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4th February 2005, 01:02 PM
pulkit...ji!!
Dhoom macha di apne toh...u know i ws waiting for ur reply back 2 all ur admirers...aur app kaha reh gaye they??...well... Derr hui aane mein tum ko shukra hai fir bhi aayee toh!  it ws gr8 2 read ur reply 2 evrybody.....  take care komal! |
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4th February 2005, 04:58 PM
Hi Shalini!
Appreciation bade shayaras ki ho yaa acche doston ki.. It always means a lot... I will cut your Chocoltaes and ICecreams to half as I have reduced some KG's after a lot of resistance.... Blessings I will keep with me always Cool Dude... Welll If u r talking bout my avatar.... It has quite some memories associated with it... Bass Meena didi ko iski yaad mat dilana  Saath deti rehna... I will keep Trying Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th February 2005, 05:01 PM
Sukanya Didi!
Yeh aapka pyaar hi hai..jo aaj kucch likha paya hoon... Aapko rachna pasand aayi khushi mujhe bahut ho rahi hai Tanhaai... LoL....Itna kahoonga I don tlike Tanhaai Apna khayal rakhna didi... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th February 2005, 05:06 PM
Mausam Dost!!
Well.. ab main kya kahoonn.. main to ud raha hoon hawa men.... This much of appreciation on my first effort.... Wel.. yeh to sabka pyaar hai mere liye... I know Shayri was okk sort of... Being my first effort... its close to me... but sill i know yaarr.....Well... Tum itne pyaar se keh rahi ho... I will definitely try to write from now on Neeche wali lines... Well Scaahi bataoon... Un lines ko hata do.. it will look very ordinary... I also liked them a lot... I know u r with me to encourage me always.... Apna khayal rakhna Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th February 2005, 05:09 PM
Parul!!
Arey yaar.. Bada Shayar vayar nahi yaar... Koshish kee hai kucch likhne ki... Accha laga tumhe bahut khushi hui... Saath banaye rakhna... Do TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th February 2005, 05:11 PM
Priya...
Aapko pasand aayi jaankar bhaut accha laga Mere paas vakt hi vakt hai acchi shayri ke liye... I tried to find your post but cud not get it... If u can pass the link plzzz Saath banaye rakhiyega TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th February 2005, 08:21 PM
ishQ karne ka shauk hai unko
nazreiN milate haiN chup chup ke ... pulkit bhai .. jo kahna ho saaf saaf kaho ye shayri ki zuban me kya batane ki koshish kar rahe ho .. Bhai pehli baar me hi itna asardaar likha hai ki padh ke dil khsuh ho gaya .. Der se aaya huN kya kareiN aadat ban gayi hai .. fir bhi Der aaye durust aaye .. tumhari yaad bahut aati hai ummeed hai ki bahut jaldi fir se mulakaat hogi .. baki Apna khyaal rakho |
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5th February 2005, 12:15 PM
Dear Akant Bhai!
Thanks a Ton for the encouragement....Aur sabse zyada mujhe kucch sikhane ke liye... Jo bhi changes aapne kiye hain... unhe padhne ke baad vakayi... Mujhe bahut accha lga raha hai... main inhe bareeki se note kar sudhaarne ki koshihs karoonga... Apna khayal rakhiyega --aapka bhaai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th February 2005, 12:21 PM
Talib bhai!
Woh aaye humaari mehfil me, kabhi hum unko, kabhi apni post ko dekhte hain.. Main nahi bata sakta aapko, ke kitna valuable hai aapka encouragement mere liye... Have a lot of regard for you...Aapkie zara-nawaazi se Dil pulkit-pulkit ho gaya hai....... Aapne aur akaant bhai ne jo bhi baatein bataayi hain, unko dhyaan me rakh kar hi agli baar likhne ka prayass rahega..... Bahut shukriya bhai... Apna pyaar yunhi banaye rakhiyega Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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Re: Pehli Koshish... -
5th February 2005, 12:45 PM
Tanhaiyon me zara muskurana, sochte rehana unki hi har baat
Behekte jaane se khud ko ab main naa rok payaa hoon Kaise kehdoon dil ki baat unse, kaise karloon izhaar-e-mohabbat Badi shiddat se kalam uthhayi thhi, lafz par chaar hi likh paya hoon... HI PULKIT sabse pehle to aapko bahoot bahoot mubaaraqbad dost..aapki pehli koshish ke liye. sach kahun to tumhari pehli rachna ko padh kar mujhe meri apni pehli rachna ki yaad taazza ho uthi,,,wo rachna bhi bilkool aisi hi thi jaise tumne kahi hai....bahooot naazuk jazbaaton ko kaha hai tumne ...khaas ka yeh 2 sher to bahooot ache ban pade hai...bahoot sachai se apna haal-e-dil kaha hai tumne. yun to mein jayada kuch nahin janta magar chunki tumne request ki hai mein yahan kuch baaton ki taraf tumhara dhayaan dilaana chaunga.....behat(meter) aur kaafiya ka dhayan rakhiye..aapki gazal mein in dono cheezon ki kami mehsoos hui...mein aapko link send kar raha hoon jisse aap yeh sab tafseesh se padh sakte hai. http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...&threadid=2125 keep it up....meri daad kubool karo. -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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5th February 2005, 05:45 PM
Rohin dost!!
