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bus itna kar do tum.... -
30th April 2003, 09:08 PM
here is ghazal for u... umeed hai aap logon ko pasand aayegi... Aake baitho mere sirhaane tum Aur socho na kuchh bahaane tum. Chhu ke dekhoon to maanun main, Sach ho ya khwaab ho na jaane tum. Aaj bhi main to hoon fida tum par, Ho mere ab bhi kya diwaane tum. Meri nazaron main daal kar nazaren, Khud hi padhalo na sab fasaane tum. Koi taqaraar ab nai socho, Phir na shikave karo puraane tum. Jee main aataa hai rooth jaaun main, Hans ke mujhako lago manaane tum. Mere seene pe sar rakho apanaa, Yun raho naa bane begaane tum. hope to get u'r reply soon........ ........... kuch too hi mere dard ka mazmoon samajh le hansta hua chehra to zamane ke liye hai |
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30th April 2003, 09:25 PM
bahoot khoob damal bhai .. bahut achha likha hai aapne ..
humarri taraf se dad kabul kariye khas taur se ye line to bahut hi achhi likhi aapne .. Jee main aataa hai rooth jaaun main, Hans ke mujhako lago manaane tum. khuda aapke kalam ka dath deta rahe isi tarah .. humari duayeen aaapke sath hain .. aapka dost .. |
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1st May 2003, 12:24 AM
Chhu ke dekhoon to maanun main,
Sach ho ya khwaab ho na jaane tum. achi line hai yeah - - - Kabhi aisa lagta hai ache pal mein ke hum khuwaab dekh rahe hain  nicely done |
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2nd May 2003, 12:59 PM
Kshitiz and ash i want to inform u that it's not my ghazal...
it is Composed by Raj sahab..... it was a mistake that i didn't write his name in this Ghazal... so plz don't praise me.... this ghazal was too nice to post so i did that.... i will be on shayri.com soon with my ghazal... Khudahafiz..... ........... kuch too hi mere dard ka mazmoon samajh le hansta hua chehra to zamane ke liye hai |
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.. ek andaaz
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2nd May 2003, 08:19 PM
damal bhai koi bat nahi aapne is gajal ko hum logo se shair liya so nice of u .
aapki next gajal ka wait hai .. aapka dost .. |
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4th May 2003, 12:47 PM
Damal sahab,
Bahut hi umda Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne..Shayar chahe jo bhi ho.. kalaam ko saamne laane waala bhi shukriya ka haqdaar hota hai.. Bahut pasand aayi ye ghazal Varinder chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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4th May 2003, 12:58 PM
Bohat hi pyaari ghazal hai.. Simple and sweet!
 Ek ajab si saadgi hai isme.. hume bohat pasand aayi.. |
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