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Sisakti Raate Aur Jalte Hua Ham -
19th October 2004, 10:21 AM
sisakti raate aur jalte hua din
aaho k tufaan se sehme khamosh lab kab tak jiyegi udas u zindgi.. ankho ki nami kab tak chupogi tum.. koi daman bhi nahi.. jaker chhup jaye jo usme.. bhigo de anchal, nahi koi seene se laga le ab.. sisakti raate aur jalte hua ham.. baichainiya deemak ban gayi hai.. chhatpataTa hai vyakul man.. akelepan ki jwaala.. khud ko jalati hai har dam.. pyar ka pyasa bachpan.. aaj bhi tadafta hai.. rota hai rom rom kabhi, to sulagti hai aatma akele me har dam.. koi saathi, koi sahara na hua.. jisko bhi apnana chaha.. khud me hi simta sa mila. sisakti raate aur jalte hua din.. zindgi kat rahi hai..u hi.. kat jayegi tamam umr 'udas' u hi..u hi...ek din..!! UDAS ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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19th October 2004, 11:22 AM
Priye Udaas...
yahan wo applaud karne wala yaahoo emoticon nahin nahin tau clapping karti...bahut hee khubsurat likha hai...dard se bharpoor...sachaa sa...saral saa ehsaas...yeh lines tau dil pe bahut asar kar gayin pyar ka pyasa bachpan.. aaj bhi tadafta hai.. rota hai rom rom kabhi, to sulagti hai aatma akele me har dam.. Akelapan! koi saathi, koi sahara na hua.. jisko bhi apnana chaha.. khud me hi simta sa mila. Khudgarz log! sisakti raate aur jalte hua din.. zindgi kat rahi hai..u hi.. kat jayegi tamam umr 'udas' u hi..u hi...ek din..!! Mayoosi...thakaan! roz roz kee haqiqat...tumne yeh sab kitni aasaani se keh diya...share karne ke liye shukriyaa...yoonhi likhntee rahein...kabhi dard...tau kabhi khushi mein bhi...kabhi akele tau kabhi doston ke beech bhi paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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Re: Sisakti Raate Aur Jalte Hua Ham -
19th October 2004, 11:40 AM
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bohat khoob sacchai se sarbor is kalam pe toote foote kunal ki dad kabool kare ... doosra hath dekha kitna kaam aa raha hai... tod deti to daad kaise deta tell tell  Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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19th October 2004, 02:25 PM
Meri Pyari Behna,
Kitna dard hai apne aap mein samete hue!! Hai, Phir humari aankh mein nami kara di aapne. Kitni naummeedi, kitna dard bas dil jhin jhord ke rakh diya hai. Bas u hi apna dard humare saath share karte rahiye. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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19th October 2004, 02:55 PM
SUNITA JI,
Itni udaasi itni bechaini , kyun zindagi se itni jaldi haar maan lete ho . Gum na kar ke taqdeer bhi badlegi Ek din hoga aisa ke gum ki tasveer badlegi Hoga khushiyon se bhara tera daaman Khuda ki rehmat tere daman mein khushi bhar degi ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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Re: Sisakti Raate Aur Jalte Hua Ham -
19th October 2004, 09:23 PM
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bohat khoob .... ek dum sahi hai ek ek bat tareef kabool kare bas raj hi raj |
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Re: Sisakti Raate Aur Jalte Hua Ham -
20th October 2004, 03:53 PM
koi daman bhi nahi..
jaker chhup jaye jo usme.. bhigo de anchal, nahi koi seene se laga le ab.. baichainiya deemak ban gayi hai.. chhatpataTa hai vyakul man.. akelepan ki jwaala.. khud ko jalati hai har dam.. pyar ka pyasa bachpan.. aaj bhi tadafta hai.. rota hai rom rom kabhi, to sulagti hai aatma akele me har dam.. koi saathi, koi sahara na hua.. jisko bhi apnana chaha.. khud me hi simta sa mila. sisakti raate aur jalte hua din.. zindgi kat rahi hai..u hi.. kat jayegi tamam umr 'udas' u hi..u hi...ek din..!! PRIYE UDAS JI waqai ...!! yeh kalaam ke jariye aapne jaise ek tasveer kheech daali hai ...gazal ko padhte hue yun laga jaise kisi jindagi ko pal bhar mein hi padh dala ho jaise...har sher sacha aur bejode hai...bahoot umda likhti hai aap...khuda se dua hai aapke is hunar ko aur tarakki mile..aur aapko sukoon.meri daad kubool kijiye...sada khush rahiye -MANOJ karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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26th October 2004, 02:25 PM
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paras acchha hua tumne clap nahi kiya...shayad mujhe aisa lagta ki mere dard per vyangye ho raha ho..anyways...filhaal itna hi kahungi...and ha.n thanx aapne aaker is koshish ko kamyabi ka paigam diya... urs udas sonu ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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26th October 2004, 02:27 PM
Thanx kunal...umeed karti hu ab aapka haath theek ho gaya hoga..
