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15th January 2013, 10:54 PM
This nazm is for all the Pakistaani military men ( not citizen).baaki jise bura lage lagtaa rahe ..
Jai Hind
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Hai jiska kaaTa sar toone tere sar pe khada hai woH
Are wo baap tha tera ab usse bhi bada hai woH
Mare ko maarna bolo tumheN Maa ne sikhaya hai
To kya fir doodh k badle lahu usne pilaya hai
Ho tum bahshi darinde bhes insaani banaya hai
Tumhen maloom kya.. Kya hai vatan aur kya shaheedi hai
Tumhi ne bech kar mitti misail har khareedi hai
bade khush ho ki tumne apne muNh mitti puleedi hai
Ho tum taak mein baithy ke kab *cheeNka ye TooTega
Are khsiyaani biilli bhaag tera sar hi fooTega
Banaya hai jamayee jisko ghar ik din wo lootega
bas ik mazhab ki leke aad khoon insaniyaT ka uff
Dikhaaya khoob hai manzar humeN haiwaniyaT ka uff
to kya aulaad nazayaj hai tu birtaaniyaT ki uff
cHupe ho Gaar meiN kiski kab apna tamboo taanoge
batao kab talak auroN se rooTi bheekh maaNgoge
huM hi haiN baap aur ik din humiN ko baap manoge
Cheenkaa...Kashmir ...
jamayee.. china
mitti puleedana... to *****...
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15th January 2013, 11:08 PM
Vikas bhai ,
Namaskar ..apko apne sang wapis dekh kar bari khushi
mehsoos ho rahi hai aur umeed hain ki aap la saath un hi
milta rahega aage bhi.
Apke is gazal me hum aap ke zazbe ko salam karte hain
regds
sanjay sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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15th January 2013, 11:27 PM
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Originally Posted by janumanu
This nazm is for all the Pakistaani military men ( not citizen).baaki jise bura lage lagtaa rahe ..
Jai Hind
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Hai jiska kaaTa sar toone tere sar pe khada hai woH
Are wo baap tha tera ab usse bhi bada hai woH
Mare ko maarna bolo tumheN Maa ne sikhaya hai
To kya fir doodh k badle lahu usne pilaya hai
Ho tum bahshi darinde bhes insaani banaya hai
Tumhen maloom kya.. Kya hai vatan aur kya shaheedi hai
Tumhi ne bech kar mitti misail har khareedi hai
bade khush ho ki tumne apne muNh mitti puleedi hai
Ho tum taak mein baithy ke kab *cheeNka ye TooTega
Are khsiyaani biilli bhaag tera sar hi fooTega
Banaya hai jamayee jisko ghar ik din wo lootega
bas ik mazhab ki leke aad khoon insaniyaT ka uff
Dikhaaya khoob hai manzar humeN haiwaniyaT ka uff
to kya aulaad nazayaj hai tu birtaaniyaT ki uff
cHupe ho Gaar meiN kiski kab apna tamboo taanoge
batao kab talak auroN se rooTi bheekh maaNgoge
huM hi haiN baap aur ik din humiN ko baap manoge
Cheenkaa...Kashmir ...
jamayee.. china
mitti puleedana... to *****...
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ye kya kah diya aapne ...ki maa ne lahu pilaya hai...
meter veter gaya bhaD me....*************
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15th January 2013, 11:35 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by janumanu
This nazm is for all the Pakistaani military men ( not citizen).baaki jise bura lage lagtaa rahe ..
Jai Hind
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Hai jiska kaaTa sar toone tere sar pe khada hai woH
Are wo baap tha tera ab usse bhi bada hai woH
Mare ko maarna bolo tumheN Maa ne sikhaya hai
To kya fir doodh k badle lahu usne pilaya hai
Ho tum bahshi darinde bhes insaani banaya hai
Tumhen maloom kya.. Kya hai vatan aur kya shaheedi hai
Tumhi ne bech kar mitti misail har khareedi hai
bade khush ho ki tumne apne muNh mitti puleedi hai
Ho tum taak mein baithy ke kab *cheeNka ye TooTega
Are khsiyaani biilli bhaag tera sar hi fooTega
Banaya hai jamayee jisko ghar ik din wo lootega
bas ik mazhab ki leke aad khoon insaniyaT ka uff
Dikhaaya khoob hai manzar humeN haiwaniyaT ka uff
to kya aulaad nazayaj hai tu birtaaniyaT ki uff
cHupe ho Gaar meiN kiski kab apna tamboo taanoge
batao kab talak auroN se rooTi bheekh maaNgoge
huM hi haiN baap aur ik din humiN ko baap manoge
Cheenkaa...Kashmir ...
jamayee.. china
mitti puleedana... to ******...
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Waah, Vikas Bhai, kyaa khoob likhaa hai aapne...! I liked it very much that as intro you wrote that this is for pakistani military ( not for citizen )...!
