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मुश्किल ये मोहब्बत है - 18th May 2011, 09:57 PM

रोकने से ये बेबाग ज़माना रुकता नहीं
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थमता है दिल, पर बहाना रुकता नहीं

सोचा क्यूँ न करे तेरी तस्वीर से ही बातें
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उन ख़त को कोई और देखे तो कितनी हो रुसवाई
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बयाँ करना है मुश्किल ये मोहब्बत है
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तुझसे ही लगन लगा ली है तेरी ही इबादत है
अब इसे कुछ भी कहो ये काफिराना रुकता नहीं

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kaafir saaHeb:

namaste!

aapki ees behterin koShiSh ko kal raat ko hi paDh liyaa thaa par rep nah de paayaa thaa..aaj subHa-subHa fir se paDhne kaa man huaa.. baDii hi Khoobsoorti se lafzoN ko peSh kiyaa hay aapne .. yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baDhaate raheN aage bhee... dil se daad

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

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रोकने से ये बेबाग ज़माना रुकता नहीं
चलता, तेरा मेरा अफसाना रुकता नहीं

तेरी अरज़ो-ऐ-कसक में मुयास्सिर हूँ
थमता है दिल, पर बहाना रुकता नहीं

सोचा क्यूँ न करे तेरी तस्वीर से ही बातें
पर बोले क्या जब ये निहारना रुकता नहीं

उन ख़त को कोई और देखे तो कितनी हो रुसवाई
जितना न भेजों पर यह रवाना रुकता नहीं

बयाँ करना है मुश्किल ये मोहब्बत है
जितना भी छुपाऊँ पर ये छुपाना रुकता नहीं

तुझसे ही लगन लगा ली है तेरी ही इबादत है
अब इसे कुछ भी कहो ये काफिराना रुकता नहीं

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रोकने से ये बेबाग ज़माना रुकता नहीं
चलता, तेरा मेरा अफसाना रुकता नहीं

तेरी अरज़ो-ऐ-कसक में मुयास्सिर हूँ
थमता है दिल, पर बहाना रुकता नहीं

सोचा क्यूँ न करे तेरी तस्वीर से ही बातें
पर बोले क्या जब ये निहारना रुकता नहीं

उन ख़त को कोई और देखे तो कितनी हो रुसवाई
जितना न भेजों पर यह रवाना रुकता नहीं

बयाँ करना है मुश्किल ये मोहब्बत है
जितना भी छुपाऊँ पर ये छुपाना रुकता नहीं

तुझसे ही लगन लगा ली है तेरी ही इबादत है
अब इसे कुछ भी कहो ये काफिराना रुकता नहीं
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Rokane se ye bebaag zamaana rukata nahi,
Chalta, tera mera afsaana rukata nahi,

Teri arazo-e-kasam mai muyaasisar hoon,
Thamataa hai dil, par bahaana rukata nahi,

Socha kyon na kare teri tasveer se hi baatein,
Par bole kya jab ye nihaarna rukata nahi,

Un khat ko koi aur dekhe to kitani ho ruswaayi,
Jitana na bhejo par yah rawaana rukata nahi,

Bayaan karana hai mushkil ye muhobbat hai,
Jitna bhi chhupaaun par ye chhupaana rukata nahi,

Tujhase hi lagan laga li hai teri hi ibaadat hai,
Ab isse kuchh bhi kaho ye Kaafiraana rukata nahi,


Ji .. Roman Hindi mai kyon nahi likhaaaaaaaaaaa .. iska jawaab dijiye pahele .. aesi bhi kya mashroofiyat ke .. apne likhe in sundar alfaazo ko sahi dhang se puraa theek theek likhe bagair hi bhaag jaaya karte hai aap ... , ... Ghazal kesi lagi ye tab bataayenge jab ... is sawaal ka jawaab milegaa hume ...

aur aap ko kya lagataa hai .. hume aap ki ghazalein translate karne ke ilaawa aur koi kaam nahi hai kya... ye saara kaam yunhi kyon kare hum bhalaa ... sochate hai itani mahenat kari hai to badale mai kya maange ...

chaliye .. abhi nahi fir kabhi maang lenge .. ye udhaar rahaa aap pe .. hehehhehe

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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maafi ka talbgaar - 22nd May 2011, 03:25 PM

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Rokane se ye bebaag zamaana rukata nahi,
Chalta, tera mera afsaana rukata nahi,

Teri arazo-e-kasam mai muyaasisar hoon,
Thamataa hai dil, par bahaana rukata nahi,

Socha kyon na kare teri tasveer se hi baatein,
Par bole kya jab ye nihaarna rukata nahi,

Un khat ko koi aur dekhe to kitani ho ruswaayi,
Jitana na bhejo par yah rawaana rukata nahi,

Bayaan karana hai mushkil ye muhobbat hai,
Jitna bhi chhupaaun par ye chhupaana rukata nahi,

Tujhase hi lagan laga li hai teri hi ibaadat hai,
Ab isse kuchh bhi kaho ye Kaafiraana rukata nahi,


