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5th June 2014, 07:49 PM
Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.
Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai
JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai
Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
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Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.
Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai
JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to jalaa huaa hai
Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
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Aadaab wa khushAamDeed once again mayray bhaee!!
Tareef kay liyay alfaaz ki kami mahsoos kar raha hoon bhaee.... pure n sheer absoĉute class!!!
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Sub'hanAllah!
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Masha Allah bohat khoob Sumit ji...
Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain...Reps added+++
Aapne meri baat rakh li aur Sdc per dubaara laut aate..iske liye main tah e dil se ek baar phir aapki shukrguzaar huun..
yuhi likhte rahiye aur mehfil ki raunak badhate rahiye..
Zainy
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5th June 2014, 08:28 PM
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Aadaab wa khushAamDeed once again mayray bhaee!!
Tareef kay liyay alfaaz ki kami mahsoos kar raha hoon bhaee.... pure n sheer absoĉute class!!!
....... gem!!
Sub'hanAllah!
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5th June 2014, 08:38 PM
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Masha Allah bohat khoob Sumit ji...
Sabhi ashaar laajawaab hain...Reps added+++
Aapne meri baat rakh li aur Sdc per dubaara laut aate..iske liye main tah e dil se ek baar phir aapki shukrguzaar huun..
yuhi likhte rahiye aur mehfil ki raunak badhate rahiye..
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6th June 2014, 03:03 PM
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Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.
Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai
JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai
Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
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sabhii ki cigarette sulag rahii hai,
Tumhaara cigarette bujhaa huaa hai........
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6th June 2014, 09:23 PM
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sabhii ki cigarette sulag rahii hai,
Tumhaara cigarette bujhaa huaa hai........
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6th June 2014, 10:04 PM
sumeet bhaii
namaste
aapko sdc par dekh kar khushi hui. Ghazal ke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye . . aate rahiye. .bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye aage bhi
khusb taheb. apnaa khayaal rakheb
duaaon ke saath inaazat
aapka
Dhaval
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*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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6th June 2014, 11:13 PM
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Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.
Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai
JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai
Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
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Ek alag hi aandaaz-e-bayaan hai aapka dost...sabhi sher pur asar hai...daad qubool farmiyee
aapka apnaa
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7th June 2014, 08:58 PM
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sumeet bhaii
namaste
aapko sdc par dekh kar khushi hui. Ghazal ke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye . . aate rahiye. .bazm ki shaan badhaate rahiye aage bhi
khusb taheb. apnaa khayaal rakheb
duaaon ke saath inaazat
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Shukriya Dhaval sahab. Aapki inaayat bani rahe bus yahi khwahish hai. Kalaam aapne padha aur pasand kiya behad khushi huii.
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7th June 2014, 09:09 PM
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Ek alag hi aandaaz-e-bayaan hai aapka dost...sabhi sher pur asar hai...daad qubool farmiyee
aapka apnaa
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Aaj dil aap meN nahiN aata
Mere ahbaab mire mast hue....
Mast sahab behad shukriya nawaazish ka. Aage bhi yun hi saath deejiyega.
Apna dhyaan rakhiyega
Shukriya
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7th June 2014, 09:34 PM
Waah bahaut khoob Anjaan ji !!! Umdah khayaal aur taazgee bhara bayaan !!! Dheron daad aap ko !!!
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Waah bahaut khoob Anjaan ji !!! Umdah khayaal aur taazgee bhara bayaan !!! Dheron daad aap ko !!!
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8th June 2014, 03:37 PM
Bahut -2 Achchi ghazal hai bhai......nashsha me'n tashdiid Ka istemaal alag aur naya raha......tc
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Bahut -2 Achchi ghazal hai bhai......nashsha me'n tashdiid Ka istemaal alag aur naya raha......tc
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9th June 2014, 03:00 PM
Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
matle ne jo is kalaam ki khoobsurtii badhaa dii hai bhai wo bbayaan nahi ki jaa saktii.... Nashshaa.... waahhh kyaa andaaz hai janaab.... aala bahot aalaa.
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
haasile ghazaal sher kaahunga main ise.... kyaa likhte ho yaar.... kamaal ho gaye ho tum... bahot balandiyon pe pahoch gaye ho mere bhai... shaayad meri daad bhi wahaan tak na pahoch sake... magar dil se yahi duaa hai ke jo bhi likho wo heera ho jaae... ho zore kalam aur se aur zyaada.... salaamat raho
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9th June 2014, 03:21 PM
Achi Ghazal Hui Hai Anjan Sahab....
DAAAAAAAAAD
Likhtay Rahiye
Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi
AHMAD ALI SHAKIL
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9th June 2014, 06:06 PM
Sumitji, adaab...
baho hi aalaa ghazal pesh kii hai, bhai....
matle aur makte meN to aapne kamaal hi kar diya......
waah hi waah, meri taraf se
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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Sunder prastuti
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
matle ne jo is kalaam ki khoobsurtii badhaa dii hai bhai wo bbayaan nahi ki jaa saktii.... Nashshaa.... waahhh kyaa andaaz hai janaab.... aala bahot aalaa.
