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iss dil kii badguumaniya.n na gayii.n(GAZAL) - 4th December 2014, 01:34 AM
Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka bhut sara pyaar...dosto.n apni ek nayii koshish ke saath hazir hoo.n umeed aapki raye zaroor milegii...Raj..

Is dil ki badguumàniya.n na gayii.n,
Ye raato.n ki tanhaiya.n na gayii.n..

Kabhi Khushi mei.n kabhi matam mei.n bajti.n rahi.n,
Mere ghar se sehnaiya.n na gayii.n..

Bewafaao.n se bhi shonk e wafa apna,
Ya!!rabb meri buraiya.n na gayii.n...

Rah e ishq mei.n dil bhii jalaya maine,
Phir bhii ulfat ki taareekheeya.n na gayii.n..

Ik umr huii unko dil se rukhsat huye,
Ab takk unki parchhaiya.n na gayii.n...

Shab e gam bhii guzri karwatai.n badalte,
Ab takk bhii ye angraiya.n na gayii.n

Seesha e dil kiya patthro.n ke hawaale,
'Raj' ye teri naadaniya.n na gaii.n..

Aapki besh keemti raye ka munzir...aapka Raj...

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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4th December 2014, 09:41 AM
waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kyaa likh diyaa saahab.....

bahot hi ummdah kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.. dil ko bahot sukoon pahocha hai aapko padh kar......

likhte rahiyegaa

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4th December 2014, 12:43 PM
Behtareen gazal..rajveer ji.bahut mubarak ho.


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4th December 2014, 02:36 PM
Behad umda.....wwwwaaaaaaaahhhhhhh
Is gazal ko koshish na kahiye raj sahab......iski tohin hogi....

Nacheez ki daad kubul karen.

Apka apna
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6th December 2014, 09:19 AM
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waaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh kyaa likh diyaa saahab.....

bahot hi ummdah kalaam pesh kiya hai aapne.. dil ko bahot sukoon pahocha hai aapko padh kar......

likhte rahiyegaa

Shaad.....
Sameer bhaii housla afzaii ke liye dil se shukar guzaar hoon jo aapne apni keemti raye se nawaaza...umeed hai aaindah bhii saath milta rahega...Raj..

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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6th December 2014, 09:31 AM
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Sabhi dosto.n ko Raj ka bhut sara pyaar...dosto.n apni ek nayii koshish ke saath hazir hoo.n umeed aapki raye zaroor milegii...Raj..

Is dil ki badguumàniya.n na gayii.n,
Ye raato.n ki tanhaiya.n na gayii.n..

Kabhi Khushi mei.n kabhi matam mei.n bajti.n rahi.n,
Mere ghar se sehnaiya.n na gayii.n..

Bewafaao.n se bhi shonk e wafa apna,
Ya!!rabb meri buraiya.n na gayii.n...

Rah e ishq mei.n dil bhii jalaya maine,
Phir bhii ulfat ki taareekheeya.n na gayii.n..

Ik umr huii unko dil se rukhsat huye,
Ab takk unki parchhaiya.n na gayii.n...

Shab e gam bhii guzri karwatai.n badalte,
Ab takk bhii ye angraiya.n na gayii.n

Seesha e dil kiya patthro.n ke hawaale,
'Raj' ye teri naadaniya.n na gaii.n..

Aapki besh keemti raye ka munzir...aapka Raj...

wahhhh wahhhhh
kya khoobsurat likhtey hai aap, lafzoN ko bahut khoobsurati se estemaal karte hai aap...accha lagta hai aapko padna, yu hi likhtey rahiye aur hame apne ehsaasoN se ru-b-ru hone ka mokka detey rahiye.


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6th December 2014, 05:13 PM
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Behtareen gazal..rajveer ji.bahut mubarak ho.
Madhu ji teh e dil se shukarguzaar hoo.n jo apna keemti waqt meri gazal ke naam kiya...umeed hai aage bhii aapka saath milta rahega...Raj..

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6th December 2014, 09:30 PM
Kabhi Khushi mei.n kabhi matam mei.n bajti.n rahi.n,
Mere ghar se sehnaiya.n na gayii.n..

Bewafaao.n se bhi shonk e wafa apna,
Ya!!rabb meri buraiya.n na gayii.n...



really really good Rajveer.......... well said......

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9th December 2014, 05:10 AM
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Behad umda.....wwwwaaaaaaaahhhhhhh
Is gazal ko koshish na kahiye raj sahab......iski tohin hogi....

Nacheez ki daad kubul karen.

Apka apna
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Bhushan bhai aapki housla afzaii ke liye mai.n teh e dil se aapka shukar guzaar hoo.n...umeed hai aindah bhii aapka saath milta rahega..
Raj...

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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9th December 2014, 04:48 PM
waah Raj sahab hamesha ki tarah khoobsoorat peshkash.....I remeber those days Raj sahab.....wahi ahsaas wahi pesh karne ka andaaz waah kyaa baat hai....tabhi kehte haiN puraani yaadeiN insaaN ko taaza kar deti haiN....Daad
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wahhhh wahhhhh
kya khoobsurat likhtey hai aap, lafzoN ko bahut khoobsurati se estemaal karte hai aap...accha lagta hai aapko padna, yu hi likhtey rahiye aur hame apne ehsaasoN se ru-b-ru hone ka mokka detey rahiye.
Sunita ji namaskaar...houslaa afzaii ke liye behadd shukarguzaar hoo.n...umeed hai aapka saath milta rahega...Raj..

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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