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KhataaNaama -
14th June 2005, 06:07 AM
dosti wafaa aur ibadaat, inse kuch naata nahiN
kaun hai aapna paraaya, dil bataa paata nahiN Dosti mein doston ke, naam sab kuch kijiYee Badle mein 'kaatil' kisikaa, dost kehlaata nahiN Naam 'Qaatil' hai humhaara, isse rusvaayi nahi Naam-e-waafa to aur thi, dosti bhi nibh paayi nahiN Mil gayaa humko sabak, zakhmon par pyaar dikhaane ka Kaash na hoti khata, aapko samjhaata nahiN kaun hai aapna paraaya, dil bataa paata nahiN dosti wafaa aur ibadaat, inse kuch ................... Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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14th June 2005, 10:30 AM
dosti wafaa aur ibadaat, inse kuch naata nahiN
kaun hai aapna paraaya, dil bataa paata nahiN mere anu, dosti k dono pahlu barabar aa kar mujse mile hai... ek tarfa jaha dosti k naam par khanjar mila hai... to doosri or dosti ne hi muje mere vajood se mialya hai..... tumhari rachna ka dard sab ko chhu jaaye aisa hai...... apna khayal rakhna.... tumhari di |
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Re: KhataaNaama -
14th June 2005, 10:52 AM
Mil gayaa humko sabak, zakhmon par pyaar dikhaane ka
Kaash na hoti khata, aapko samjhaata nahiN di ki tarah main bhi yahin kahoongi...do roop hote hain dost ke...dost hi ruswaayian dete hain...par dost hi khusyion ka karan bhi dete hain... I really appreciate these lines...."Naam-e-waafa to aur thi, dosti bhi nibh paayi nahiN" Humari daad kabul farmaye! Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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Re: KhataaNaama -
14th June 2005, 04:19 PM
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Bhaiya .... dard me dubi ye rachana... alfaaz behad pasand aaye.. dost kayi hote hai lekin sach me dosti kinhi sakso se hi ho paati hai.. kayi log dost ban dushmani hi kar jaate hai, kaafi kam dost hi sache maayano me dosti nibhaa paate hai.. with lots of love ur's sis |
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14th June 2005, 04:27 PM
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likha hai aapne!Daad kaboul kijiyega! Amanush...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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14th June 2005, 05:05 PM
Mere Veer Anu.....
bahut khoob......kya likh diya hai tumne....... Naam 'Qaatil' hai humhaara, isse rusvaayi nahi Naam-e-waafa to aur thi, dosti bhi nibh paayi nahiN Mil gayaa humko sabak, zakhmon par pyaar dikhaane ka Kaash na hoti khata, aapko samjhaata nahiN ek sabak de reha hai lokaan nu......sach inhe dinaan baad aa ke ek vadiya kalaam..... dil khush kitta hai veer..... thuvada veer..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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3rd July 2005, 04:16 AM
di aapne sabse aage badhkar saath diya behad khushi huyi...aapke sikh mujhe barabar mili hai aur mein sehmat bhi hoon..koshish karungaa aage bhi mera likhaa aapke dil ko chuuta rahe
-aapka bachha Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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3rd July 2005, 04:18 AM
Shalini ji...behad aacha laga aapko yaha paakar..aapko yeh rachnaa pasand aayi aacha laga jaankar aur umeed hai aage likhi nazmon par bhi aap nazr-r-karam farmaati rahenGii
-aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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3rd July 2005, 04:40 AM
dear sis...sach mein tumne meri dil ki baat ko jaana hai..aage bhi yunhi saath deti rehNaa
-tumhara apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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3rd July 2005, 04:57 AM
Amanush sahab bahut arse baad nazar aaye hai aap..bhul to nahi gaye is dost ko...behad aacha laga aaj aapko yaha paakar..aage bhi yunhi saath dete rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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3rd July 2005, 05:10 AM
Veer ji..tuhada eh sabak sada yaad rahu mainu...naale dil ta tusi khush karde ho aithe aa ke...
es tarah hi saath dende raho.. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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3rd July 2005, 10:26 AM
Dear Anu Bhai,
Bohot Khushi mili aapko yaha vaapis paa kar itne khoobsurat alfaazo ke saath. Kuch ek nayi taazgi liye aaye hai aap ke kalaam. Bohot khoob mere bhai. Likhte rahe. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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3rd July 2005, 08:39 PM
are bhaiya ye to pehle wale se bhi behtar hai.bas aise hi likhte rahiye taki hum jaise nausakhiye kuch seekhte rahen.
aapka chota bhai LUCKY ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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19th June 2016, 11:26 PM
kehte hai ki shayar ke har alfaaz ke peeche ek kahaani hoti hai aur 10 saalon ke baad jab apna likha hi saamne aaye to yeh baat kitni sach lagti hai....
Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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20th June 2016, 06:54 AM
dosti wafaa aur ibadaat, inse kuch naata nahiN
kaun hai aapna paraaya, dil bataa paata nahiN ...... Waah!!! Bahut khoob kaha....... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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20th June 2016, 08:19 PM
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yunhi saath dete rahiYeQasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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