Ji .. Roman Hindi mai kyon nahi likhaaaaaaaaaaa .. iska jawaab dijiye pahele .. aesi bhi kya mashroofiyat ke .. apne likhe in sundar alfaazo ko sahi dhang se puraa theek theek likhe bagair hi bhaag jaaya karte hai aap [I]Ghazal kesi lagi ye tab bataayenge jab ... is sawaal ka jawaab milegaa hume


ji ajj appne khoob dant lagayi hai hume galti hogayi abb jane dijiye next time pakka promise hai ya t likhonga to dono mai likhonga nahi to jab tak likh nahi longa tab tak post nahi karoonga

aur aap ko kya lagataa hai .. hume aap ki ghazalein translate karne ke ilaawa aur koi kaam nahi hai kya ye saara kaam yunhi kyon kare hum bhalaa sochate hai itani mahenat kari hai to badale mai kya maange ...

yeh to apka farz hai hum kya kare yeh to appko karna hi padega bas aise hi dosti nibhayi jati hai kya doston ka to kaam hota hai ki apne adhore dost ko pura karen bhai yeh to humra haq hai


chaliye .. abhi nahi fir kabhi maang lenge .. ye udhaar rahaa aap pe .. hehehhehe

yeh to khtarnaak baat hai
chalye koi nahi waise bhi agar app yeh na karte uske baad bhi app humse kuch bhi mangte to bhai hume dena hi padta waise doston mai manga nahi jata hai jo chahye hota hai usse utha liya jata hai orr agar inkaar kare to cheen liya jata hai



gudiya g bhut bhut shukriya waise mai shukriya kyun kar raha hoon yeh to humara haq hai
chalye next time hum appse mehnat nahi karvaynge hum khud hi roman hindi mai likh denge baksh diya humne appko app bhi kya yaad rakhngii kis raiis se pala pada hai:

humesha kush rahye

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na jane kon kon hume duaaon mai yaad rakhta hai
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gudiya g bhut bhut shukriya waise mai shukriya kyun kar raha hoon yeh to humara haq hai
chalye next time hum appse mehnat nahi karvaynge hum khud hi roman hindi mai likh denge baksh diya humne appko app bhi kya yaad rakhngii kis raiis se pala pada hai:

humesha kush rahye

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Ji .. namaste Kafiir Ji .. kaise hai aap ... ?? ek side kahe rahe hai ke humne daant lagaayi .. duje haath aese behave kar rahe hai jaise daant khaane mai Rab hi jaane kitanaa mazaa aa raha ho ...

ye achchha hai .. Dosti ke naam par apna haq jataa jataa kar jee chaahe jitane bhi sitam dhaate jaaiye .. aur kahiye Dosti mai farz banataa hai ... achchha hai .. achchha hai khud Sitam dhaaiye Dosti ke naam par .. aur dosh dene ka kaam aaye to Gudia ko hi Sitamgar batalaaiye ..

anyways .. ab aate hai aap ki ghazal par ... Ji hammesha ki tarhaa .. lajawaab ghazal hai ... ehsaaso ne ek baar fir dil chhu liyaa ... khaas kar .. 1st, 3rd and the last sher ... jyaada pasand aaya hume ...yunhi likhate rahiye .. aur aate rahiye ..

aur humaari maaniye to roz ek aad post ke saath aate rahiye .. par janaab Mahefil e Ishq ki hi ronak bane rahaa kijiye ... Dard ki mahefil mai likhane waale aur bhi hai .. unme ijaafa naa kijiye .. khushiyon ke rang bikherate huye achchhe lagate hai aap .. aur Bhagwaan Ji kare aap ki kalam hammesha khushiyon ke nagme hi likhati rahe ... aur aap is Ishq ki mahefil ki hi ronak bane rahe ... Ji .. Aameen, Sumaameen ... ...

Bhagwaan Ji aap ko har khushi de,

Aapki Dost: Gudia

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रोकने से ये बेबाग ज़माना रुकता नहीं
चलता, तेरा मेरा अफसाना रुकता नहीं

तेरी अरज़ो-ऐ-कसक में मुयास्सिर हूँ
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पर बोले क्या जब ये निहारना रुकता नहीं

उन ख़त को कोई और देखे तो कितनी हो रुसवाई
जितना न भेजों पर यह रवाना रुकता नहीं

बयाँ करना है मुश्किल ये मोहब्बत है
जितना भी छुपाऊँ पर ये छुपाना रुकता नहीं

तुझसे ही लगन लगा ली है तेरी ही इबादत है
अब इसे कुछ भी कहो ये काफिराना रुकता नहीं

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kaafir saaHeb:

namaste!

aapki ees behterin koShiSh ko kal raat ko hi paDh liyaa thaa par rep nah de paayaa thaa..aaj subHa-subHa fir se paDhne kaa man huaa.. baDii hi Khoobsoorti se lafzoN ko peSh kiyaa hay aapne .. yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan baDhaate raheN aage bhee... dil se daad

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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सोचा क्यूँ न करे तेरी तस्वीर से ही बातें
पर बोले क्या जब ये निहारना रुकता नहीं "

Ye lines , Jaan hein Ghazal ki !
bht hi achhi lagi
bhut bhut shukriya appka..........................


na jane kon kon hume duaaon mai yaad rakhta hai
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4th November 2013, 12:04 PM

Wwwaaahhh....Badi hi zaalim ghazal kahi Kaafir bhai .... ehsaasaat aur jazbaat se sarshaar ... dheron daad !!!
   
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