I will come here again soon...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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15th January 2013, 11:43 PM
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ye kya kah diya aapne ...ki maa ne lahu pilaya hai...
meter veter gaya bhaD me....*******
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You are 100% right, Zidd saab...!
Special reps for you...!
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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15th January 2013, 11:47 PM
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You are 100% right, Zidd saab...!
Special reps for you...!
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and what for me... half comment ...
khair main kuch aur hi lene aayaa hun...
aur mangungaa ni cheen lunga
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15th January 2013, 11:50 PM
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Vikas bhai ,
Namaskar ..apko apne sang wapis dekh kar bari khushi
mehsoos ho rahi hai aur umeed hain ki aap la saath un hi
milta rahega aage bhi.
Apke is gazal me hum aap ke zazbe ko salam karte hain
regds
sanjay sehgal
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jisko jaane se dukh na ho
jo jaane par na Toke
wo aane pe kya khush hoga sahab...
khair waise main aayaa nahi laya gaya hun..
kisi ki kuch line yaad aayee
Mehfil meiN teri bulaya gaya hun
ye sach hai yaha pe main laya gya hun
maiN khuddar hun bin bulaye na aauN
bhala aisi mahfil main kyun kar maiN jaauN
jahaN se humesha uthaya gaya hun ....
ye sach hai yaha pe main laya gya hun
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aur fir sanjay sahab mera dost hone ko mujh jaisa hona padta hai
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16th January 2013, 01:24 AM
socha to tha ki yahaaN par kuch bhi nahi kahuNga, par agar is baat pe nahin kehta, to maiN na is vatan ka raha aur na hi insaan, waise sachhayi ye hai ki pakistaani soldiers ya army meN shayad ab insaan bache hi nahiN haiN, mazaak bana diya hai ceasefire ka, aur international laws of war prisoners ka, Geneva Convetion aur sab bekaar haiN...
Waise jaanwaroN ke bhi kuch kanoon aur qaayde hote haiN aapas meN, par shayad pakistaani army ke in logoN ke liye jo alfaaz sahi honge, waise vehsiyat bhare alfaaz kisi bhi jubaaN meN na hoN... aise logoN ke dosh pe trials vagairah nahiN hone chahiye, bas seedha beech bazaar men latkaa dena chahiye...
Shame on pakistani military and there officials which initiates such inhuman acts... aise logoN ko saans lene ka haq bhi nahin hai, inhe society se aur duniya ki har jagah se, chaahe, social networking websites hoN ya koi forum, har jagah se bahiskrit kar dena chahiye...
Mirza saahab majbur huN, ye bhi nahin keh sakta ki ahcha laga aapko padh kar, haaN aakrosh hai, aur bhdaash thodi nikli, aur maiN apni baat pe kaayam huN, har us insaan ka har jagah se bahiskaar karna chahiye, jiska bhi taalluk pakistaani military se ho, agar vo khud ko insaan samajhte hain to...
Allah haafiz...
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16th January 2013, 01:28 AM
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ye kya kah diya aapne ...ki maa ne lahu pilaya hai...
meter veter gaya bhaD me....***********
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***************shayad meri vocabulary thodi kamjor hai, nahin to agar isse bhi kathor lafz hon, to unka istemaal karna chahiye...
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16th January 2013, 06:57 AM
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jisko jaane se dukh na ho
jo jaane par na Toke
wo aane pe kya khush hoga sahab...
khair waise main aayaa nahi laya gaya hun..
kisi ki kuch line yaad aayee
Mehfil meiN teri bulaya gaya hun
ye sach hai yaha pe main laya gya hun
maiN khuddar hun bin bulaye na aauN
bhala aisi mahfil main kyun kar maiN jaauN
jahaN se humesha uthaya gaya hun ....
ye sach hai yaha pe main laya gya hun
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Vikas Bhai,
Aap aye hain ya bulaye gayen hain....
main to is baat se mutaasir hun ki aap phir se hamare humniwala,
humpiyala aur hamdam ban gaye hain ....
Dil se kah raha hoon ( no buttering) aak ko wapis dekh kar nihayat khushi hui..
Hum aapki khudari ki respect karte hain aur yeh expect karte hain ki aap bhi
apna baraapn dhikhaate rahen aur is taarah mehfiil mein aate rahen..
Aapke ane ki khusi maine NAHIN CHORUN TERI BAYIAN LIKH DALI MAINE..
pls read it in shayi E Ishka thread..
regds
sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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16th January 2013, 10:29 AM
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Vikas Bhai,
Aap aye hain ya bulaye gayen hain....
main to is baat se mutaasir hun ki aap phir se hamare humniwala,
humpiyala aur hamdam ban gaye hain ....
Dil se kah raha hoon ( no buttering) aak ko wapis dekh kar nihayat khushi hui..