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
haasile ghazaal sher kaahunga main ise.... kyaa likhte ho yaar.... kamaal ho gaye ho tum... bahot balandiyon pe pahoch gaye ho mere bhai... shaayad meri daad bhi wahaan tak na pahoch sake... magar dil se yahi duaa hai ke jo bhi likho wo heera ho jaae... ho zore kalam aur se aur zyaada.... salaamat raho
Shaad....
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Sada sa matla kaha tha aapki nazar e inaayat ne ise ek khoobshrat sher ki shaql ataa ki. Isi jagah se safar ki shuruaat huii thi chand mukhtalif raastoN se guzar kar wapas yahiN huN.
Aapne jo izzat bakhshi uska na to maiN haqq daar huN na hi khwahishmand. Jo bhi hai sab aap bhaaiyoN ki muhabbat hi hai jisne hamesha aage badhte rahne ke liye prerit kiya.
I am highly thankful to you and this forum for adding inspiration and support in such a way that I feel myself unable to express my feelings.
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13th June 2014, 12:20 PM
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Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.
Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai
JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai
Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
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bahut khoob likha hai anjaan bhai.............radhe radhe
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13th June 2014, 09:34 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.
Ghazal
.............
Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai
JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai
Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
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Anjaan sahab aadaab......aaka peshkarda kalaam bahoot hi behtareen hua hai....khuda aapki kalam ko our bhi roushani bakshe ....daad
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17th June 2014, 09:45 AM
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Achi Ghazal Hui Hai Anjan Sahab....
DAAAAAAAAAD
Likhtay Rahiye
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Sabse pahle deri se reply ke liye muaafi ka arzmand huN.
Aapki daad aur beshkeemati muhabbat par behad mamnoon huN bhai. Aap aaye bahut achcha laga. Sirf saath banaaye rakhiye, koii daad is se ziyada keemati nahiN hoti. Behad shukriya
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Sumitji, adaab...
baho hi aalaa ghazal pesh kii hai, bhai....
matle aur makte meN to aapne kamaal hi kar diya......
waah hi waah, meri taraf se
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Bahut bahut shukrguzaar huN aapka. Aapko ashaar pasand aana meri khushfahmi ka sabab bana hai. Umeed karta huN aage bhi aapka saath milta rahega
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17th June 2014, 09:31 PM
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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
Ek ghazal ke kuch ashaar aap ahbaab ki nazar kar raha huN.
Ghazal
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Riwaaj kaisa chala huaa hai
Sabhi ne nashsha kiya huaa hai
Uthi huii haiN sabhi ki aankheN
Bas ek chehra jhuka huaa hai
Hamaare seene meN dil hai ab bhi
To iski dhadkan ko kya huaa hai
Bataao basti jali to kaise
Tumhara cigarette bujha huaa hai
JahaaN meN phaila rahe ujala
Hamara dil to bujha huaa hai
Sab achcha-achcha to kah rahe haiN
Mujhe pata hai bura huaa hai
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Shandaar ghazal ke liye bahut si daad aapko
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bahut khoob likha hai anjaan bhai.............radhe radhe
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Raadhe raadhe ishk bhai
Kaise hain aap? Deri se reply ke liye mazrat khwaah hun. Kambakht waqt ke haathon majboor ho jata hun.
Aapki daad mili, behad inaayat hui bhai. Aage bhi aapse sath ki ummeed hai.
Aapka apna
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Anjaan sahab aadaab......aaka peshkarda kalaam bahoot hi behtareen hua hai....khuda aapki kalam ko our bhi roushani bakshe ....daad
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Aadaab Harsh sahab
Aapki inayat hai jo aap haqeer par itni inaayat karam faram rahe hain. Aapka behad shukriya adaa karta hun.
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Shandaar ghazal ke liye bahut si daad aapko
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Abhi sahab ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye aapka behad aabhaar vyakt karta hun. Bhavishya men bhi aapse ummeeden rakhunga...
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20th June 2014, 11:42 AM
Sab acha acha to keh rahe haiN
Mujhy pata hai bura hua hai..............behetreen
Ghazal ke tamaam aashaar achay hue magr ghazal ke aakhri sher ka jawaab nhi daad paish e khimat hai qubool farmaaiye
aslam
zindagi ke haseen lamhe ka
Khoobsurat sa intekhaab ho tum
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Behad Khoobsurat Ghazal keliye daad qubool kijiye Sumitji....
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Shukriya Nazneen ji
aapka bahut bahut shukriya ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye.
Namaskar
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Sab acha acha to keh rahe haiN
Mujhy pata hai bura hua hai..............behetreen
Ghazal ke tamaam aashaar achay hue magr ghazal ke aakhri sher ka jawaab nhi daad paish e khimat hai qubool farmaaiye
aslam
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Aapki muhabbatoN par, aapki inaayatoN par bahut khushi hui. Aapko ghazal pasand aa gayi to dil ko taskeen ho gayi ki ghazal achchi hai. Aage bhi aapka maargdarshan milta rahe yahi aasha rakhta hooN.
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