Ur avataar was soo good.. why did u change it?? Get it back!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th February 2005, 05:55 PM
Chaand Bhaaii!!
Aapko dam nazarayaa to kucch baat to zaroor hogi isme ... U r encouragement do value a lot to me... Saath dete rahiyega Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th February 2005, 10:25 PM
Mere dil me chhupe hain kucch ehsaas, kucch ankahi, kucch ansuni si hai baat,
Woh baat kehne main aya hoon... Kya yaar baat kehne mein itni der kyu kar di.... Uska saanson se mehkana mere tan-man ko, aankhon aankhon me kar lena sau baat Uske is andaaz se dil ko ab main naa bachaa paya hoon Wahh...kya andaaz hai janab..(kaun hai jisne aakhir tumhara qatl kar hi diya) Tanhaiyon me zara muskurana, sochte rehana unki hi har baat Behekte jaane se khud ko ab main naa rok payaa hoon Ruko ruko yaar..itna bhi mat behko ki sambhaalna mushkil ho jaaye Kaise kehdoon dil ki baat unse, kaise karloon izhaar-e-mohabbat Badi shiddat se kalam uthhayi thhi, lafz par chaar hi likh paya hoon... Jhoote ye chaar lafj hai?? Agar ye chaar hai to jab jyada likhoge to humara kya hoga?? well dont mind yaar yuhi majak kar rahi thi..haq banta hai mera.. sach kahu bahut hi achha likha hai...meri sangat ka kuch to asar hona hi tha na...aur tum bura likh bhi nahi sakte becozz..u r a saggi...LIKE ME.. Har sher bahut khoob likha hai ..lagta hai kisi ne dil pe dastak de hi di hai...AAAh..at last..kuch to hua is golumolu ko.. Ab jaldi se uske baare mein bhi bata dena mujhe samjhe, take care,, and write more.. luv, pari |
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5th February 2005, 10:27 PM
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**Haan, pata tou hain**Khair, keya kahoun*Younhi Khush Rehna**Nice to know You could Catch...lol...*Mujhe yaad hain Hitler Jee...lol...I will**Khush Rahon Ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...*God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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7th February 2005, 05:51 PM
Komal Ji!
Do u like this.. comeon yaar... Pulkit sounds much better... Dhooom to mere mann me mach gayi hai... Never expected this much appreciation.. Well... thats one thing gr8 bout this place... Itna pyaar aur apnapan aur kahan... Its the love of all the family here that has instilled a bit of creativity in me... Varna hum me kahan dum thha Its sweet of you to wait for my replies.... Welll It took me some time to come back... Had reached the ninth cloud naa Soo..till the time u all r ready to bear with me.. Kalam chalti rahegi U TC of urself Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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7th February 2005, 06:07 PM
Kshistij!
ishQ karne ka shauk hai unko nazreiN milate haiN chup chup ke ... Amaa bhai.. aap to do linon me hi katl karne ka hunar rakhte ho... kyun mehroom rakhte ho apne chhane waalon ko.... Bhaii.. khud hi shayar banate ho, fir kehte ho shayar ki zubaan naa bolo... Vaise tumse kya chupa hai... Sundar likha hai.... Welll tum keh rahe ho.. mujhe bhi lagne laga hai Der aane ki aadat ka to apata nahin, Haan Humaare aaione me tumhara aks bas gaya hai... Tumhari yaad bahut aati hai... Do din kaba guzar gaye kucch pata nahi chala... Haan.. Tumhaari har baat yaad hai.... Bhai jab tumhe lene gaya thha.. tab tumhara likha ek sher yaad aa gaya... "Milne ko humse jis roz woh aayenge, Hum apne gharonde ko phoolon se sajaayenge Ghzalon ka hunar apni aankhon ko sikhayenge Royenge bahut par aansu naa bahayenge" Gharonde ko phoolon se saja paay paat nahi, haan palkein zaroor bicchi thhin tumse milne ke liye Bhai tum apna khayal rakhna... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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7th February 2005, 06:37 PM
Manoj Bhai!
