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Ajeeb si kashish...! - 28th August 2004, 01:41 AM

Ajeeb si kashish hai tujhme
ke hum tere khayaloun mein khoye rehte hain;
Yeh soch kar Tum khwaboun mein aaoge
Hum din mein bhi soye rehte hain...!!!

Kuch fitrat hi aisi hui....
Ki pyar se jeene ki aadat na hui;
Jinhe chaha woh mil na sake....
Aur jo mile unse Mohabbat na hui...!!!

Shabnam se kai pholl khilte hain
Jab ke barsaat na ho;
Khatoun se kya dil bharte hain
Jab ke mulaqaat na hoo...!!!!
   
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28th August 2004, 11:13 AM

Ajeeb si kashish hai tujhme
ke hum tere khayaloun mein khoye rehte hain;
Yeh soch kar Tum khwaboun mein aaoge
Hum din mein bhi soye rehte hain...!!!

Kuch fitrat hi aisi hui....
Ki pyar se jeene ki aadat na hui;
Jinhe chaha woh mil na sake....
Aur jo mile unse Mohabbat na hui...!!!

Shabnam se kai pholl khilte hain
Jab ke barsaat na ho;
Khatoun se kya dil bharte hain
Jab ke mulaqaat na hoo...!!!!


Wah Wah!
Nice words, Fareed! .. Aise hi likhte rehna.. Tc


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28th August 2004, 06:25 PM

Shukriya pulkit.jab koi tareef karta hai toa bahut khushi hoti hai jo bayaan nahi karsakte.wen i dun get a applause i get disheartened anywayz thnx a ton buddy
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hi - 29th August 2004, 12:14 AM

hello,
Ajeeb si kashish hai tujhme
ke hum tere khayaloun mein khoye rehte hain;
Yeh soch kar Tum khwaboun mein aaoge
Hum din mein bhi soye rehte hain...!!!

ohh god so loving words,
really nice
arse baad pyar bhari koi shayri padhi aur sach mai pyari lagi,
keep writing
tc
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29th August 2004, 10:47 AM

bahut hi khub likha hain apne.....

pyar ki kashish aisi hi hoti hain.....

tanhai kya hoti hain yeh ab pata chala hain
jab teri yaadon ne bhi mera saath chod diya hain....

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29th August 2004, 02:29 PM

Hi thnx a lot mayu n mausam thnx 4 apprecaiting my effort.
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