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nawazish hy ....bhai!
wese to aik hi sher allow hy din meiN ..
muazarat ky saath aap ky sher ka jawaab :-
jo khoon kar de mere dil-o-jaan jigar ka!
ae dost! tere paas woh talwaar to ho gi ?
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Bhaijaan..... aapke sawaalon ka jawaab kuch yooN peesh karnaa chaahungaa.....
BaDhtaa hai silsilaa to ye baDh jaane dijiye..
jo Qatl hi honaa hai to mar jaane dijiye..................
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Bhaijaan..... aapke sawaalon ka jawaab kuch yooN peesh karnaa chaahungaa.....
BaDhtaa hai silsilaa to ye baDh jaane dijiye..
jo Qatl hi honaa hai to mar jaane dijiye..................
Shaad...
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arry... waaah ...
aaj to saahab qatl karne ke mood meiN hain ..
woh bhi bagher talwaar-o-shamsheer ky ....
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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16th March 2015, 11:39 AM
Shayar soya hua hai to itna likh gaye janaab...
jaag gaye to qyamat hogi yakeenan..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Shayar soya hua hai to itna likh gaye janaab...
jaag gaye to qyamat hogi yakeenan..
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16th March 2015, 03:44 PM
सूखे होंटों पे ही होती हैं मीठी बातें अक्सर,
प्यास जब बुझ जाये तो लहजे बदल जाते हैं !!
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16th March 2015, 09:43 PM
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17th March 2015, 11:47 AM
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19th March 2015, 09:30 AM
Kuch Khud me Bikhre Lafzo ko Samjhne laga hu mai
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19th March 2015, 10:39 AM
Sher of the Day :-
qiston qiston mein aa ke sataate ho!
qissa ik baar hii tamaam kar do naa...
qiston qiston mein : episode-wise
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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20th March 2015, 01:29 PM
Kasak Dil ki Bataye kya Samjh me kuch nahi aaye
bade Bedard armaan hai Bikhar jaye ke Mar jaaye
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21st March 2015, 07:15 AM
Roothi jo zindagi muzhse, to kya mout aayegi..
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23rd March 2015, 08:03 AM
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Sher of the Day :-
qiston qiston mein aa ke sataate ho!
qissa ik baar hii tamaam kar do naa...
qiston qiston mein : episode-wise
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waaaaaaaaah bahut khoob Hassan Bhai..
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mujhe Lafzo ne maar dala hai...nm
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23rd March 2015, 08:05 AM
Mein rang hu tere chehre ka,
jitna tu kush rahegi utna mai nikhrta jaunga..
मै रंग हुँ तेरे चेहरे का,
जितना तू खुश रहेगी उतना मैं निखरता जाऊँगा
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23rd March 2015, 01:06 PM
maangne se ishq kya Bheekh bhi Milti nahi
cheen ne se bhi haasil kab mohabbat ho gayi
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26th March 2015, 09:54 AM
aajka sher...
kisii ke lamss ka ye mojezaa hai,
badan saara sunahraa ho gayaa hai...
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26th March 2015, 05:08 PM
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27th March 2015, 10:35 AM
aaj ka sher.....
mujhe yaad karte karte gar ro paDo kabhii tum,
to ye baat maan lenaa, tumhe ishq ab talak hai....!!
Shaad...
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30th March 2015, 09:37 AM
Aaj ka sher....
Aye raat mujhe Maa ki tarah godd me le le,
din bhar ki mashaqqat se badan TooT rahaaa hai...
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3rd April 2015, 09:35 PM
Puche na zindagi me kisi ne bhi dil ke dukh,
Ab sheher bhar me zikr meri khud-kushi ka
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6th April 2015, 12:32 PM
sher of the day...........
Poocha na zindagee me kisii ne bhi di ka dukh,
Ab shahr bhar me zikr merii khud khushii ka hai......