Aapke reply ka intezaar thha.. Bhai aapko khushi hui jaan main bhi khush hoon... Bhai kucch kami to mujhe saaf nazar aa rahri thhi, bas use technical terms nahin pata thhe... aapne yeh link de bahut madad ki hai.. now I will try to make the basics correct atleast... Bhai aap saath dete rehna.. main koshihs zaari rakhoonga Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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7th February 2005, 06:44 PM
Pari!!
Well.. Bahut accha laga raha khud likhi hui post par tumhara reply dekh kar.... Mind and me.. I know u dont have mind... aur phir jab tum meri niece ki maa ho.. to hak badh jaate hian tumhare Sangat ka Asar...LOL Fir to Shila Parastaar jaisa kucch likhta main Kidding.. Saggi to hum hain Dastak ka to tumhe pata hai... OYE... Dont call me GOLU-MOLU.. I am a 6 footer.. and u know how much did i reduce.. all for Aamrita and my niece... she shud not say naa.. "Mama Mote" Welll.. kalam utthhai hai... ab koshihs zaari rahegi.. tum apna khyal rakhna.. aur sabse pehle mujhe hi batana... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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7th February 2005, 06:47 PM
Shimul!!
Well.. tum gaane sunaati rehna...Hum sunte rahenge.. enjoy karte rahenge.... Thanks agin for the lovely wishes... Dont call me hitler.. varna bhoot bankar daraoonga main U take care of urself... Keep smiling Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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**) Wo Gana Gaayega_Deewana SaiKaror Mein Pehchana Jaayega_Aap Hamarein Dil Ko Chura Kar_Aankh Churaye Jaate Hain_Ye Ek Tarfa Rasm-e-Bafa Ham Phir Bhi Nivaye Jaate Hain~*~Jiss Mehfil Mein Shama Ho_Parwana Jaayega....... **Mukesh Jee & Lata Jee Ki Aawaaz Mein**Enjoy**Hitler aur maine kahan? Tauba Tauba Jee...lol...Tanu Khud Kehnde Ho**Main Ki Kawa...lol...Khush Rahon Ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...*God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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8th February 2005, 11:41 AM
dear pulkit,
well awesome buddy. ur first attempt is fantastic. keep it up buddy. well thx to all those who boosted pulkits moral n forced him to explore his talent.keep the spirits n flames high buddy.wish u best of luck for future too. waiting ahead to read another post of urs.may god bless u with his fine glitters.i m srry i m very late replying here bt any ways der se aaye darusat aaye. today i wish sumthing for u dear. may happiness keeps u sweet. trials make u strong, sorrows keep u human, decisions keep u strong, failure keep u humble, success keep u glowing & god keep u going. all the best for future too.keep writing. |
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8th February 2005, 12:48 PM
Shimul!
Tum kabhi kucch kehti kahan ho? Ur so innocent.. shreef ladki  Mujhe hansi aa rahi hai.. Tum aur shareef.. u r so naughty...Mujhe jaise shareef aadmi ko hitler bana diya Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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8th February 2005, 12:51 PM
Jasleen!
So good to see u here... Well buddy..Ur wishes do mean a lot to me... may happiness keeps u sweet. trials make u strong, sorrows keep u human, decisions keep u strong, failure keep u humble, success keep u glowing & god keep u going. all the best for future too.keep writing. Loved it... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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8th February 2005, 12:53 PM
Now I am waiting for one person specially... Ek behen hain meri who has always supported me.. she was awlays there to motivate me...Otherwise i wud have stopped posting long before....Ab jab khud kucch likha hai Life me pehli baar... to unka intezaar hai... She's down with fever...
