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26th October 2004, 08:43 PM
Kabhi kisi ne hathh thhama nahi
fir sathh chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil tu akela to nahi tanha is jahaan maie bhari mahefil maie saya nazar aata nahi fir bhid chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil is maie mausam ka koi kasoor nahi daali se har pal jooda rahta patta nahi fir patjhad ke aane ka dar kyun hai dil barso se jakad ke bandh rakhi muthhi lakiron se is tarah koi bandhta nahi fir rishton ke bikharne ka dar kyun hai dil Kabhi kisi ne hathh thhama nahi fir sathh chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil |
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26th October 2004, 09:19 PM
Diii
ek ajeeb si kashmakash si mehsoos hui aapki yeh rachna padh ke... humesha ki tarah aapne ek baar phir bahut sundar rachna likhi.. aur saath mein hi woh kuch alag sa.. aapki is rachna mein bhi nazar aata hai.. Yun to poori rachna bahut pasand aayi mujhe.. par khaaskar ke yeh kuch lines.. daali se har pal jooda rahta patta nahi fir patjhad ke aane ka dar kyun hai dil Take Care.. ~Priii "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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27th October 2004, 09:08 AM
dii.............
bahut hi achha likha hain...hamesha ki tarah dil ke kareeb...... yeh padhke apki gujarati mein likhi hui panktiya yaadaa gayi"guno karya karu chu"usmein kuch apna add karti hoon... te haji je haath na zhalyo ene mein kyarno thami lidho hato.... ajeeb hain zindagi ki raahe bhi.... koi keesmat ki lakeero main naam nahin.... fir bhi dard de jaate hain.....(sunitadii ki ek ghazal).... apna khyal rakhiyegaa diii apki, mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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27th October 2004, 10:27 AM
barso se jakad ke bandh rakhi muthhi
lakiron se is tarah koi bandhta nahi fir rishton ke bikharne ka dar kyun hai dil meena jee... kya kahein...aapki baaton ka dil pe asar barabar rehta hai...hamesha kee tarah behad anootha likha hai aapne... yeh dar kabhi tham jaaye tau achhaa aapki paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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27th October 2004, 10:49 AM
Meena...
Dua ki thi phooloN ki, Daaman magar bhar gaya kaanToN se.. Ab to ye darr hai ki ye kaaNTe bhi daaman na chhoD jaayein. Bohat achha likha hai tumne.. yuNhi likhti rehna..  |
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27th October 2004, 10:53 AM
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27th October 2004, 11:10 AM
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mausam, saras... yaad chhe tari..sunita ni pankti pan khub gami ... je mane yaad n hati... di |
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27th October 2004, 11:12 AM
Hi Meenu Di,
Sach mein bohot hi pyaara kalaam likha hai jisme kai dar chuppe hai jo aksar insaano ke dilo mein hote hai. Bohot acchha laga parh ke. Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
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27th October 2004, 01:55 PM
Dil pareshaan jubaaN khaamosh
........Or aaNkhaiN nam haiN, Jo kabhi apne huve hi nahi Unse bhichhad jaane ka gam hai. Ji ...Meena ji mera hi ek purana sher...aapki is rachna ko parhkar yaad aa gaya..... Jawaab bhi hai shaayad apne hi paas.... Beshaq ye haath usne na thaama ho.... Beshaq uska koi waada bhi na ho... Per shaayad apni taraf se bahut kuchh nikal gaya hai apne haath se...or yahi daar hai us nikal jaane ke naakaam ho jaane ka....us ummeed ka shaayad. Aapka Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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wah wah -
27th October 2004, 08:25 PM
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tanha rehna chahti ho har pal tum phir bhi dil ke koi kaune main saath chahna aam aadmi ka sapna hota hai mat bhago door bhid se tum mat alag samjo apne apko ek aam aadmi hai hum sab use apna lo tum |
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28th October 2004, 02:23 AM
Kabhi kisi ne hathh thhama nahi
fir sathh chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil tu akela to nahi tanha is jahaan maie bhari mahefil maie saya nazar aata nahi fir bhid chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil is maie mausam ka koi kasoor nahi daali se har pal jooda rahta patta nahi fir patjhad ke aane ka dar kyun hai dil barso se jakad ke bandh rakhi muthhi lakiron se is tarah koi bandhta nahi fir rishton ke bikharne ka dar kyun hai dil Kabhi kisi ne hathh thhama nahi fir sathh chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil Di..aapne to sachaai ko khoob lafz diye hai... "lakiron se is tarah koi bandhta nahi fir rishton ke bikharne ka dar kyun hai dil" yeh lines dil ko chuu gayi...aur yeh do aur jode jaa raha hoon "Dhalta suraj hi to chalan hai jeevan hai phir jeevan ke dhalne ka tujhe gham kyun hai dil" yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa -aapka apnaa Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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28th October 2004, 12:47 PM
Meena didi..
