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Khushi Na Mili -
25th August 2004, 01:35 PM
Khushiya.n bahut thi...magar mujhe na mili...
isko mili...usko mili....magar mujhe na mili... maine deepak jalaye...uske dar par.. maine sazde kiye...uske dar par... meri na-kaam koshishe...parvan charti rahi.. maine ansu bhaye...magar mujhe na mili.. khushiya.n bahut thi...magar mujhe na mili.. isko mili...usko mili...magar mujhe na mili... aaj chaand ko bhi dekha maine haste hua.. aaj hawao ko bhi dekha khushi me nachte hua.. maine lehro ko dekha,, maine kirno ko dekha.. har taraf 'vo' machalti thi..magar mujhe na mili.. khushiya.n bahut thi...magar mujhe na mili.. chahat se bhare arman..aur un me umeede.. khule asman me chamkti ankho ne kuchh khwab bune.. gamo ki gardish se hatkar..kuchh ehsas pale.. dekho kismat ki maar 'vo' magar mujhe na mili.. khushiya.n bahut thi..magar mujhe na mili.. isko mili...usko mili...magar mujhe na mili.. UDAS |
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25th August 2004, 03:21 PM
aaj chaand ko bhi dekha maine haste hua..
aaj hawao ko bhi dekha khushi me nachte hua.. maine lehro ko dekha,, maine kirno ko dekha.. har taraf 'vo' machalti thi..magar mujhe na mili.. UDAS ji... Aapki is rachna me aapki shikaayat.. aapka gila.. aapke niraasha.. saaf saaf nazar aa rahi ha.. jaise koi kismat se poochh raha ho ki aakhir usne aisa kya kiya hai jo khushi usse is kadar rooTHi hai? Jis tarah aapne kudrat ke nazaaroN me khushi ki jhhalak bayaan ki hai, ye kaabil e tareef hai. Bas, yahi kahenge ki apni rachnaaoN me ye ehsaas ki gehraii.. aur ye saadi, banaaein rakhein.. Bohat achha lika hai aapne. |
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25th August 2004, 03:41 PM
Afshan ji...kya aap koi pandit hai...are aap to anteryami (Dil ki baat janNe wale) bhi ho gaye....vakyi manNa parega ki aap ka andaza bil kul sahi nishane per pahucha...meri sach me kismat se larai hai...aur ye rachna shayad isliye ye reep le baithi..
tareef ka shukriya... thanx meri banno sorry urf afshan ji.. ek baat baatoo chalo bata deti hooo ki jab jab meri nazro k samne aap ka naam aata hai...vo gana yad aata hai... Banno tera...mukhra....chand sa... Haso nahi...pls...kyuki mujhe bahut jor se hansi aa rahi hai... UDAS |
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25th August 2004, 03:47 PM
LOL!!!!
 Aji hansi aa rahi hai to hans do! hansa koi buri baat to nahi.. Actually ye naam hume is gaane ke elaava aur bohat kuchh yaad dila deta hai.. isi liye sabhi dostoN se kehte phirte hain ki PLEASE hume Afshan hi bulaao.. agar site par apna naam badal sakte to kab ka badal lete.. chalo.. ise par kar aapko hansi aayi.. naam kuchh to kaam aaya!  Rahi baat pandit ya anteryaami hone ki.. to bilkul nahi ji! humaare aise bhaagya kahaan?? Aapke dil ki baat sirf hum hi nahi.. yahaan kaii log paR paate hain.. wo gaana hai na.. 'Dil ka haal sune dil waala..' Bas yahi kissa hai yahaan bhi..  Yunhi likhti raho...hasti muskuraati raho... |
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25th August 2004, 06:52 PM
Ud^haas ya UDAS...yaa yuu kahu....jii udas jii..bolo kyaa kahu tumhe......kuch samjha aayaa kii nahii..
miloo fhursaat mai samjhayege kabhii....ab baat tumhare kalaam kii...hmmmmmmm...yaar ye khushii hai naa badiii chalaak hai apni jhalak dikhaa kar pata nahi kanha chhup jati hai.....par dost ek guru mantraa detaa huu uska pichaa karnaa chhod do...gar woh tumhe milnii hogii naa tao tumhare pass aajayegii..warnaa...yuu na hoo jaye..Ghar se chaale thai hum tao khushii kii talaash mai...gham raah mai khade thai vo hii saath hoo liye...khudh dil se dil kii baat kahii aur roo liye..yuu hassraton k daaG mohabto^n se dhoo liye.... aur bhii khuch kehnaa chaah rahe thai par ye gana kuch yaad dilaa gaya ab jaate hai.....fhir kabhiii bye! muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame.. ..... |
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26th August 2004, 04:40 PM
udas ji
apki "mujhe na mili" wali ye line ek bebasi ko dikha rahi hai,,aur sath hi kismat ki berookhi bhi...paapne nihayat hi k hoobsoorti se apne dil ki baat keh di hai...shayad yahi is nazm ki vishehsta hai,,per yakeen rakhiye,,khuda ke derbaar me der hain andher nahi,,,,,kabhi na k abhi apko wo khushi jaroor milegi,,ye meri dua hai aur kaamna bhi.... |
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27th August 2004, 02:52 PM
khuda ke derbaar me der hain andher nahi,,,,,kabhi na k abhi apko wo khushi jaroor milegi,,ye meri dua hai aur kaamna bhi....
