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Love Khayaal - 20th August 2013, 09:44 PM
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Aur tumhara khayaal
Aksar gher liya karte hain mujh ko

Shaam ke bichhe hue qaaleen par
Jab tumhaare chehre se noor barasta hai
Bahut achcha lagta hai

Ye ehsaas bahut sheetal hai
Ki tum ho
Aaj bhi ho
Chidiya ki chahchahaahat se nikal kar
Baadal ke neh se pare
Paani ki nirmalta ke bahar

Tum simat aayiN
To ik phool ki khushboo meN
Aur sampurna vatavaran
Khushnuma bana diya

Maine mahsoos to kiya ye aanand
Lekin samajh nahiN paya
Ke tum mere dil-o-dimaaG par chhaa rahi ho
Ya
Tumhara samast mere zahn meN
SimaTta ja raha hai
Aur maiN deewaar par
Tumhaari koi dhundhli si
Tasweer talaashta huN

Paanv dharti meN gaRe haiN
Aur maiN deewaar meN

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29th June 2014, 07:12 PM
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Tum
Aur tumhara khayaal
Aksar gher liya karte hain mujh ko

Shaam ke bichhe hue qaaleen par
Jab tumhaare chehre se noor barasta hai
Bahut achcha lagta hai

Ye ehsaas bahut sheetal hai
Ki tum ho
Aaj bhi ho
Chidiya ki chahchahaahat se nikal kar
Baadal ke neh se pare
Paani ki nirmalta ke bahar

Tum simat aayiN
To ik phool ki khushboo meN
Aur sampurna vatavaran
Khushnuma bana diya

Maine mahsoos to kiya ye aanand
Lekin samajh nahiN paya
Ke tum mere dil-o-dimaaG par chhaa rahi ho
Ya
Tumhara samast mere zahn meN
SimaTta ja raha hai
Aur maiN deewaar par
Tumhaari koi dhundhli si
Tasweer talaashta huN

Paanv dharti meN gaRe haiN
Aur maiN deewaar meN

waaaahhhhhhhh bas waah hi waahhhhh... nayaa andaaz nayaa josh baakamaal... bemisaal.....

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29th June 2014, 11:50 PM
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Tum
Aur tumhara khayaal
Aksar gher liya karte hain mujh ko

Shaam ke bichhe hue qaaleen par
Jab tumhaare chehre se noor barasta hai
Bahut achcha lagta hai

Ye ehsaas bahut sheetal hai
Ki tum ho
Aaj bhi ho
Chidiya ki chahchahaahat se nikal kar
Baadal ke neh se pare
Paani ki nirmalta ke bahar

Tum simat aayiN
To ik phool ki khushboo meN
Aur sampurna vatavaran
Khushnuma bana diya

Maine mahsoos to kiya ye aanand
Lekin samajh nahiN paya
Ke tum mere dil-o-dimaaG par chhaa rahi ho
Ya
Tumhara samast mere zahn meN
SimaTta ja raha hai
Aur maiN deewaar par
Tumhaari koi dhundhli si
Tasweer talaashta huN

Paanv dharti meN gaRe haiN
Aur maiN deewaar meN


Masha Allah bohat khoob surat khayaal hai sumit ji........



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30th June 2014, 12:28 PM
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Tum
Aur tumhara khayaal
Aksar gher liya karte hain mujh ko

Shaam ke bichhe hue qaaleen par
Jab tumhaare chehre se noor barasta hai
Bahut achcha lagta hai

Ye ehsaas bahut sheetal hai
Ki tum ho
Aaj bhi ho
Chidiya ki chahchahaahat se nikal kar
Baadal ke neh se pare
Paani ki nirmalta ke bahar

Tum simat aayiN
To ik phool ki khushboo meN
Aur sampurna vatavaran
Khushnuma bana diya

Maine mahsoos to kiya ye aanand
Lekin samajh nahiN paya
Ke tum mere dil-o-dimaaG par chhaa rahi ho
Ya
Tumhara samast mere zahn meN
SimaTta ja raha hai
Aur maiN deewaar par
Tumhaari koi dhundhli si
Tasweer talaashta huN

Paanv dharti meN gaRe haiN
Aur maiN deewaar meN
Bhai.....pahle ek baat batao ki ye nasri nazm hi hai ya koi Hindi Kavita........kyu'nki agar Hindi Kavita hai ( Kyu'nki main Hindi Kavita ki technicalities se kuch khaas waaqif nahi hu ) to phir main kuch kahane laayaq hi nahi hu......aur agar ye nasri nazm hai to Hindi alfaaz par itna zor kyu'n??????
Aapke zawaab Ka intzaar rahega......par ek baat hai ehsaasaat Ki bahut aala bayaan hai ye kavish......daad
   
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waaaahhhhhhhh bas waah hi waahhhhh... nayaa andaaz nayaa josh baakamaal... bemisaal.....

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Bhai.....pahle ek baat batao ki ye nasri nazm hi hai ya koi Hindi Kavita........kyu'nki agar Hindi Kavita hai ( Kyu'nki main Hindi Kavita ki technicalities se kuch khaas waaqif nahi hu ) to phir main kuch kahane laayaq hi nahi hu......aur agar ye nasri nazm hai to Hindi alfaaz par itna zor kyu'n??????
Aapke zawaab Ka intzaar rahega......par ek baat hai ehsaasaat Ki bahut aala bayaan hai ye kavish......daad
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MaiN ziyada nahiN jaanta. Ye nasri nazm hai ya koi hindi kavita nahiN kah sakta. Mujhe donoN ka difference hi nahiN maloom. Maine sirf ek qalaam kaha hai iska pukhta hona ya kamzor hona maiN decide nahiN karoonga. Readers hi decide karenge. Aap decide karenge.

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