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25th October 2004, 03:43 PM
Dosto...abhi main sanju ki nayi post par kar vaha ye jawab de rahi thi to dil ne kaha ise naye kalaam k roop me poora kar k aapke aage paish karu...bas aaj hamare dil ki bhi haalat aisi hi hai...
dilo-jaan hi to tha..kyu tu bewafa nikla.. ham is jaha.n se chale jaate tu ilm to karta.. teri raho me sadke hi to kiye the.. tu to magar ashko ka saudagar nikla.. tere zulmo sitam ab kaise sahe.. hamara dil hi hamse bevafai pe utra.. nibhaye the hamne to pak mohobat k usool.. tu to har usool ka janooni katil nikla.. had se guzer gaye..jab tere sitam-e-karam.. mohobat k dole me dekho 'udas' ka zanaaza nikla.. uff bhi na nikli is marti 'udas' ki.. dekh o bewafa sanam,mera dam nikla.. UDAS ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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26th October 2004, 11:02 AM
Hi Chhoti Behna (S....... S..... S....a),
Hmmmm, Abhi tak apne dil ko dhoond raha hu is kalaam ko par ke. Pata nahi kaha nikal gaya ashk leke aur kaha mu chupae ro raha hai??? Sach di, Bohot hi pyari rachna hai aapki aur humesha ki tarah bakhoobi apne dard aur ehsaaso ko is mein sajaaya hai apne. Agay bhi u hi aapka dard humare saath bant te rahiye. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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28th October 2004, 02:35 PM
Salim bhai...salaam
kyu bhai mili aapko apni tasveer is kalaam me ya nahi..chalo dekhiye kahi. na kahi zaroor chhupi hogi shayad mohobat k dole me.... anyways...bahut bahut thanx jo aapne aaker apni haziri di...aur hamare kalaam ki tareef me kuchh shabd kahe...u hi aate rahiye... ab izazet dijiye...urs udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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28th October 2004, 05:37 PM
dilo-jaan hi to tha..kyu tu bewafa nikla..
ham is jaha.n se chale jaate tu ilm to karta.. teri raho me sadke hi to kiye the.. tu to magar ashko ka saudagar nikla.. tere zulmo sitam ab kaise sahe.. hamara dil hi hamse bevafai pe utra.. nibhaye the hamne to pak mohobat k usool.. tu to har usool ka janooni katil nikla.. had se guzer gaye..jab tere sitam-e-karam.. mohobat k dole me dekho 'udas' ka zanaaza nikla.. uff bhi na nikli is marti 'udas' ki.. dekh o bewafa sanam,mera dam nikla.. Dear sister, Humesha ki tarah bahut hi sundar likha hai aapne... as usual.. full of pain yet so beautiful.... yun to poori rachan hi bahut sundar hai... par yeh shabd dil ko chho gaye.... had se guzer gaye..jab tere sitam-e-karam.. mohobat k dole me dekho 'udas' ka zanaaza nikla.. uff bhi na nikli is marti 'udas' ki.. dekh o bewafa sanam,mera dam nikla.. Aage bhi aise hi likhti rahiyega....Do TC  Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th October 2004, 05:58 PM
bohat khoob sunita ji
aapne phir se ek dil chu lene wala kalam likha .. shayad jadoo hai aapki kalam main ... aapke vicharon main ... seedha dil cheer dete hai ... daad kabool kare .... bas raj hi raj |
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