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9th October 2016, 08:45 PM

Dosto chaliye mehfil ko aagey badhate hai

Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

Word: GumaaN/gumaan/گمان/گماں
Meaning: Doubt/suspicion/khayaal


Na jaane hota hai kyu ab haqeeqat pe gumaaN mujh ko
Fareeb-e-chashm lagta hai ye tasveer-e-jahaaN mujh ko(MUJAHID)

GumaaN= doubt
Fareeb-e-chashm=illusion of eyes


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11th October 2016, 12:41 AM

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Dosto chaliye mehfil ko aagey badhate hai

Pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

Word: GumaaN/gumaan/گمان/گماں
Meaning: Doubt/suspicion/khayaal


Na jaane hota hai kyu ab haqeeqat pe gumaaN mujh ko
Fareeb-e-chashm lagta hai ye tasveer-e-jahaaN mujh ko(MUJAHID)

GumaaN= doubt
Fareeb-e-chashm=illusion of eyes
Waah khoob lafz diya hai mujahid sahab...aur bahot khoob sher kaha............



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Buhet achaa word buhet acha shair qasid sahib


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Aks e khushbu hu bikherney sey na roukey koee
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Aks e khushbu hu bikherney sey na roukey koee
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Perween shakir
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غضب ہے منظرِ شب تاب یا افسونِ الفت ہیں؛
نگاہیں جب کھلے بس عکسِ جاناں ہی نظر آئے؛

Gazab hai manzar-e-shab-taab ya afsoon-e-ulfat hai
Nigaahe jab khuley bas aks-e-jaanaaN hi nazar aaye (MUJAHID)

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Khubsoorut sheir mujahid saheb.....


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Gazab hai manzar-e-shab-taab ya afsoon-e-ulfat hai
Nigaahe jab khuley bas aks-e-jaanaaN hi nazar aaye (MUJAHID)

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نگاہیں جب کھلے بس عکسِ جاناں ہی نظر آئے؛

Gazab hai manzar-e-shab-taab ya afsoon-e-ulfat hai
Nigaahe jab khuley bas aks-e-jaanaaN hi nazar aaye (MUJAHID)

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Bahut umdaa bhai....yunhi likhte rahiye



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نگاہیں جب کھلے بس عکسِ جاناں ہی نظر آئے؛

Gazab hai manzar-e-shab-taab ya afsoon-e-ulfat hai
Nigaahe jab khuley bas aks-e-jaanaaN hi nazar aaye (MUJAHID)

Manzar-e-shab-taab= roshan raat ka nazaara
Afsoon-e-ulfat= magic of love

Waaahh !!!kya baat hai.......



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Aks e khushbu hu bikherney sey na roukey koee
Aor bikher jayun to mujhkoh na sametey koee
Perween shakir
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Bahot khoob peshkash saba ji.....

Waaahh!!



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Pyar pher aor bhi nikher jata
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Bahut khoob sabaa ji saada khoobsurat...



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buhet acha wordmujahid sahib
buhet acha sheir bhi
Ye ajeeb Khail hai pyar ka , main ne aap dekha ye Mojzaa
Wo jo lafz mere Gumaan mein Thay , wo teri Zubaan pe aa Gaye

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Ye ajeeb Khail hai pyar ka , main ne aap dekha ye Mojzaa
Wo jo lafz mere Gumaan mein Thay , wo teri Zubaan pe aa Gaye

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Waaah waaah!!! Saba ji..Khoob sher pesh kiya hai faiz ahmed faiz ka...........



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Gumaan teri muhabbat ka mujhe barbaad kar dega
tujhe masoom keh dega mujhe sayyaad kar dega......

Doston mehfil ko aage badhaaye aapke agle sher ka intezaar rahegaa



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Doston mehfil ko aage badhaaye aapke agle sher ka intezaar rahegaa
Waah waah!!! bahut khoob.........



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Waah waah!!! bahut khoob.........
shukriyaa Madhu...