Kasmkash se bhara huaa ek khoobsoorat qalam aaj yahaaN padhne ko mila.. Jo pata nahi apne lafzoN mai kitne gehre ehsaas liye huye haiN.. Aise hi likhte rahiye.. hameshaa.. Mayank |
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Re: dar kyun hai dil -
28th October 2004, 01:57 PM
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di...ye khayaalat bhi bahut acchhe lage aapke...such me aapke is kalaam per jo dard beh raha hai...us per aaaaaaaaaaah hi nikal payi...bahut acchha pariyog daal & patte ka Band Mutthi aur lakiro ka...wakeye hi kabile tareef aur asardaar banata hua sa..meri tahe dil se daad kabool kare..pls.. dard hai judai ka.. dard hai..apno se bicchhur jaane ka.. dard hai...moh-maya se chitak jaane ka.. thama nahi tera haath kisi ne.. fir bhi dard to hai.. apne aap me hi u simat jaane ka... bas yahi aaya di man me jo likh diya.. izazet de... urs sunita ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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28th October 2004, 05:48 PM
Kabhi kisi ne hathh thhama nahi
fir sathh chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil tu akela to nahi tanha is jahaan maie bhari mahefil maie saya nazar aata nahi fir bhid chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil Wah! too good... is maie mausam ka koi kasoor nahi daali se har pal jooda rahta patta nahi fir patjhad ke aane ka dar kyun hai dil barso se jakad ke bandh rakhi muthhi lakiron se is tarah koi bandhta nahi fir rishton ke bikharne ka dar kyun hai dil Kabhi kisi ne hathh thhama nahi fir sathh chhutne ka dar kyun hai dil Diiii, Kaisi hain? Hope u r fine now... Kaafi time baad aapki rachna padhi...and this one is reallly beautiful....Kitna sundar likha hai... Simple as ur writings are always..... I love evry word of it.... Dil se daad kubool kijiyega.... So... aage bhi aise hi likhti rahiyega.... and DO TAKE CARE.... keep smiling....... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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3rd November 2004, 12:06 PM
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paras, yeh dar kabhi tham jaaye tau achhaa ya yunh kaho ke yah dar ka lamha gujar jaaye to achha... par shayed aisa hota nahi kyun ki yah dar bhi humari khud ki den hota hai... hum hi ise banate hai... or fir hum hi is se bhagte hai... meena |
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3rd November 2004, 12:08 PM
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afshan, Dua ki thi phooloN ki, Daaman magar bhar gaya kaanToN se.. Ab to ye darr hai ki ye kaaNTe bhi daaman na chhoD jaayein kai had tak tumhara khayal sach hai.... hum tanha hone se itne darte hai ki phool na mile na sahi kaanto se dosti karne par tool jaate hai...... meena |
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3rd November 2004, 12:09 PM
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salim, mere khayal pasand karne ke liye shukria...... meenu di |
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3rd November 2004, 12:10 PM
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mere chaand, .................................. ................................. ................................ tumhari meena |
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3rd November 2004, 12:11 PM
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mita, jo hukum meri dost ka................. meena |
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3rd November 2004, 12:19 PM
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anu, "Dhalta suraj hi to chalan hai jeevan hai phir jeevan ke dhalne ka tujhe gham kyun hai dil" kaash yah sachaai ko hum ji sakte............. di |
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3rd November 2004, 12:20 PM
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shukria mere ahesaas ko is tarah pasand karne ke liye........ tumhari di |
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3rd November 2004, 12:21 PM
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sunita, dard hai judai ka.. dard hai..apno se bicchhur jaane ka.. dard hai...moh-maya se chitak jaane ka.. thama nahi tera haath kisi ne.. fir bhi dard to hai.. apne aap me hi u simat jaane ka... bahut khub............... shukria mere khayal par apne khayal batane par..... meenu di |
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3rd November 2004, 12:22 PM
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pulkit, maie thhik hu. apna khayal rakhna. tumhari dil se ki hui daad mere sar aankho par...... khush raho di |
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1st February 2005, 09:01 PM
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mere chaand, Beshaq ye haath usne na thaama ho.... Beshaq uska koi waada bhi na ho... shayed yahi par aa kar humari baat rooki hai ... hai na? meena |
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hi -
2nd February 2005, 01:36 PM
nice ghazal...
bas padhata hi gaya... bas badhata hi gaya kab safar khatam hua main to srif badhata hi gaya aapaka likha padhata hi gaya Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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2nd February 2005, 02:34 PM
bahut hi khub likha hai aapne...........it's soooo touching
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aapki aabhari hu jo aapne mere ahesaas ko pasand kiya. meena |
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4th February 2005, 08:24 AM
Thanx lots didi.......
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4th February 2005, 12:30 PM
Mere aas-paas tera na hona
Mera dard itna kyoN barhata hai, Tera to koi waada bhi nahi mujhse Phir ye.....waada khilaafi sa nazar kyoN aata hai. Ji Meena ji....... Ye Dard kis-kis se mila or bhool gaya Ye Dard kis-kis se mila or bhool gaya, Phir tujhse hi mili is saugaat ko kyoN Hamne seene se laga rak.kha hai, Bahut naadaan hai ye dil....Bas jid si kiye baitha hai Bahut naadaan hai ye dil....bas jid si kiye baitha hai, Jabki... ik umr huve us shaqsh ne bhi Hamse ik faasla sa bana rak.kha hai. Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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4th February 2005, 03:25 PM
khyab-e-saqoon mein jo palata hai,
dil khof-e-haqiqat se darataa hai. chahtaa hai jo mehfooj rahanaa. fitarat hai usaki tootke bikharnaa tootkar bikharay tookadon mein bhi, joodney ki aas banake dhadakta hai. it becomes more and more universal. |
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mere chaand, ik umr huve us shaqsh ne bhi Hamse ik faasla sa bana rak.kha hai. haan ...... dost.... fir bhi n jaane kyun yah dil dard ko galae laga baithha hai.......  tumhari meena |
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7th February 2005, 09:59 AM
is maie mausam ka koi kasoor nahi
daali se har pal jooda rahta patta nahi fir patjhad ke aane ka dar kyun hai dil barso se jakad ke bandh rakhi muthhi lakiron se is tarah koi bandhta nahi fir rishton ke bikharne ka dar kyun hai dil Meena di.... .........behad khoobsurat.....dil se daad kabool kijiye..... mujhe Maikash ji ka likha ek sher yaad aaya..... " chand saanse hain.....uda le jaayegi..... isse jayada maut aur kya le jaayegi...." apka..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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