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Rang huaa jo unka laal eik nayi ghazal -
18th April 2012, 10:10 AM
dosto:
adaab. is nayi ghazal mein aaj ke halaat, aur nayee information tech ki vocabulary ka paryog kiaya hai. bataaye kaisi lagi aapko.
aapke comments ka intzaar rahega.
Rab Rakha
Hardev Ashk
RANG HUAA JO UNKA LAAL
raNg huaa, jo uNka laal, sochnaa pRaa
hayaa THee voh, yaa THaa gulaal, sochnaa pRaa
insaaf kaa traazoo, jab soneiN meiN dhal gyaa
munsiff bhi, ban gyaa dalaal ,sochnaa pRaa
dabaaye nhiN, dabti khabar, CHupaaye nhiN CHupe
cell phone, email kaa kamaal, sochnaa pRaa
voTeiN bhi, bik rahiN, voter bhi bik rahe
is desh ka, kyaa hogaa haal, sochnaa pRaa
kaun ho, tum ‘Ashk’, miyaaN tum ho kaun
aayinaa, jab kiye swaal, sochnaa pRaa
munsiff-judge, dalaal-banker, aayinaa-mirror
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18th April 2012, 08:16 PM
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Originally Posted by Hardev Ashk
dosto:
adaab. is nayi ghazal mein aaj ke halaat, aur nayee information tech ki vocabulary ka paryog kiaya hai. bataaye kaisi lagi aapko.
aapke comments ka intzaar rahega.
Rab Rakha
Hardev Ashk
RANG HUAA JO UNKA LAAL
raNg huaa, jo uNka laal, sochnaa pRaa
hayaa THee voh, yaa THaa gulaal, sochnaa pRaa
insaaf kaa traazoo, jab soneiN meiN dhal gyaa
munsiff bhi, ban gyaa dalaal ,sochnaa pRaa
dabaaye nhiN, dabti khabar, CHupaaye nhiN CHupe
cell phone, email kaa kamaal, sochnaa pRaa
voTeiN bhi, bik rahiN yahaaN, voter bhi bik rahe
is desh ka, kyaa hogaa haal, sochnaa pRaa
kaun ho, tum ‘Ashk’, miyaaN tum ho kaun
aayinaa, jab kiye swaal, sochnaa pRaa
munsiff-judge, dalaal-banker, aayinaa-mirror
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dosto shayer #4 mein miss ho gaya tha, revise kiyaa hai. Sorry for inconvenience
Ashk
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28th June 2012, 08:05 PM
Chalo teeq hai...... Naye duniya ke naye khayaal......sochna pada
Koshish toh achhi hai...
voTeiN bhi, bik rahiN yahaaN, voter bhi bik rahe
is desh ka, kyaa hogaa haal, sochnaa pRaa
Yeh line bohot achha laga
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Rang huaa jo unka laal -
3rd July 2012, 01:34 AM
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Originally Posted by alien_sadhu
Chalo teeq hai...... Naye duniya ke naye khayaal......sochna pada
Koshish toh achhi hai...
voTeiN bhi, bik rahiN yahaaN, voter bhi bik rahe
is desh ka, kyaa hogaa haal, sochnaa pRaa
Yeh line bohot achha laga
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Shukriya janaab Vinay Sahib
Aapko mera klaam kuch psand aaya. Rab Raakha
Hardev Ashk
PATHAR KO POOJTE HUYE
SAAGAR MEIN JHOOMTE HUYE
'ASHK' NE GUZAAR DI UMR
KHUD HI SE JHOOJTE HUYE
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