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sher of the day...........
oocha na zindagee me kisii ne bhi di ka dukh,
Ab shahr bhar me zikr merii khud khushii ka hai......
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waah bhai.... mahool thoda sogwaar kar diya hai aap ny ..
chalo fizaoN mein thoda rung bharty haiN...
woh sharmagiN sharmagiN nigaheN… haaye adayeN..
dil-o-jaaN nahiN haiN bas meiN.. bas waari waari jaayeN..
sharmagiN : blushing
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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6th April 2015, 12:46 PM
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Na puuchhiye ki mohabbat meiN mujhpe kya guzrii
Na chheDiye mire bhuule hue fasaane ko
-Fani Badayuni
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ohhhhh... aap aaye bahaar aayi......
bohat khushi ho rahii hy aap ko yahaN dekh kar
aur waaah .. kia dhamake-daar sher inayat kiya hai....
maiN jo kanta hoon to chal mujh se bacha kar daman!
maiN hoon gar phool to juDey meiN saja le mujh ko....
- Qateel Shifai
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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6th April 2015, 01:04 PM
Khush aamdeed .... khush aamdeed Haasan bhai aur Naaz saahibaa........
Behad khushii ho rahii hhai aap dono ko bazm me dekh kar aur aapke haseen sher ko padh kar.......
ek sher ye bhi dekhiegaa.......
unke dekhne se jo aaa jaatii hai muh pe raunak,
wo samajhte hain ke beemaar ka haal acchaa hai.....
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Na puuchhiye ki mohabbat meiN mujhpe kya guzrii
Na chheDiye mire bhuule hue fasaane ko
-Fani Badayuni
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.....kya baat hai naz...kya sher share kiya....wwaaaaah..
ek to aap aayi aur us pe ye sher jawaab nahi...
sahi sher arz kiya shaad jee ne..raunak aagayi aapke aane se.......
aati rahiye...
raunak banaye rakhiye....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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7th April 2015, 11:02 AM
aaj kaa sher...
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ke wo bhii mujh bin udaas hai.....
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aaj kaa sher...
ik wahan saa kyun ye laahaq hai,
ke wo bhii mujh bin udaas hai.....
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kia baat hy bhai.. waaaah... bohat umdah sharing..
tishna laboN kii tishnagii ka dhandhoora peetny waaloN!
poocho un sy jo samandar kinaary reh kar bhii piyaase haiN...
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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kia baat hy bhai.. waaaah... bohat umdah sharing..
tishna laboN kii tishnagii ka dhandhoora peetny waaloN!
poocho un sy jo samandar kinaary reh kar bhii piyaase haiN...
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bahot bahot shukriyaa pasand karne ke liye Hassan bhai....... aurr fir waahh kyaa sher kah diyaa aapne baatonhi bbaaton me ke bas mat poochiye......
wo tishnageee hame bhi mahsoos ho rahii hai bhai.......
ek sher ye bhi dekhyegaa.......
Rezaa rezaa toot chukaa hoon andar se,
ghar ke baahar gardan taan ke chaltaa hoon.......
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9th April 2015, 12:39 PM
Rakeeb tu nahi hai jo ye majra kya hai.
Zabaan ke teer chalaye zara zara kya hai...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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bahot bahot shukriyaa pasand karne ke liye Hassan bhai....... aurr fir waahh kyaa sher kah diyaa aapne baatonhi bbaaton me ke bas mat poochiye......
wo tishnageee hame bhi mahsoos ho rahii hai bhai.......
ek sher ye bhi dekhyegaa.......
Rezaa rezaa toot chukaa hoon andar se,
ghar ke baahar gardan taan ke chaltaa hoon.......
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behad shukriyaa bhai ... aur waaah ... kia sher inayat kiya hy ..
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Rakeeb tu nahi hai jo ye majra kya hai.
Zabaan ke teer chalaye zara zara kya hai...
