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Rang huaa jo unka laal eik nayi ghazal
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Red face Rang huaa jo unka laal eik nayi ghazal - 18th April 2012, 10:10 AM

dosto:
adaab. is nayi ghazal mein aaj ke halaat, aur nayee information tech ki vocabulary ka paryog kiaya hai. bataaye kaisi lagi aapko.
aapke comments ka intzaar rahega.
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RANG HUAA JO UNKA LAAL


raNg huaa, jo uNka laal, sochnaa pRaa
hayaa THee voh, yaa THaa gulaal, sochnaa pRaa

insaaf kaa traazoo, jab soneiN meiN dhal gyaa
munsiff bhi, ban gyaa dalaal ,sochnaa pRaa

dabaaye nhiN, dabti khabar, CHupaaye nhiN CHupe
cell phone, email kaa kamaal, sochnaa pRaa

voTeiN bhi, bik rahiN, voter bhi bik rahe
is desh ka, kyaa hogaa haal, sochnaa pRaa

kaun ho, tum ‘Ashk’, miyaaN tum ho kaun
aayinaa, jab kiye swaal, sochnaa pRaa

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18th April 2012, 08:16 PM

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dosto:
adaab. is nayi ghazal mein aaj ke halaat, aur nayee information tech ki vocabulary ka paryog kiaya hai. bataaye kaisi lagi aapko.
aapke comments ka intzaar rahega.
Rab Rakha


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RANG HUAA JO UNKA LAAL


raNg huaa, jo uNka laal, sochnaa pRaa
hayaa THee voh, yaa THaa gulaal, sochnaa pRaa

insaaf kaa traazoo, jab soneiN meiN dhal gyaa
munsiff bhi, ban gyaa dalaal ,sochnaa pRaa

dabaaye nhiN, dabti khabar, CHupaaye nhiN CHupe
cell phone, email kaa kamaal, sochnaa pRaa

voTeiN bhi, bik rahiN yahaaN, voter bhi bik rahe
is desh ka, kyaa hogaa haal, sochnaa pRaa

kaun ho, tum ‘Ashk’, miyaaN tum ho kaun
aayinaa, jab kiye swaal, sochnaa pRaa

munsiff-judge, dalaal-banker, aayinaa-mirror

dosto shayer #4 mein miss ho gaya tha, revise kiyaa hai. Sorry for inconvenience
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28th June 2012, 08:05 PM

Chalo teeq hai...... Naye duniya ke naye khayaal......sochna pada
Koshish toh achhi hai...

voTeiN bhi, bik rahiN yahaaN, voter bhi bik rahe
is desh ka, kyaa hogaa haal, sochnaa pRaa


Yeh line bohot achha laga


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Smile Rang huaa jo unka laal - 3rd July 2012, 01:34 AM

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Chalo teeq hai...... Naye duniya ke naye khayaal......sochna pada
Koshish toh achhi hai...

voTeiN bhi, bik rahiN yahaaN, voter bhi bik rahe
is desh ka, kyaa hogaa haal, sochnaa pRaa


Yeh line bohot achha laga
Shukriya janaab Vinay Sahib

Aapko mera klaam kuch psand aaya. Rab Raakha

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