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23rd January 2013, 06:30 PM
Vo dhuein ke challe bana raha tha,
Gam ko hawa mein uda raha tha,
Mehal ban gaya tha ret fir se ,
Kadmon ke nishaan dikha raha tha,
Band ankhon pe gira ke ret,
Galti apni bata raha tha,
Baha ke aansuon ko saagar mein,
Vajood mohabbat ka bata raha tha,
Gin ke lehron ko ungliyon pe,
Yaadein apni mita raha tha,
Tika ke aasmaan pe nazrein,
Kahani apni suna raha tha,
Likhe ke ret pe naam kisi ka,
Jamane ka chalan bata raha tha,
Kabhi jo uska khuda raha tha,
Usi ko aaj bhula raha tha.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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23rd January 2013, 06:47 PM
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Originally Posted by aru
Vo dhuein ke challe bana raha tha,
Gam ko hawa mein uda raha tha,
Mehal ban gaya tha ret fir se ,
Kadmon ke nishaan dikha raha tha,
Band ankhon pe gira ke ret,
Galti apni bata raha tha,
Baha ke aansuon ko saagar mein,
Vajood mohabbat ka bata raha tha,
Gin ke lehron ko ungliyon pe,
Yaadein apni mita raha tha,
Tika ke aasmaan pe nazrein,
Kahani apni suna raha tha,
Likhe ke ret pe naam kisi ka,
Jamane ka chalan bata raha tha,
Kabhi jo uska khuda raha tha,
Usi ko aaj bhula raha tha.
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Wah !!...Too good aru ji................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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23rd January 2013, 07:13 PM
bahut accha likha hai aapne aru bhai.....aapki gazal padkar hame jagjit singh ji ki gaaye gazal yaad aa gye..."wo khat ke purje udda rha tha" aap bhi naami shayroN ki list meiN aa rhe ho bhai...mubarak ho
duaoN ke saath
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24th January 2013, 10:14 AM
bahot khoob..................... bahot khoob Aru bhai....
Wo khaat ke purze uDaa rahaa tha....
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24th January 2013, 12:04 PM
Arvind ji namskaar
bahut khubbbb , pasand aayi aapki ye peshkash
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24th January 2013, 04:27 PM
Band ankhon pe gira ke ret,
Galti apni bata raha tha,
Tika ke aasmaan pe nazrein,
Kahani apni suna raha tha,
wahh..... !! bahoot khoob......har ek sher laajawaab hai....par ye kuch sher dil ke kareeb rahe....!!aise hi likhte rahiye......!!!
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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24th January 2013, 04:59 PM
Arvind bhai...mar dala apne humko
her sher pad ke daad dene ko ji chahta hai,
teri ghazal per tuje gale lagane ko ji chahta hau.
Dard ki ik ik moti ko dhage me piro kar saja diya
apne.
bahut khubsurat peshkash.
sanjay sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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26th January 2013, 01:48 PM
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Wah !!...Too good aru ji................
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Thanx zainy jee......................
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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28th January 2013, 01:49 AM
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bahut accha likha hai aapne aru bhai.....aapki gazal padkar hame jagjit singh ji ki gaaye gazal yaad aa gye..."wo khat ke purje udda rha tha" aap bhi naami shayroN ki list meiN aa rhe ho bhai...mubarak ho
duaoN ke saath
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Thanx sunita jee..aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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31st January 2013, 12:51 PM
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bahot khoob..................... bahot khoob Aru bhai....
Wo khaat ke purze uDaa rahaa tha....
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Thanx sameer bhai, aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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1st February 2013, 08:59 PM
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Vo dhuein ke challe bana raha tha,
Gam ko hawa mein uda raha tha,
Mehal ban gaya tha ret fir se ,
Kadmon ke nishaan dikha raha tha,
Band ankhon pe gira ke ret,
Galti apni bata raha tha,
Baha ke aansuon ko saagar mein,
Vajood mohabbat ka bata raha tha,
Gin ke lehron ko ungliyon pe,
Yaadein apni mita raha tha,
Tika ke aasmaan pe nazrein,
Kahani apni suna raha tha,
Likhe ke ret pe naam kisi ka,
Jamane ka chalan bata raha tha,
Kabhi jo uska khuda raha tha,
Usi ko aaj bhula raha tha.
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WaaH ! Kyaa Khoob Khayaalaat Likhe HaiN .....
AchChhii Takhleeq Ke Liye Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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4th February 2013, 11:55 AM
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Arvind ji namskaar
bahut khubbbb , pasand aayi aapki ye peshkash
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Thanx rajeev jee......aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya...............
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Band ankhon pe gira ke ret,
Galti apni bata raha tha,
Tika ke aasmaan pe nazrein,
Kahani apni suna raha tha,
wahh..... !! bahoot khoob......har ek sher laajawaab hai....par ye kuch sher dil ke kareeb rahe....!!aise hi likhte rahiye......!!!
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Thanx kavita negi jee......aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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12th February 2013, 07:47 AM
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Arvind bhai...mar dala apne humko
her sher pad ke daad dene ko ji chahta hai,
teri ghazal per tuje gale lagane ko ji chahta hau.
Dard ki ik ik moti ko dhage me piro kar saja diya
apne.
bahut khubsurat peshkash.
sanjay sehgal
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Sanjay jee, mera aisa koi irada nahin hai.....aapko pasand aaya uske liye shukriya
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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17th February 2013, 07:51 AM
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WaaH ! Kyaa Khoob Khayaalaat Likhe HaiN .....
AchChhii Takhleeq Ke Liye Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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Thanx naresh mehra jee......aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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Waaaaaaah..! bahut khoob ehsaas aru ji...
Shukriya jo aap ise samne lekar aaye..
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आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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8th June 2015, 04:29 PM
bahaut khoob arvind bhai
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