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muddat - 16th May 2015, 01:31 PM

Muddat se thi kisi se Milne ki arzu..
Khwahish-e-deedar mein sab kuch gava diya...
Kisi ne Di khabar, vo ayenge raat ko...
Itna kiya ujala , ke Ghar tak jala diya..
   
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16th May 2015, 01:38 PM

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Muddat se thi kisi se Milne ki arzu..
Khwahish-e-deedar mein sab kuch gava diya...
Kisi ne Di khabar, vo ayenge raat ko...
Itna kiya ujala , ke Ghar tak jala diya..
Waaaaah.....bahut khoob....
likhte rahein...



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2nd June 2015, 10:38 AM

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muddat se thi kisi se milne ki arzu..
Khwahish-e-deedar mein sab kuch gava diya...
Kisi ne di khabar, vo ayenge raat ko...
Itna kiya ujala , ke ghar tak jala diya..

wah bahut khoob bhai...........................


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2nd June 2015, 10:42 AM

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Muddat se thi kisi se Milne ki arzu..
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Kisi ne Di khabar, vo ayenge raat ko...
Itna kiya ujala , ke Ghar tak jala diya..


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Muddat se thi kisi se Milne ki arzu..
Khwahish-e-deedar mein sab kuch gava diya...
Kisi ne Di khabar, vo ayenge raat ko...
Itna kiya ujala , ke Ghar tak jala diya..
bahot khoob........................ likhte rahiye


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Muddat se thi kisi se Milne ki arzu..
Khwahish-e-deedar mein sab kuch gava diya...
Kisi ne Di khabar, vo ayenge raat ko...
Itna kiya ujala , ke Ghar tak jala diya..

Bahut khoob ehsaas share kiye hai aapne janaab. Kya yeh aapka apna likha hai? Agar nahi to darkhaast karunga ki aap sher/nazm ke neeche 'NM' likhe.

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