Hum aapki khudari ki respect karte hain aur yeh expect karte hain ki aap bhi
apna baraapn dhikhaate rahen aur is taarah mehfiil mein aate rahen..
Aapke ane ki khusi maine NAHIN CHORUN TERI BAYIAN LIKH DALI MAINE..
pls read it in shayi E Ishka thread..
regds
sanjay Sehgal
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abhi kaha aaya hun janaab abhi to jinse jabaab lena hai ... Wo aa hi nahi rahe..
Aap jis baat ko mamooli samjh rahe hai... Wo mere liye mamooli nahi...
thanks ... Aapse milta hun jald hi..
pm me ur phone no
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16th January 2013, 04:30 PM
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16th January 2013, 10:58 PM
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socha to tha ki yahaaN par kuch bhi nahi kahuNga, par agar is baat pe nahin kehta, to maiN na is vatan ka raha aur na hi insaan, waise sachhayi ye hai ki pakistaani soldiers ya army meN shayad ab insaan bache hi nahiN haiN, mazaak bana diya hai ceasefire ka, aur international laws of war prisoners ka, Geneva Convetion aur sab bekaar haiN...
Waise jaanwaroN ke bhi kuch kanoon aur qaayde hote haiN aapas meN, par shayad pakistaani army ke in logoN ke liye jo alfaaz sahi honge, waise vehsiyat bhare alfaaz kisi bhi jubaaN meN na hoN... aise logoN ke dosh pe trials vagairah nahiN hone chahiye, bas seedha beech bazaar men latkaa dena chahiye...
Shame on pakistani military and there officials which initiates such inhuman acts... aise logoN ko saans lene ka haq bhi nahin hai, inhe society se aur duniya ki har jagah se, chaahe, social networking websites hoN ya koi forum, har jagah se bahiskrit kar dena chahiye...
Mirza saahab majbur huN, ye bhi nahin keh sakta ki ahcha laga aapko padh kar, haaN aakrosh hai, aur bhdaash thodi nikli, aur maiN apni baat pe kaayam huN, har us insaan ka har jagah se bahiskaar karna chahiye, jiska bhi taalluk pakistaani military se ho, agar vo khud ko insaan samajhte hain to...
Allah haafiz...
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bilkul bahut sahi kaha ..............
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16th January 2013, 11:20 PM
wah kya baat
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17th January 2013, 12:17 AM
Vikas bhai ..
Mai aapke watan parasti ke juzbe ki kadr karta hu
bahut khatarnaak tevar ke sath bahut achha likha hai.
daad
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wah kya baat
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Vikas bhai ..
Mai aapke watan parasti ke juzbe ki kadr karta hu
bahut khatarnaak tevar ke sath bahut achha likha hai.
daad
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bhayee khaaq vatanparsti hai apni
Jo vatan parast hue .. Wo dunia hi chhod gaye..
Bas bhayee.
Bahut apne khoye hain is sarhad pe..
aisa hi mere bahut apne k sath kiya tha... U must hav heard about sourab kaliya.. Bhayee hai wo mere... Unke sath b pak army ne yahi kiya tha...
Ab bolo ek bhayee kis lahje mein baat kare .
Bas bahana koe aur ban gaya... Barna baat to wahi thi ...
Shukriyaa pasand karne k liye
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20th January 2013, 06:29 PM
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This nazm is for all the Pakistaani military men ( not citizen).baaki jise bura lage lagtaa rahe ..
Jai Hind
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Hai jiska kaaTa sar toone tere sar pe khada hai woH
Are wo baap tha tera ab usse bhi bada hai woH
Mare ko maarna bolo tumheN Maa ne sikhaya hai
To kya fir doodh k badle lahu usne pilaya hai
Ho tum bahshi darinde bhes insaani banaya hai
Tumhen maloom kya.. Kya hai vatan aur kya shaheedi hai
Tumhi ne bech kar mitti misail har khareedi hai
bade khush ho ki tumne apne muNh mitti puleedi hai
Ho tum taak mein baithy ke kab *cheeNka ye TooTega
Are khsiyaani biilli bhaag tera sar hi fooTega
Banaya hai jamayee jisko ghar ik din wo lootega
bas ik mazhab ki leke aad khoon insaniyaT ka uff
Dikhaaya khoob hai manzar humeN haiwaniyaT ka uff
to kya aulaad nazayaj hai tu birtaaniyaT ki uff
cHupe ho Gaar meiN kiski kab apna tamboo taanoge
batao kab talak auroN se rooTi bheekh maaNgoge
huM hi haiN baap aur ik din humiN ko baap manoge
Cheenkaa...Kashmir ...
jamayee.. china
mitti puleedana... to *****...
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WaaH ! Vikas Bhai !!
Kyaa Kaifiyat Hai ... Kyaa Ehsaasaat HaiN ... Kyaa Nazm Huii Hai !
Likhne Kaa Huque Adaa Kar Diyaa
Bahut UmdaaH ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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