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24th May 2015, 11:16 PM
hai raat guzree is qadar tanhaa si ik tanhaaii mein, koi aks tak dikhtaa nahii majloom ki parchaaii mein. sub'haa ye raushan ho gayee aur phool saare khil uThhe, jaise koii jaaduu huaa hai aapkii aNgDaaii mein. yooN to Ghazal sunne me laakhoN rang milte ishq ke, lekin balaa kaa dard bhii dikhtaa hai kuchh gahraaii mein. pahle bahot se qaafile aate they tujhko dekhne, ab panChhiyon ke jhund bhii aate naheeN purwaaii mein. jab tak rahe ham ishq me koi jaantaa bhii thaa nahii, badnaam ho kar mil gayaa hai naam is ruswaai mein. aisee bajee thee taan apne yaar ki shahnaaii mein, jaise koii rotaaa rahaa ho raat bhar tanhaaii mein. Shaad.......... |
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25th May 2015, 09:45 AM
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yooN to Ghazal sunne me laakhoN rang milte ishq ke, lekin balaa kaa dard bhii dikhtaa hai kuchh gahraaii mein. Bahut kkhoob.... jab tak rahe ham ishq me koi jaantaa bhii thaa nahii, badnaam ho kar mil gayaa hai naam is ruswaai mein. Ye sher dil ke bahut kareeb raha..... Bahut sari daad is nacheez ki taraf Se...Aur mubarakbaad aapko is behatreen ghazal par.... khush rahein.... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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25th May 2015, 03:20 PM
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Umdaa shaad bhai - ab to bas aap ek kitaab chaap to apni, ek kar kar qatl hone se aacchaa hai itni umdaa ghazlon ki kitaab padhte padhte shab guzre...Bahut umdaa ehsaas hue hai mere bhai...har sher mein aapke qaafiye ne jo chunn ke wazn daalna hai bas muqarrar hi keh paaungaa ise... is ek sher ne to kambakhqt jaan hi nikaal li.. jab tak rahe ham ishq me koi jaantaa bhii thaa nahii, badnaam ho kar mil gayaa hai naam is ruswaai mein. Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa Janaab Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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26th May 2015, 09:44 AM
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behad inaayat ai aapki madhu saahibaa.... aapne qalaam ko kuboool kiyaa uskii pazeeraai farmaai, khaaksaar behad mamnoon hai.... aaindaa bhi aapke aane kaa intezaar rahegaa... khush rahen... Shaad.... |
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26th May 2015, 03:10 PM
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bahut shukriyaa mast saahab itnii izzat bakshne ke liye....... duaa kijiyegaa ke meraa ye sapnaa pooraa ho sake...... shukriyaa Shaad.... |
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26th May 2015, 04:56 PM
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Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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28th May 2015, 11:48 AM
aisee bajee thee taan apne yaar ki shahnaaii mein,
jaise koii rotaaa rahaa ho raat bhar tanhaaii mein. waaahh!!! kya khub qalaam hai, Shoaibbhai..... dilse dheroN dheroN daad..... duaaGo ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
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28th May 2015, 11:55 AM
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likhte rahiye radhe radhe Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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29th May 2015, 11:40 AM
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shukriyaa tahe dil se aapka.... Shaad..... |
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29th May 2015, 11:41 AM
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wo aaye hamaari bazm me khudaa ki rahmat hai, kabhii ham unko kabhii apne ghar ko dekhte hain.. kuch yahii qaifiyaat huii hai hamaarii aaj arse baad aapko dekh kar rajinder jee.... bahot khushi hhaasil huii hai aapki daad aur duaaen paaa kar.. aaate raahiyegaa Shaad...... |
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2nd June 2015, 05:36 PM
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Dil se dheroN daad aur mubarakbaad. Be-had khoobsurat andaaz aur alfaaz. Aise he likhte raheiN. **************** Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota |
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3rd June 2015, 10:37 AM
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aapkii zarraanawaazii hai huzoor.... tasleem aapkii inaayaten aur sar aankhon par aapki mehrbaaniyaan...... tashreef laate rahyegaa... khush rahen Shaad...... |
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6th June 2015, 08:11 PM
aisee bajee thee taan apne yaar ki shahnaaii mein,
jaise koii rotaaa rahaa ho raat bhar tanhaaii mein. Kya baat hai shoab bhai....... Is sher ne to mehfil loot lee..... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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7th June 2015, 09:22 PM
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aur apnaa khayaal rakkhen... Shaad...... |
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7th June 2015, 09:33 PM
Shoaib bhai aap neiN aapne apna tanjaiyoN ka dard bakhoobi bayan kiya aapne.
Dheron daad kabool kareiN. Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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7th June 2015, 10:05 PM
Sameer bhai aadab,
Behad umdah gazal hui hai....dheeroon daad is lajawab gazal ki nazar.......matle aur makhte ne char chand laga diye...waaaaah Nacheez ki daad kubul farmaiyega Aapka apna Bhushan Bhushan Joshi |
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9th June 2015, 09:30 AM
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aapki daad au duaaon ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon main sanjay saahab..... yunhii aate rahiyegaa.... shaad..... |
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9th June 2015, 09:34 AM
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