Swati ji.....aapki in do lines ne mujhe jawab dene par majboor kar diya... swati ji agar is baat me sacchai hoti to aaj shayad main shayri.com per na hoti.....ye bhi ek sacchai hai... swati ji aap to bahut hi acchha likhti hai...ham to aapke aage kucchh bhi nahi...han ek gujarish karoongi...maine hindi stories forum per ek kahani shuru kari hai...abhi poori nahi hui...aap use vaqt nikal kar padne ki koshish kare.n pls. thanx for tareef udas |
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27th August 2004, 02:57 PM
guru mantraa detaa huu uska pichaa karnaa chhod do...gar woh tumhe milnii hogii naa tao tumhare pass aajayegii..warnaa...yuu na hoo jaye..Ghar se chaale thai hum tao khushii kii talaash mai...gham raah mai khade thai vo hii saath hoo liye...khudh dil se dil kii baat kahii aur roo liye..yuu hassraton k daaG mohabto^n se dhoo liye....
hanji ....sanju bhai....kaise ho....ajkal aapka mood bigra hua lag raha hai bhai kya ho gaya...any way..ye jo guru mantra diya hai vaise ek dam sahi hai....magar sanju kya karooo mujhme ek cheez nahi hai....use kya kehte hai....PAITIENCE yahi na iski mujhme bahut kami hai...per ek baat hai yaar aapne ye gaana mujhe suna kar mere hotho per halki si muskurahat la di....kyuki do din pehle main bhi yahi ga rahi thi.....vah kya baat hai...kitna co-incidence hai na..... chalo jaate jate thanx keh hi deti hooo nahi to kahoge kitni badtameez hai thanx bhi nahi kehti...ok bye... udas  |
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27th August 2004, 04:26 PM
helo afshan ji...
adaab!! tumse hasne ka vada kiya hai...isliye hase ja rahi hooooooo thanx 4 suggestions... trying to udas |
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Re: Khushi Na Mili -
27th August 2004, 05:13 PM
Khushiya.n bahut thi...magar mujhe na mili...
isko mili...usko mili....magar mujhe na mili... maine deepak jalaye...uske dar par.. maine sazde kiye...uske dar par... meri na-kaam koshishe...parvan charti rahi.. maine ansu bhaye...magar mujhe na mili.. UDAAS JI bahoooooot khoob !! yeh gazal padh to meine tab hi li thi jab aapne likha tha,,magar masrufiyat ke karan aapko reply tab na kar saka.......iske liye aapse kshama ("muafi" ke liye aapne mana kiya hai) chahata hoon aap bahooooot acha likh rahi hai aajkal,,,,khushiyan aapko mile aur aapke angan ki tumlsi ki tarah phalti-phulti rahe,,yehi dua hai,....sada khush rahiye aur haan...khushiyon ke liye khud ko dukhi na kariyega kabhi... take care -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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28th August 2004, 12:13 PM
Manoj ji...namaskaar
thanx aapko ye kalam aachha laga... apne tulsi ka likha....mere aangan me tulsi to hai...vo bar bhi rahi hai...per uske barne k hisab se...meri khushiya.n nahi... waise bhi manu ye grehasthi hai hi aisi cheez kuchh na kuchh laga hi rehta hai...kabhi dhoop jyada hai to kabhi chhav... bas u hi din beetTe chale jate hai...aur umer dar umer anubhavo ka daman pakre zindgi khisakti jaati hai... her nai subeh ham isi umeed main bister chhorte hai..ki aaj ka din acchha hoga...koi bhi ye sochna nahi chahta ki aaj ka din khraab ho...magar ye khushi to mrig-marichika ki tareh hai...door door se hame lalchati rehti hai..fir bhi manu....ye zindgi hai...khushi ho ya na ho...jab tak is janam me ye zindgi ka chola bhagwan se mila hai..ise pehnNa hi hai...vo kya hai ki mazboori ye hai ki...chola ek hi hai...ha.n iske rang apne aap badal jate hai...jaise...bachpan,jawani,grehsthi...burapa... isliye khushi mile na mile ise pehnNa meri majboori hai.. tumari udas |
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