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Ghazal- Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai - 5th June 2014, 07:49 PM
Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.

Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai

Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai

Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai

Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai

JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai

Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai

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Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.

Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai

Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai

Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai

Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai

JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to jalaa huaa hai

Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
Aadaab wa khushAamDeed once again mayray bhaee!!
Tareef kay liyay alfaaz ki kami mahsoos kar raha hoon bhaee.... pure n sheer absoĉute class!!!
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Sub'hanAllah!

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Tareef kay liyay alfaaz ki kami mahsoos kar raha hoon bhaee.... pure n sheer absoĉute class!!!
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Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.

Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai

Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai

Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai

Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai

JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai

Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai

sabhii ki cigarette sulag rahii hai,
Tumhaara cigarette bujhaa huaa hai........
   
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aapko sdc par dekh kar khushi hui. Ghazal ke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye . . aate rahiye. .bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye aage bhi

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Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.

Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai

Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai

Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai

Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai

JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai

Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
Ek alag hi aandaaz-e-bayaan hai aapka dost...sabhi sher pur asar hai...daad qubool farmiyee

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namaste

aapko sdc par dekh kar khushi hui. Ghazal ke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye . . aate rahiye. .bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye aage bhi

khusb taheb. apnaa khayaal rakheb

duaaon ke saath inaazat

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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai

matle ne jo is kalaam ki khoobsurtii badhaa dii hai bhai wo bbayaan nahi ki jaa saktii.... Nashshaa.... waahhh kyaa andaaz hai janaab.... aala bahot aalaa.

Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai

haasile ghazaal sher kaahunga main ise.... kyaa likhte ho yaar.... kamaal ho gaye ho tum... bahot balandiyon pe pahoch gaye ho mere bhai... shaayad meri daad bhi wahaan tak na pahoch sake... magar dil se yahi duaa hai ke jo bhi likho wo heera ho jaae... ho zore kalam aur se aur zyaada.... salaamat raho

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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
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matle ne jo is kalaam ki khoobsurtii badhaa dii hai bhai wo bbayaan nahi ki jaa saktii.... Nashshaa.... waahhh kyaa andaaz hai janaab.... aala bahot aalaa.

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haasile ghazaal sher kaahunga main ise.... kyaa likhte ho yaar.... kamaal ho gaye ho tum... bahot balandiyon pe pahoch gaye ho mere bhai... shaayad meri daad bhi wahaan tak na pahoch sake... magar dil se yahi duaa hai ke jo bhi likho wo heera ho jaae... ho zore kalam aur se aur zyaada.... salaamat raho

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Sada sa matla kaha tha aapki nazar e inaayat ne ise ek khoobshrat sher ki shaql ataa ki. Isi jagah se safar ki shuruaat huii thi chand mukhtalif raastoN se guzar kar wapas yahiN huN.

Aapne jo izzat bakhshi uska na to maiN haqq daar huN na hi khwahishmand. Jo bhi hai sab aap bhaaiyoN ki muhabbat hi hai jisne hamesha aage badhte rahne ke liye prerit kiya.

I am highly thankful to you and this forum for adding inspiration and support in such a way that I feel myself unable to express my feelings.

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Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.

Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai

Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai

Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai

Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai

JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai

Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
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Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai

Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai

Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai

Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai

JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai

Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
Anjaan sahab aadaab......aaka peshkarda kalaam bahoot hi behtareen hua hai....khuda aapki kalam ko our bhi roushani bakshe ....daad
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baho hi aalaa ghazal pesh kii hai, bhai....
matle aur makte meN to aapne kamaal hi kar diya......

waah hi waah, meri taraf se
Aadaab Aadeil sahab
Bahut bahut shukrguzaar huN aapka. Aapko ashaar pasand aana meri khushfahmi ka sabab bana hai. Umeed karta huN aage bhi aapka saath milta rahega

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Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
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Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
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Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai

JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai

Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
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Kaise hain aap? Deri se reply ke liye mazrat khwaah hun. Kambakht waqt ke haathon majboor ho jata hun.

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Mujhy pata hai bura hua hai..............behetreen

Ghazal ke tamaam aashaar achay hue magr ghazal ke aakhri sher ka jawaab nhi daad paish e khimat hai qubool farmaaiye

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Aapki muhabbatoN par, aapki inaayatoN par bahut khushi hui. Aapko ghazal pasand aa gayi to dil ko taskeen ho gayi ki ghazal achchi hai. Aage bhi aapka maargdarshan milta rahe yahi aasha rakhta hooN.

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