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8th March 2009, 01:57 PM
Pyaare DostoN
AAj pahli baar aap ke samne ek "gair-muraddaf" Ghazal pesh kar rahi hoon.. Sabhi Dosto.N se meri yehi Iltijaa hai ke apni raa'ye zarur de. Dard-e-Dil apna kabhi hame.N bhi sunaao Zakhm diye kaise ulfat ne hamei.N bhi dikhaao Koi gunaah nahi hai pyaar jo tum ne kiya kabhi Deta ho dard gar yeh ehsaas, use dil se mitaao Milti nahi khushiya.N sabhi jiski kee ho aarzoo Kismat se mili hai jitni uska shukra manaao Gham mein khud ko mitanese kuch hota nahi haa.sil Mile jo pal- do-pal pyaar ke, use Pyaar se bitaao Bhar denge har khushi se yeh daaman tera Tuj ko kasam hai "Ghazal” thoda thahar bhi jaao  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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10th March 2009, 03:59 PM
Heloo Purvi Di ,
kaise ho aap ??? Bhaut Khoob likha hai aapne yuhi likhte raho aap . Thanks 4 sharing ........................... Regards, Sahil |
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11th March 2009, 10:36 PM
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Sahil bahot bahot shukriya meri ghazal padhne aur mera housla badhane ke liye aage bhee aise hee padhte rahna Khush raho Tumhari Di Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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13th March 2009, 12:31 PM
Hi Purvi................kya baat hai yaar i love the way u potray ur ghazals isliye to aap meri inspiration ho..................keep it up dear
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13th March 2009, 01:21 PM
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Thanks sweety..... thanks a lot for appriciation...... Naaz abhi muj mein woh baat nahi ke mein kisi ki inspiration ban saku.... yeh tumhari hus.N nazar hai... jo meri har ghazal pasand karti ho tum shukriya dost....... yunhi saath deti rahna purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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13th March 2009, 02:21 PM
Wah Bahot badiya ! Umid karta hun aage bhi padne milengi, I love those lines...
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13th March 2009, 04:54 PM
aapke ehsaas bahaut pasand aaye......yunhi likhtey rahiyega
aabhaar vipin 
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14th March 2009, 01:22 AM
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Aadaab muhtarma, Lo hum bhi chale aaye mehfil me, yakeen maniye aaj khud ko dili khushi mil rahi hai aapko har ghazal ke baat aur behtar likhta hua dekh kar. Gair muradiff ghazal humesha se mujhe bahut pasand rahi haiN aur bahut kam log ise likhne ki kosish bhi karte haiN, ahche aashaar the. ye sher haasil-e-ghazal laga... Milti nahi khushiya.N sabhi jiski kee ho aarzoo Kismat se mili hai jitni uska shukra manaao ek do cheezeN kehna chaahuNga, doosra sher kamjor sa laga mujhe. Bahut ulajh sa gaya hai khayal, aur maqta se pehle vaale sher me dono jagah pyar lafz ka istemaal ghazal ko thoda bachkana sa baa raha hai, agar pehli jagah aap mohabbat ya ulfat kar deN to aur behtar lagega. Bas jyada kuch nahiN kahuNga par haaN yakeenan har baar aapko padhta huN to pichli baar se behtar paata huN...!! Bas aage v yuNhi likhti raheN. Allaah Haafeez Ghayal ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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14th March 2009, 10:01 AM
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Aadab janab, Meri ghazal padhkar apni raa'ye dene ke liye aap ka shukriya. Ummid hai aage bhi aap ka sath milta rahega Khush rahiye Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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14th March 2009, 10:03 AM
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Vipinjee AAp jaise padhnewalo.N ka saath aise hee bana raha to Inshallah aage bhi aise hee likhti rahungi Khush rahiye... Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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16th March 2009, 02:23 PM
Ghazal jee,
Hume bhi bahot pasand aayi aapki yeh ghazal thori der kar di reply karne mein ..Muaaf kijiyega jee aapki Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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16th March 2009, 04:24 PM
Gazal ji, bahot hi khub, bahot hi khub, kafi ache ehsason ke sath likha hai appne, take care bye
koi doulat chahe to koi shaan chahe, hum to jindagi ke sataye huwe hai, ‘Eliyas’ to khudase do gaaz zameen aur kafan chahe - ELIYAS SHAIKH |
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Housla afzayee ke liye shukriya yunhi mahefil mein aate rahiyega Khush rahiye Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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17th March 2009, 01:02 PM
Purvi Ji,
Bahut achchha likhaa hai aapne, aapke ahsaas pasan aayeiN, Khush rahiye, aise hi likhti rahiye. Ye sher mujhe bahut pasand aayaa Bhar denge har khushi se yeh daaman tera Tuj ko kasam hai "Ghazal” thoda thahar bhi jaao With best wishes -Rashid Quote:
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17th March 2009, 01:09 PM
very nice keep it up hope you will post like this more shayri....
Dil Itna Naazuk Hota Hai Ke, Isski Tootne Ki Awaaz Bilkul Nahi Aathi, ****************************** MEIN TUJHKO BHOOL JAUN YE KISSS KITAAB MEIN LIKHA HAI. ------------------------------------------------ socha tha woh hame tut kar chahenge par chaha bhi hami ne aur tute bhi hum KISHOR R KARKERA NEW PANVEL NAVI MUMBAi,410206 PH:-09322764070 
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19th March 2009, 12:05 AM
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AAp ko meri koshish pasand aayi yeh jaan kar achha laga Aage bhi aise hi saath dete rahiyega khush rahiye purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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God Bless you Purvi ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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