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Wo bahot badle magar dil dukhaane ka andaaz reh gaya,
Maine bhi par kataae ishq ke, zouqe-parwaaz reh gaya.

qafiyaa.. guzarne

radeef.... ke baad..
Kehte haiN mileNge mere sitaare saNwarne ke baad,
Wahii nasiib hai mera, jaaneNge mere guzarne ke baad!


Qaafiya - rehguzar

Radeef - na mili

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
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24th February 2011, 10:10 PM
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Kehte haiN mileNge mere sitaare saNwarne ke baad,

Wahii nasiib hai mera, jaaneNge mere guzarne ke baad!



Qaafiya - rehguzar



Radeef - na mili
Talash rehti thi jiski woh rehguzar na mili
Chale gaye bhi woh aakar mujhe khabar na mili

Qaafiya - Aasaan



Radeef - ho gaye

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Talash rehti thi jiski woh rehguzar na mili
Chale gaye bhi woh aakar mujhe khabar na mili

Qaafiya - Aasaan



Radeef - ho gaye
Shukran-Allah ke raste aasaan ho gaye,
Meri manzil hi mere mehmaan ho gaye.

Qaafiya - nasiib

Radeef - meiN na tha

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
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24th February 2011, 11:30 PM
"Meri manzil hi mere mehmaan ho gaye.."

kya ye misra correct hai??? agar ho to bataa dein meri kam aqli ki wajah se bone ki himaaqat kar reya hoon...

mere khayaal se ise aise hona chahiye... " meri manzil hi meri mehmaan ho gayee "
magar tab tukbandee nahi ho paaegi... sher change plz....

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24th February 2011, 11:52 PM
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Shukran-Allah ke raste aasaan ho gaye,
Meri manzil hi mere mehmaan ho gaye.

Qaafiya - nasiib

Radeef - meiN na tha
Gilaa Karnaa Bhi Nasiib MeiN Na Tha
YuN Khuda Ka Ghar Kariib MeiN Na Tha

qafiya -- mukar
radeef -- bhi gaye



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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"Meri manzil hi mere mehmaan ho gaye.."

kya ye misra correct hai??? agar ho to bataa dein meri kam aqli ki wajah se bone ki himaaqat kar reya hoon...

mere khayaal se ise aise hona chahiye... " meri manzil hi meri mehmaan ho gayee "
magar tab tukbandee nahi ho paaegi... sher change plz....
meri manzil hi meri mehmaan ho gayee

garche ek mard ki zubaani ho to "mere" hi jayez hona chahiye aur "mehmaan ho gayee" faqt khawaatiin hi keh sakti haiN.

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
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25th February 2011, 12:00 AM
mujhe aazmaae bhi bahot aur muqar bhi gaye,
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meri manzil hi meri mehmaan ho gayee

garche ek mard ki zubaani ho to "mere" hi jayez hona chahiye aur "mehmaan ho gayee" faqt khawaatiin hi keh sakti haiN.
magar padhne ke baad yahan par sher ke hisaab se gar dekhaa jaae to "meri" lafz manzil ke saath istemaal huaa hai (lafz manzil pe zor daalta hua hai) sher kahne waale ke liye nahi... aur mere khayaal se manzil ko janana tour pe hi istemaal kiya gaya hai kai baar..

wese ye meri soch hai... ho sakta hai main galat bhi houn... durust kijiyega meherbaani karke...

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25th February 2011, 09:34 AM
Sookh gaye Saagar bahaar aane tak
Ab laut aao Sanam qaraar aane tak

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Ab laut aao Sanam qaraar aane tak

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qafiya .... Kho
radeef .... Gaye Din
UjaloN bhare woh kahaN kho gaye din
AndheroN ki aghosh meiN so gaye din ?

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UjaloN bhare woh kahaN kho gaye din
AndheroN ki aghosh meiN so gaye din ?

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qafiya .... Pyar
radeef .... Dete hain

Wo NigaahoN se pilaate hain,isharon se pyar dete hain,
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Wo NigaahoN se pilaate hain,isharon se pyar dete hain,
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Qaafiya... dukhaya
Radeef... naa karo.
deke khud ko saza dil dukhaya naa karo
yaadon ke phool shaakh se jalaya naa karo

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Qaafiya... bad-gumaaN
Radeef... ho rahaa hai


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deke khud ko saza dil dukhaya naa karo
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Qaafiya... bad-gumaaN
Radeef... ho rahaa hai
ye dil khwam kha badgumaaN ho raha hai
kaha aag hai jo dhuaN ho raha hai ?

(koi baat dil me chupi hai yakinan
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ye dil khwam kha badgumaaN ho raha hai
kaha aag hai jo dhuaN ho raha hai ?

(koi baat dil me chupi hai yakinan
fasana nazar se bayaN ho raha hai...for my record)

qafiya...chalte
radeef...hain

Kudrat ke karobaar, kuch aise chalte haiN,
Ik badlaav ke alaava, aur sab badalte haiN.


