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zikr tera zikre bahaar ho jaise...(Gazal) - 13th December 2014, 05:55 AM
Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka bhut sara pyaar...dosto apni ek nayii koshish or umeed ke saath hazir hoo.n aapke saath ka intezaar rahega...


Zikr tera zikre bahaar ho jaise,
Beqraari mei.n qraar ho jaise..

Sunta nahi.n hai meri ik bhii,
Dil pe tera ikhtyaar ho jaise..

Tune nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise..

Har shaii tujhe dekhne ko tarse,
Har koii tera bimaar ho jaise..

Roshan hai yu.n tujhse dunia meri,
Maaho aaftaab bekaar ho jaise..

Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..

Tere bin kush bhii nazar nahi aataa,
'Veer' par tera khumaar ho jaise..

Aapki raye ka muntzir....Raj..

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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13th December 2014, 03:36 PM
Rajveeer ji, kya khoob likha hai.
Bohot badhiya, har ek sheyr pe alag alag daad.
Yunhi mehfil ko rounaq bakhshte rahiye.

aapka khair khwah

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14th December 2014, 06:43 AM
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Bahot ache Rajveerji, bahot mazaa aaya pad kar, yuhi likhte rahiye
Shukria hardeep ji jo aapne apna keemti waqt nikala...sàath dete rahiyega..Raj...

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14th December 2014, 10:22 AM
une nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise.


amaaa waahhhhh............ kya sher kah diyaa raj paaji...

mmazaa aa gayaaa kya roomaani kalaam likha hai aapne... bas daad hi daad pesh hai... likhte rahiye

Shaad....

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17th December 2014, 06:30 AM
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Rajveeer ji, kya khoob likha hai.
Bohot badhiya, har ek sheyr pe alag alag daad.
Yunhi mehfil ko rounaq bakhshte rahiye.

aapka khair khwah

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17th December 2014, 08:44 AM
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Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka bhut sara pyaar...dosto apni ek nayii koshish or umeed ke saath hazir hoo.n aapke saath ka intezaar rahega...


Zikr tera zikre bahaar ho jaise,
Beqraari mei.n qraar ho jaise..

Sunta nahi.n hai meri ik bhii,
Dil pe tera ikhtyaar ho jaise..

Tune nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise..

Har shaii tujhe dekhne ko tarse,
Har koii tera bimaar ho jaise..

Roshan hai yu.n tujhse dunia meri,
Maaho aaftaab bekaar ho jaise..

Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..

Tere bin kush bhii nazar nahi aataa,
'Veer' par tera khumaar ho jaise..

Aapki raye ka muntzir....Raj..
Good one Rajveer, well written


Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..

Nice

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20th December 2014, 03:25 AM
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une nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise.


amaaa waahhhhh............ kya sher kah diyaa raj paaji...

mmazaa aa gayaaa kya roomaani kalaam likha hai aapne... bas daad hi daad pesh hai... likhte rahiye

Shaad....
Sameer bhai aapki daad paa kar mere ashaar gazal bann gye...bhut bhut shukria bhai...aate rehna...Raj...

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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20th December 2014, 04:53 PM
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Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka bhut sara pyaar...dosto apni ek nayii koshish or umeed ke saath hazir hoo.n aapke saath ka intezaar rahega...


Zikr tera zikre bahaar ho jaise,
Beqraari mei.n qraar ho jaise..

Sunta nahi.n hai meri ik bhii,
Dil pe tera ikhtyaar ho jaise..

Tune nahaa ke gaisuu kyaa jhatke,
Saari fiza par nikhaar ho jaise..

Har shaii tujhe dekhne ko tarse,
Har koii tera bimaar ho jaise..

Roshan hai yu.n tujhse dunia meri,
Maaho aaftaab bekaar ho jaise..

Chahat bhii tu ulfat bhii tu,
Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..

Tere bin kush bhii nazar nahi aataa,
'Veer' par tera khumaar ho jaise..

Aapki raye ka muntzir....Raj..
Bahut khoobsurat gazal raaj ji...dil se daad kubool kijiye..


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26th December 2014, 05:53 AM
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Good one Rajveer, well written


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Naam tera hii pyaar ho jaise..

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Rajveer ji aapki ghazal mein bahut kashish aur rumaniyat mili mujhe , per ke dil gardem garden ho gaya ji


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Bohot khoob gazal kahi........behad umda....maza aa gaya padh kar.....waaaaaaaah.
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Rajveer ji aapki ghazal mein bahut kashish aur rumaniyat mili mujhe , per ke dil gardem garden ho gaya ji
Sanjay ji namaskaar....aapki hazri or tareef ke liye shukar guzaar hoo.n...saath dete rahiyega..Raj..

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