 Hope she gets Fine Sooon Didi...Am waiting... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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8th February 2005, 02:27 PM
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ye lo maiN bhi aa gaya ... waise mera intzaar ho raha tha ya nahi... waise maiN janta huN tumhe meri aadat ki aadat ho chuki hai lol!!! bhai sabse pehle to aapko maiN apne dil ki gehraiyoN se mubarakbaad deta huN ki aapne .... kalam ke mahiroN ki is duniya maiN apni kalam ka jaadoo dikha hi dala... jahaN fiza pehle hi rageen hai azeem funkaroN ke hunar se... aapne is ehsaasmand pehle kalaam ne us fiza maiN jo khushi ke rang bhare hai ... unko lafzoN maiN bayan karna naa munkin hai... khushi is baat ki ... jo sathi aaj tak taali baja ke sabka hausla badata tha ... aaj housloN ka pahad liye ... manch par aa pahuNcha hai... janta huN ki manoj bhai ki baat kafi had tak theek hai ki takniki barikiyoN se pare hai ye ashar par jo ek ehsaas aapne yahaN apne parivar ke liye vyakt kiye hai unki tareef maiN lafzoN ka kam ho jana lazmi hi hai ... aapke is aagaz-e-kalam pe maiN dua karta huN aapka aur kalam ka sath ab kabhi na choote ... bhai kalam ka sath badi mushkil se milta hai... par iske jaisa koi sathi nahi... tabhi kisi ne kaha hai ... ki kalam ki taqat sabse badi hai ... aur aapke andar chupi shayhi ne kalam ka sath paa hi liya iski behad khushi hai mujhe .... bas yahi kehna chahuNga ... wahi baat jo aapne mujhse hazaroN bar kahi... ki likhte raho... aur aaj aapke hi honsle ka nateeza hai .. ki maiN bhi kuch khaak alfaaz likh hi leta huN... aap bhi likhte rahiye yahi kahuNga .... aur apni buri aadat se majboor huN ... khuch khak alfaz nacheez alfaz likhe ja raha huN aapki shaan maiN ... chand ehsaas se apne pehle kalam ko aapne sajaya hai... kitna khoobsoorat jama-e-lafz unko aapne pehnaya hai... shyah panno ke beech tumne bhikehra yuN "saccha_pyar" choNke sab jan ke, itna hunar 'pulkit' ne humse chupaya hai ... aap yuN hi likhte rahe yahi dua hai.... apna khayal rakhne ke sath aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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8th February 2005, 02:42 PM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by sacccha_pyar
[B]mere bade bhai sahab,.... chand ehsaas se apne pehle kalam ko aapne sajaya hai... kitna khoobsoorat jama-e-lafz unko aapne pehnaya hai... shyah panno ke beech tumne bhikehra yuN "saccha_pyar" choNke sab jan ke, itna hunar 'pulkit' ne humse chupaya hai ... kunaal, bahut hi pasand aaya tumhara reply....... khush raho di |
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8th February 2005, 08:00 PM
Mere dil me chhupe hain kucch ehsaas, kucch ankahi, kucch ansuni si hai baat,
Woh baat kehne main aya hoon... Uska saanson se mehkana mere tan-man ko, aankhon aankhon me kar lena sau baat Uske is andaaz se dil ko ab main naa bachaa paya hoon Tanhaiyon me zara muskurana, sochte rehana unki hi har baat Behekte jaane se khud ko ab main naa rok payaa hoon Kaise kehdoon dil ki baat unse, kaise karloon izhaar-e-mohabbat Badi shiddat se kalam uthhayi thhi, lafz par chaar hi likh paya hoon... pulkit bhai..... kya baat hai..... jaisa ki meri behna paras ne kaha ki tum to chupe rustam nikle behna dekha ye kya gazab dhaya hai pulkit ne..... are wah.... wah .... sirf wah.... aur bus wah.... mere bhai..... tumhara bhai....... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Re: Re: Pehli Koshish... |
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9th February 2005, 10:41 AM
Mere Chhote bhai!
Well. aadat ki aadta to sahi me ho gayi hai ab.. Bahut kuch likha hai tumne... Koshihs rahegi ki sab ke pyaar pe khtra utara paoon.. Itna vaada hai ke EfForts kam nahin honge... and then i believ in the saying "Where ther's a will, there's a way" Tum mere apne ho, aur mujhe pata hai tumhara staah humesha rahega Apna khayal rakhna Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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9th February 2005, 10:43 AM
Well Aman Bhai!