Qaafiya - furqat
Radeef - se kya mila

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

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Kudrat ke karobaar, kuch aise chalte haiN,
Ik badlaav ke alaava, aur sab badalte haiN.


Qaafiya - furqat
Radeef - se kya mila
kar ke mohabbat se kya mila
anzaam-e-furqat se kya mila

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radeef -- bhii nahii.n


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qafiya -- saayaa
radeef -- bhii nahii.n
Ho haasil shikast agar, to ishq zaaya bhi nahii,
Na ho aisi hijr rab, ke yaadoN ka saaya bhi nahii. .

Qaafiya - Zindagi
Radeef - De De

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai."
-Anand Narayan Mulla.

वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत,
हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है.
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Ho haasil shikast agar, to ishq zaaya bhi nahii,
Na ho aisi hijr rab, ke yaadoN ka saaya bhi nahii. .

Qaafiya - Zindagi
Radeef - De De

Naa de khudaai magar, aisi bandgee De De,
Uski yaadoN se labrez ho, wo zindgee De De.


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radeef... hi nahi.
kya pa.DheN qasiide husn pe, koi jachta hi nahii,
baad-e-tariif-e-sanam, koi alfaaz bachta hi nahii.

Qaafiya - poshida
Radeef - KyuuN hai.

"Wo kaun hai jinhe tauba ki mil gai fursat,
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qaafiya - khata
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KyuuN muNh fer liya, kya humse khataa ho gayi,
Kyaa ghustakhi teri shaan meiN humse, bataa ho gayi?

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Qaafiya - ikhtiaar
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aur woh khete hai ki talabgaar kahaaN hai

Qaafiya - ghunhaa
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Qaafiya - khabar
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tere aane se wo khushi hui
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Qafiya........ Diye

Redif.......... jalte hai


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Qafiya........ Diye

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" JahaaN MeN HasratoN Ke Hazaar Diye Jalte Hai
KhwaaishoN Ke PaawoN Dhoop MeN Bin Piye Jlate Hai ... "

Qafiya - Khilona
Radeef - Ban Gaya



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Qafiya - Jee
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gham-e-judaai ke aansooN pee lete hai
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Qafiya - bhulayaa
Radeef - naa gaya


Ek manzar yoon bhi guzraa jo bhulaaya naa gayaa,
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Din Ek Sitam Hai Raat Ek Sitam Hai
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Qaafiyaa - Hanstaa
Radeef - Nahi HooN Main



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ग़ज़ल में शब्द के सही तौल, वज़न और उच्चारण की भाँति काफ़िया और रदीफ़ का महत्व भी अत्यधिक है। काफ़िया के तुक (अन्त्यानुप्रास) और उसके बाद आने वाले शब्द या शब्दों को रदीफ़ कहते है। काफ़िया बदलता है किन्तु रदीफ़ नहीं बदलती है। उसका रूप जस का तस रहता है।


जितने गिले हैं सारे मुँह से निकाल डालो

रखो न दिल में प्यारे मुँह से निकाल डालो। - बहादुर शाह ज़फर


इस मतले में 'सारे' और ’प्यारे’ काफ़िया है और 'मुँह से निकाल डालो' रदीफ़ है। यहां यह बतलाना उचित है कि ग़ज़ल के प्रारंभिक शेर को मतला और अंतिम शेर को मकता कहते हैं। मतला के दोनों मिसरों में तुक एक जैसी आती है और मकता में कवि का नाम या उपनाम रहता है। मतला का अर्थ है उदय और मकता का अर्थ है अस्त। उर्दू ग़ज़ल के नियमानुसार ग़ज़ल में मतला और मक़ता का होना अनिवार्य है वरना ग़ज़ल अधूरी मानी जाती है।



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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Koi Naya Zakhm Bhartaa Nahi HooN Main
Dard Kam Hone Pe Hanstaa Nahi HooN Main


Qaafiyaa - Hawaa
Radeef - Kam Hai



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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Koi Naya Zakhm Bhartaa Nahi HooN Main
Dard Kam Hone Pe Hanstaa Nahi HooN Main


Qaafiyaa - Hawaa
Radeef - Kam Hai
Vaise hi mausam meN hawaa kam hai
YuuN bhi zindagi meN apnaa sikkaa chalaa Kam hai


Qaafiyaa - Jaltaa
Radeef - Huaa

Aapka Apna
Ishk


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Qaafiyaa - Jaltaa
Radeef - Huaa
tha mazare ishq par rakhha hua
Ashiqi ka ik diya jalta hua.................


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Ashiqi ka ik diya jalta hua.................


Q...Ankhen
R...dekhin
humne jab bhi tumahari aankhen dekhin
khud se aaeene me sharmaaten dekhin

next -

qafiya - samaa
radeef - hai suhaanaa

Aapka Apna
Ishk


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qafiya - samaa
radeef - hai suhaanaa
kahan ho meri jaan sama hai suhana
mohabbat ka ye rasta hai suhana.............

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