Mehfil ko agle sher ka betaabi se intezaar hai



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Doston,

Agle sher ke intezaar mein tha lagta hai Gumaan ki taqdeer mein ek sher kam hai...to chaliye agle alfaaz ko mehfil mein rakhte hai...agla lafz hoga 'bebaak'

Ek sher arz kar raha hoon umeed hai pasand aayegaa

Bahut bebaak hai armaan tahnaa hai.n akele hai.n
magar vo shokh na jaane yeh ulfat ke jhamele hai.n



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1st December 2016, 05:38 PM

Waah...bahot khoob lafz diya qasid sahab........

Aur behtareen sher pesh kiya hai.......bahot khoob....



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Waah...bahot khoob lafz diya qasid sahab........

Aur behtareen sher pesh kiya hai.......bahot khoob....
Shukriya Madhu aapki shirkat ka intezaar hain.



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Roney se aur ishq mai be-baak hogaye
Dhoye gaye hum aise ke bas paak hogaye

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Mirza ghalib
Waah jaanab chacha ghalib ka yeh aala sher mehfil mein nayi jaan le aaya hai....ab Mujahid bhai ki jaanib se bhi ek sher pesh kiya jaaye



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bebaaq nigahon ki hai dastaan ye
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Waah yeh seedha aur sateek sher behad pasand aaya Madhu....daad qubool farmaiye
Shukriya anu..........................



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Jasaarat bhi nahi ke lar saku zalim zamaney se;
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جسارت بھی نہیں کے لڑ سکو ظالم زمانے سے
اگر تُو ساتھ ہو تو ہم بھی کچھ بیباک ہو جائے

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جسارت بھی نہیں کے لڑ سکو ظالم زمانے سے
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Doston aapki shirkat ka intezaar hai jald aaiye



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Bebaq lafz hothon pe dhadkan me bagawat
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Waah umdaa sher jaane pehle kyun is par nazar nahi padi....aapki shirkat ka shukriyaa Madhu.....yunhi mehfil ko roshan rakhiye
Shukriya anu.....apni taraf se yhi koshish karti hun ki sabka sath de sakun...

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ye mehfil to kab se udaas padi hai chalo ismein phir se shamaa jalaaein..

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ye mehfil to kab se udaas padi hai chalo ismein phir se shamaa jalaaein..

nayaa shabd main hi de deti huu

shabd hai 'khyaal'

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Arse baad aapni hi daryaaft par pahuch kar us lamhein mein waapis pahunch gaya jaha din SDC ke chaaoN mein guzartaa tha. Soch raha hoon aap sab doston ka saath rahe to is mehfil ko phirse jawaan kiya jaaye.

Aakhri lafz yaha khayaal diya gaya hai to chaliye uspar hi koshish karte hai

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tera vo ruth kar jaana mere dil par vabaal aaye

Suna hai us khudaaya ne likhi hai sabki taqdeerein
magar meri mohabbat par hi kyun aksar sawaal aaye

tere andaaz par maine to likhi hai kai ghazalein
labon se tu ise padh de to is par bhi jamaal aaye

Meri nazrein to tere bin tera didaar karti hai
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mere har daav par aksar tere naino.n ki chaal aaye

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Aakhri lafz yaha khayaal diya gaya hai to chaliye uspar hi koshish karte hai

Agar main aankh bhi moondu.n mujhe tera khayaal aaye
tera vo ruth kar jaana mere dil par vabaal aaye

Suna hai us khudaaya ne likhi hai sabki taqdeerein
magar meri mohabbat par hi kyun aksar sawaal aaye

tere andaaz par maine to likhi hai kai ghazalein
labon se tu ise padh de to is par bhi jamaal aaye

Meri nazrein to tere bin tera didaar karti hai
ki Jis din tu nahi aaye mere dil mein malaal aaye

teri shatranj aankhon ne mera bhi chain hai loota
mere har daav par aksar tere naino.n ki chaal aaye

khayaalo.n mein diwaano ki meri chahat ka ho qissa
dua hai pyaar mujhko tumpe aisa be-misaal aaye

Teri shanranj aankhon ne ...mera bhi chain hai loota
Kya hee kahne

Aap aaye to phir vahi rumaniyat chha gayi mahfil pe...
Bahot khoobsoorat Ghazal...waahhhh!!!
Aate rahiye likhte rahiye!!!!
Aur salamat rahiye



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