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मेरी राहगुज़र कोई और थी, तेरा रास्ता कोई और &a
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मेरी राहगुज़र कोई और थी, तेरा रास्ता कोई और &a - 5th November 2014, 08:33 AM

मेरी राहगुज़र कोई और थी, तेरा रास्ता कोई और है
मेरा हमनवा तन्हाई है, तेरा आश्ना कोई और है

मेरे दिल की इसमें खता नहीं, किसे खो दिया था पता नहीं
तूझे पा लिया किसी और ने, तूझे ढूंढता कोई और है

तेरी आँखों में इक कशिश थी, मेरी आवारा सी गर्दिश थी
कल खो गया था मैं जहाँ, आज लापता कोई और है

मुझे मंज़िलों की खबर नहीं, चले आया लौट कर मैं वहीं
तेरी यादों का जहां कारवां, वहां काफ़िला कोई और है

मेरी उम्र भर की ये चाहतें, तेरी भूल जाने की आदतें
मेरा दिल ही था मसीहा मेरा, तेरा रहनुमा कोई और है

जिसे ज़िंदगी ने ये गम दिये, ये खुदा ने हैं इम्तिहान लिये
तेरी फलसफी ये नसीहतें, मेरा मशवरा कोई और है


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kya kehne mayoos sb

umdaa Ghazal hui hai, daad Tikaa lijiye


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5th November 2014, 11:57 PM

वाह साहेब मज़ा आ गया

बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल

दाद के साथ


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6th November 2014, 12:20 AM

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मेरी राहगुज़र कोई और थी, तेरा रास्ता कोई और है
मेरा हमनवा तन्हाई है, तेरा आश्ना कोई और है

मेरे दिल की इसमें खता नहीं, किसे खो दिया था पता नहीं
तूझे पा लिया किसी और ने, तूझे ढूंढता कोई और है

तेरी आँखों में इक कशिश थी, मेरी आवारा सी गर्दिश थी
कल खो गया था मैं जहाँ, आज लापता कोई और है

मुझे मंज़िलों की खबर नहीं, चले आया लौट कर मैं वहीं
तेरी यादों का जहां कारवां, वहां काफ़िला कोई और है

मेरी उम्र भर की ये चाहतें, तेरी भूल जाने की आदतें
मेरा दिल ही था मसीहा मेरा, तेरा रहनुमा कोई और है

जिसे ज़िंदगी ने ये गम दिये, ये खुदा ने हैं इम्तिहान लिये
तेरी फलसफी ये नसीहतें, मेरा मशवरा कोई और है
मेरी उम्र भर की ये चाहतें, तेरी भूल जाने की आदतें
मेरा दिल ही था मसीहा मेरा, तेरा रहनुमा कोई और है

Waah .....bahut khoob mayoos ji...



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6th November 2014, 09:57 AM

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मेरी राहगुज़र कोई और थी, तेरा रास्ता कोई और है
मेरा हमनवा तन्हाई है, तेरा आश्ना कोई और है

मेरे दिल की इसमें खता नहीं, किसे खो दिया था पता नहीं
तूझे पा लिया किसी और ने, तूझे ढूंढता कोई और है

तेरी आँखों में इक कशिश थी, मेरी आवारा सी गर्दिश थी
कल खो गया था मैं जहाँ, आज लापता कोई और है

मुझे मंज़िलों की खबर नहीं, चले आया लौट कर मैं वहीं
तेरी यादों का जहां कारवां, वहां काफ़िला कोई और है

मेरी उम्र भर की ये चाहतें, तेरी भूल जाने की आदतें
मेरा दिल ही था मसीहा मेरा, तेरा रहनुमा कोई और है

जिसे ज़िंदगी ने ये गम दिये, ये खुदा ने हैं इम्तिहान लिये
तेरी फलसफी ये नसीहतें, मेरा मशवरा कोई और है

Mayoos ji................khoobsurat shayri par dil se daad hazir hai.


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waaaaahhhhhhhh.................... kyaa andaaz hai janaab aapka.....

main to aapki is ghazal ka qaayal ho gayaa... najaane kitnii dafaa padh gaya hoon ise aur bas dil hai ke maaan hi nahi raha hai nazren hataaane ko....

meri taraf se laakhon daad pesh hain aapko..... likhte rahen

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वाह साहेब मज़ा आ गया

बेहतरीन ग़ज़ल

दाद के साथ

Thanks Kshitiz, thx for taking some time out to read this.....................


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मेरा दिल ही था मसीहा मेरा, तेरा रहनुमा कोई और है

Waah .....bahut khoob mayoos ji...
Thanks Madhu, deeply appreciated.......................


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waaaaahhhhhhhh.................... kyaa andaaz hai janaab aapka.....

main to aapki is ghazal ka qaayal ho gayaa... najaane kitnii dafaa padh gaya hoon ise aur bas dil hai ke maaan hi nahi raha hai nazren hataaane ko....

meri taraf se laakhon daad pesh hain aapko..... likhte rahen

Shaad....

Thanks Shaad, Sometimes things come out good but usually they end up as "also ran". Glad that you enjoyed this one though.


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Bahut khoob dost, bahut achchha likha hai aapne.


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vaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah
Thanks Parveen, greatly appreciated........................


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