thanx for reply...tute haath se bhi koshish ki mere liye...chalti hu...izazet dena pls.. udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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26th October 2004, 02:30 PM
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such me bhaiya...dard to hai...seene mai aur bahut hai...itna kagaz kaale karne k baad bhi kam hi nahi hota aur tees deta rehta hai... koshish hi kar rahi hu bhai ise share karne ki...magar shayad kismat me kuchh aur hi likha hai..jitna share kar k ek dard kam karti hu ki dusra mil jaata hai...uf...anyways...shukriya...aap yaha aaye..aur ye kalaam aapko acchha laga...thanx... udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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26th October 2004, 02:33 PM
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har baar is udas ko himmat dene ki koshish....har baar hasane ki ek nayi koshish...kayi baar aapki koshishe kaamyaab ho jaati hai..lekin abhi abhi maine salim ko bataya k jaise jaise ek gam galat hota hai..dusra gam aur ghav dene ke liye taiyaar ho jata hai...afsos pyasa bhai apni kismat hi kuchh aisi hai...kanto se lipti hui.... thanx pyasa ji aap mera har kalaam parte hai aur mujhe himmat dete hai..bahut acchha lagta hai....per main reply dene me dair kar jaati hu...maaf karna...pls... udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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26th October 2004, 02:34 PM
Raj ji...
bahut khushi hui aap ko yaha dekh kar...thanx aapko ye kalaam acchha laga..u hi aate rahiye... thanx.. udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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26th October 2004, 02:40 PM
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sahi kaha aapne ek zindgi ki kahani ko hi isme nichorne ki koshish ki thi maine..lekin kya karu...jazbaat hai ki kagaz per utarne k baad bhi aag ki tapish liye hua hai..aur dil k daman ko jalaye jaate hai...yahi dard hai jo har baar...baar baar hamare armaano ko lahu luhaan kiye jaata hai..uff..uff..uff..kash kahin se sakoon mil paata...kahin is dard ko aaraam mil pata...ye bekhof dhooa ki tareh barta hi jaata hai.. Thanx manu ji aapne itni saraahna di is kalaam ko...such me aapki vazendaar tareef se to ek baar ko dil sakoon sa paa gaya..thanx u hi aate rahiye pls... udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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27th October 2004, 02:09 PM
Sunita ji..
Kaisi haiN? Maaf karna.. Jyada kuch na kah paaunga.. Lekin ek sher yahaaN likh raha hooN.. Zindagi ki raahon mein aise mod bhi aate hain Saawan ke saath-saath yehan Patjad bhi aate hain Aasuwon ke saagar mein moti bhi milthe hain Jo unhe doond lete hain, Wahi zindagi jee lete hain Apna khayaal rakhiye.. Mayank |
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27th October 2004, 07:08 PM
Udas ...aapki ye post parhi....mai samajh sakta hooN ye Peeda or ekanki pan bhi shaayad...per utne gehre se nahi...jitna use...jeene waala karta hai...
Bas shubhkaamnaaeiN hi de sakta hooN bhavishye ke liye... or is geet ke mukhde jitna hausla....shaayad. Samjhauta gamoN se karlo Samjhauta gamoN se karlo Jindgi me gam hi milte haiN.. Patjhad aate hi rehte haiN Ye madhuban phir bhi khilte haiN... Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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27th October 2004, 11:40 PM
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classic...kya kahe yaar...koi words match nahi hota. daad kabul kijiyega. pappu.  |
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29th October 2004, 11:06 AM
Mayank bhaiya...
aap yaha aaye...aur apni haaziri di mere liye yahi kaafi hai...aapne jo shair mere liye paish kiya bahut acchha laga...thanx u hi aate rahiye.aur mera hausla barate rahiye.. udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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29th October 2004, 11:08 AM
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udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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29th October 2004, 11:10 AM
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theek hai na...ok bye..take care & thanx againudas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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