Yeh aapki behna ka hi kamaal hai... She is the one who brought confidence in me.. Baaki aap sab ka pyaar hai... "GHALIB" ka padosi hoon aakhir , kucch asar to hawaon ka bhi aa hi jana hai... Kalam chalti rahegi.. vaada hai aapse... Aapki waah Sar-aankhon par.. apna khyal rakhiye.. saath dete rahiyega... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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9th February 2005, 01:31 PM
Bahut Ache
Pulkit Jee lagta hai shayari ke zaariye kisi ko kuch kahne ki koshish ki jaa rahai hai Meri Daad kubul keejeeyega .... issi tarah koshish karte rahiye .... manzil zaroor milegee .... 4 ke 8 .. phir 8 ke 16 .... Khaksaar :"A Smile can change your World so KEEP SMILING": |
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9th February 2005, 02:15 PM
Khaksaar!
Chaar lafz dil me aaye likh diye, aapko pasand aaye khushi hui... Aap saath dete rahenge to 4 se 8 aur 8 se 16 bhi jald hi honge... Thanks.. TC Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th March 2005, 03:40 PM
Kaise kehdoon dil ki baat unse, kaise karloon izhaar-e-mohabbat
Badi shiddat se kalam uthhayi thhi, lafz par chaar hi likh paya hoon... Hmmmmmm.. kalam der se uthaai.. lekin jab uthaayi hai to uski pakaR ke kya kehne! Haan.. technicalities nahi hain isme zyada.. lekin ehsaas bohat khoob hain.. Humne tumhaari ek recent post bhi paRi thi.. uspe jawaab bhi diya hai.. us post aur isme bohat fark hai.. tumhaara andaaz e bayaan, itne kum waqt me behad nikhra hai.. excellent progress! Dua rahegi ki tum yunhi likhte raho apne dil ki baat.. ! Well done! |
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17th March 2005, 06:49 PM
Didiiiiiii!
Kya kahoon? ke is rachna ko bass aapka hi intezaar thha... I didnt mention tht to u but still us reached here... Ise kehte hain dil ki awaaz dil tak pahunchnaa Kalam to ab rukne waali nahin, itna pyaar mila hai apnon ka....Technicalities ka andazaa hi nahi thha tab tak... Aapko fark nazar aya to vakayi kucch fark aaya hoga Aapki duaayein saath hain... Aur kya chhaiye....Aap saath hi rehna Dooo Take Good Care of Urself Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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1st April 2005, 10:33 AM
Pulkit,
Hum bhi aapse wohi bata kahenge jo aapne humse kahi thee lagta nahi hai ki aapka yeh pehla kalaam hai...kyonki apne bahaut acachi tarah se apne oos first love ke ehsaas ko shabdon mai dhaala hai...bahaut acacha laga padhke...hume bataiyega ki aapka next kab kalaam kab aa raha hai. Keep smiling, Palak |
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1st April 2005, 10:42 AM
Apna mailbox to khali karo...hum mess bhi nahi bhej paa rahe hain pulkit.
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2nd April 2005, 02:05 PM
Palak,
Well Glad that u liked my first work...Mujhpar to bhaut si cheezon ka asar thha na.. Had just met so many gr8 shayras over here personally... usnka asar thha... Gaalib ka Padosi hone ka bhi kucch faayda ho gaya Kidding....Accha laga jaankar ke apako koshish pasand aayi Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th January 2006, 12:53 AM
really partner... aapki pehli koshish itne time baad padh rahi hu.. but pehli hi itni asardaar .. itni sober..seedhi saadhi... just expressed yrself completly .... aur aapke 4 lafz.. kya kehne unke ...hehehhee... aur ab to aap bahut seedhiyaa.n chad chuke hain shayri ki...
bass yu hi aage badte jao... at every step of life u 'll see yr frnds around take care ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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18th January 2006, 03:42 PM
Partner,
I am glad that u liked my first effort... Yaar this one will always be close to my heart...MAine zindagi me kabhi ek chhoti si poem bhi nahi likhi thhi...so this was special... Seee....I know I have learnt to express myself in a better fashion now...but its a disadvantage too...I cant write freely as i used to before.. Dimaag ab uski length, flow, sound thhek akrne me atak jaata hai... And the other thing that makes it special is special comments from all my special friends....Well...Jab tak dost hain tab tak hum bhi hain partner...without u all...i wudnt hav been here... Saath to tumhe rehna padhega...apna khayal rakhna acche se Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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22nd July 2009, 11:34 AM
bohat hi khoobsurat hai aapki pehli koshish pulkit jee......seedhe saadhe lafzon me dil ki saari batein bayaan kar diya aapne..........
naye naye shayer ki pehli pehli ,bholi si ,koshish per dil daad qubool kijiye..... ..Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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