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ShaYaD Vo Bhi GhaZal MeiN Meri -
2nd September 2004, 05:15 PM
TaSVeeR-E-KaraM PadH LaTe HaiN
AanKhon MeiN SharaM PadH LaTe HaiN ChehRe Pe Mere DuNiYa Wale Ab Tere SiTaM PadH LaTe Hai HuM Ab Bhi TuMaRi BaaToN MeiN ChaHaT Ke BhaRaM PadH LaTe Hai JhooThey WaaDe JhooThi KaSaMe SacH JaaN Ke HuM PadH LaTe Hai ParWaNo ShaMa MeiN Jal Ke WaFa ke RanJ O AalaM PadH LaTe Hai ShaYaD Vo Bhi GhaZal MeiN Meri MeRe Dil Ke ZakHaM PadH Late Hai AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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2nd September 2004, 07:28 PM
hello Amrit
how r u? pehle kabhi tumehara likha nahi pada aje pehlibare pda hia lakine aacha laga bhaote aacha likhte ho? nice work keep it up. takecare Mushkan |
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3rd September 2004, 05:44 PM
hey amrit
tumari ghazal padi bahut acchi likhi hai aaj pehli baar aayi hu mein aur tumari ghazal padi bahut accha likha hai tumne |
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wah -
3rd September 2004, 06:02 PM
hi sharad sahab
umeed hai hume pehchan liya hoga aapne, khair aapne bohat accha likha hai aapka kalam dil ke kareeb se nikla likhte rahiyega isi jamane ke dastoor main bhool jana likha hai unke haton se kya shikyat kare likha hai aaj hume jise kal mit jana hai bye sharad bhai sacccha_pyar tune ye mashvira suna hai kya jindgi sivay SACCCHA_PYAR ke hai kya |
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3rd September 2004, 06:40 PM
hello sharad
aaj tumhara sher pada bahoot aacha laga. dost mein tumhein jantaa tuo nahin huu per tumhara sher padke aisa lag rahaa hai kii tum ek sache pyaar ki talaash mein hoo. dear agar tum try kar rahe ho tuo karte rahe ho bagwan tum hare saath mein hai. aur haa sher aur shayri likhna na bholna. dear tum soch rahe hoge ki mein kuon huu aur mein ne ye sab kyon lika dost mein kya karta tumhara sher itna aacha tha ki mujhse rahaa nahin gayaa. keep right such good shayri's take care amod |
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4th September 2004, 02:36 PM
MusKaaN Sahiba,MoNishKa Ji, SaccHa PyaR, Aur AdhiNdaW Sahib
AaP SaB Ka MeiN TaHeDiL se SukaRGuZaaR hu Ki AaP SaB YeHa AaYe.... AuR AaP Ko GhaZal AccHi LaGi ... SaccHa (KuNaaL) JaHa Tak Ab HuM Ek DusRe Ko JaaN ChuKe HoGe... AuR AaP Ka KhaYaaL Jo Tha SaHi Tha.. TaReeF Ke LiYe ThanX AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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4th September 2004, 04:05 PM
AMRIT SHARAD JI.....Namaskaar!!
2-4 din se aap ka naam lagataar threads per dekh rahi hoo....ha magar pehli baar aapka kalama par rahi hoo.....accha laga....har ashaar bahut accha laga....u hi lagta hai....jisse mohobbat hone lage...to u hi lagta hai jaise vo sab kuchh padh leta ho...sab kuchh tumare baare me bina kahe..samajh leta hai....yahi jazbaat hi to hai...jo pyar ko gehraiya deta hai... u hi likhte rahiye...aur tahe dil se hamari tareef kabool kijiye.. shubhkamnao k saath udas TaSVeeR-E-KaraM PadH LaTe HaiN AanKhon MeiN SharaM PadH LaTe HaiN ChehRe Pe Mere DuNiYa Wale Ab Tere SiTaM PadH LaTe Hai HuM Ab Bhi TuMaRi BaaToN MeiN ChaHaT Ke BhaRaM PadH LaTe Hai JhooThey WaaDe JhooThi KaSaMe SacH JaaN Ke HuM PadH LaTe Hai ParWaNo ShaMa MeiN Jal Ke WaFa ke RanJ O AalaM PadH LaTe Hai ShaYaD Vo Bhi GhaZal MeiN Meri MeRe Dil Ke ZakHaM PadH Late Hai ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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7th September 2004, 05:01 PM
Sharad bhai
bahut khoobsorat ghazal pesh kee tumne .. Aise hi yahaN likhte raho .. |
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8th September 2004, 03:15 PM
UdaS Jiii....
MeiN Kya KaHu .. Bus ItNa KaHuGa ... AaP Ko GhaZaL AccHi Lagi Is Se Mujhe KhuShi Huyi...AuR AaP Log Ke Liye Hi DuBaRa Is MahFiL Mein Aaya hu... TaReeF Ke LiYe ShukRiYa... AaP Ka DosT AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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8th September 2004, 03:42 PM
KshitiZ SahiB..
AaP Ka TaHeDiL Se SuKaRGuZaR Hu... AaP Ka DosT AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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12th March 2006, 08:29 PM
sharadji
bahoot hi khubh likha hai aapne daad de rahi hoon lelena but i dont like ur black rose plz change it you don't need to have anything else. If you don't have it, it doesn't matter much what else you do have. |
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12th March 2006, 08:35 PM
Pallavi SahiBa....
SuKaRGuzaR Hu AaP Ka ... Aur DhanYWaaD .... AaP Ne Aapni Ray Ji Dii .... AaP Ka DosT... AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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