता है
बारूद के ढेर से पैदा हुआ ये परिन्दा नादान नहीं
इस्का कोइ राम नहिं कोइ रह्मान नहीं
ये गुटर गूं से मोहित कर देता है हमारे बिग बौस को
जिसके भोलेपन से सह्ना पडता है हमे बेहद लौस को
अपना मनमोहक कबूतर गुटर गूं की मस्ति में आंख मीच लेता है
और लोटन कबूतर काट देता है कुछ सर और प्राण खीच लेता है
   
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लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो



लोटन कबूतर को अटरिआ पे मत चढ्ने दो
जिधर से आया है उधर ही बढने दो
हो सकता है ये कबूतर आतमघाती हो
बेगानी शादी में दुल्ला बाराती हो
इस के अन्डों में भी ज़हर हो सकता है
इस की गुटर गूं में भी कहर हो सकता है
बारूद के ढेर से पैदा हुआ ये परिन्दा नादान नहीं
इस्का कोइ राम नहिं कोइ रह्मान नहीं
ये गुटर गूं से मोहित कर देता है हमारे बिग बौस को
जिसके भोलेपन से सह्ना पडता है हमे बेहद लौस को
अपना मनमोहक कबूतर गुटर गूं की मस्ति में आंख मीच लेता है
और लोटन कबूतर काट देता है कुछ सर और प्राण खीच लेता है
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh.................... ..
Parveen saahab............................................ ......
Kya vyang kiya hai aapne ees kavita men................
behad khubsurti se aapne harek pehlu ko ees kavita men piroya hai.

aate rahiye aur aisee kavitaen likhte rahiye...............



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