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bohat khoob Madhu jee... salamat rahen ..
log fikr meN the apne saaz-o-samaan ko bachaane ki !
hum sailaab meN beH gayi un ki tasveer ko ro rahe the..
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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10th April 2015, 09:21 AM
Rakeeb tu nahi hai jo ye majra kya hai.
Zabaan ke teer chalaye zara zara kya hai...
-Madhu
log fikr meN the apne saaz-o-samaan ko bachaane ki !
hum sailaab meN beH gayi un ki tasveer ko ro rahe the..
-Hassan.
bahot haseen sher pesh kiye hain aap dono ne....... bahot si daad pesh hain...
meraa aaj ka sher....
mere marne kii khabar tum ko bhiii pahuNchee hogee,
chalo acchaa hai haNsee thoDee to aayee hogee......!!
Shaad....
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Rakeeb tu nahi hai jo ye majra kya hai.
Zabaan ke teer chalaye zara zara kya hai...
-Madhu
log fikr meN the apne saaz-o-samaan ko bachaane ki !
hum sailaab meN beH gayi un ki tasveer ko ro rahe the..
-Hassan.
bahot haseen sher pesh kiye hain aap dono ne....... bahot si daad pesh hain...
meraa aaj ka sher....
mere marne kii khabar tum ko bhiii pahuNchee hogee,
chalo acchaa hai haNsee thoDee to aayee hogee......!!
Shaad....
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wah ... kia baat hy bhai .. kia baat ...
tere ishQ ke maqtal meiN…
humaiN saza e maut bhii qabool hai..
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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10th April 2015, 11:47 AM
mere marne kii khabar tum ko bhiii pahuNchee
hogee,
chalo acchaa hai haNsee thoDee to aayee
hogee..
waah shaad bhai kya sher kaha hai daad hi daad..
log fikr meN the apne saaz-o-samaan ko
bachaane ki !
hum sailaab meN beH gayi un ki tasveer ko ro
rahe the
waaah nayab hassan bhai..
bahut kushi huyi aapko dekh k..
apki kami hamesha khalti hai hume..
Mujse ab Shayriya nahi hoti,
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10th April 2015, 11:52 AM
mera aaj ka sher..
insaan ki fitrat ko samjhte hai ye parinde,
kitni bhi mohabbat se bualana magar pass nahi aaynge..
इंसान की फितरत को समझते हैं ये परिंदे,
कितनी भी मोहब्बत से बुलाना मगर पास नहीं आयेंगे..
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mera aaj ka sher..
insaan ki fitrat ko samjhte hai ye parinde,
kitni bhi mohabbat se bualana magar pass nahi aaynge..
इंसान की फितरत को समझते हैं ये परिंदे,
कितनी भी मोहब्बत से बुलाना मगर पास नहीं आयेंगे..
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khoob sher share kiyaa bhai......... bahot acche...........
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12th April 2015, 09:05 AM
Aaj kaa sher......
ke laboN ko bhii shiqaayat ye rahii hai tum se,
tumhaare naam ko chhoone se laraz uTahte hai.n...
Shaad....
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12th April 2015, 09:15 AM
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Aaj kaa sher......
ke laboN ko bhii shiqaayat ye rahii hai tum se,
tumhaare naam ko chhoone se laraz uTahte hai.n...
Shaad....
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Bahut khoob Shaad bhai
Mera aaj ka sher
Kaun kehta hai ki andhere viraan hote hai
aankh moond lete hai aur woh meri jaan hote hai
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Bahut khoob Shaad bhai
Mera aaj ka sher
Kaun kehta hai ki andhere viraan hote hai
aankh moond lete hai aur woh meri jaan hote hai
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khoob sher kaha bhai............ bahot khoob......
likhte rahiye
Shaad.....
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khoob sher kaha bhai............ bahot khoob......
likhte rahiye
Shaad.....
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Shukriyaa Janaab, zaroor likhte rahenge
Qasid
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