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21st October 2004, 02:53 PM
Chahe khamosh raho per saamne raho..
nazer bhar dekhte rahe... aur is dil ko sakoon milta rahe.. ankho me hi pa lenge...saara jaha.n gar tum saamne raho... akelapan to na torega mujhe.. ashk to na jalayenge mujhe.. sanse to sakoon se chalti rahengi.. gar khamosh hi tum saamne baithe raho.. kolahal to na ufnega dil me.. armano ki peera to na satayegi.. sukhe jakhmo ki charmaraahat to dil ki diwaro ko na khurach jayegi.. gar tum saamne raho.. kyuki.. tumse zudai ka gam to .. nasoor ghavo ko dehkaata hai.. dil ki dabi chingariyo ko.. vireh ka dard hawa diye jaata hai.. aur fir.... angare na ban jaaye shole.. ashk na ban jaaye tapti boonde.. sukhe jakham na fir se risne lage.. aur bachi ye sanse sakoon se chalti rahi.. iske liye....bas iske liye... tum saamne baithe raho.. chaahe kuchh bhi na kaho.. bas khaamosh saamne raho... udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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21st October 2004, 04:12 PM
Bahut achchhe Udas....aapke ye khayaalaat, ye jazbaat...jo bhi haiN...bahut hi pasand aaye...
Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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22nd October 2004, 10:34 AM
Chahe khamosh raho per saamne raho..
nazer bhar dekhte rahe... aur is dil ko sakoon milta rahe.. ankho me hi pa lenge...saara jaha.n gar tum saamne raho... sunita, yah dil jo hai na...... aksar sachhai se nazre churata rahta hai... bhram maie rahna achha lagta hai oose.. Chahe khamosh raho per saamne raho.. kya maangta hai dil...... kuchh jyada??? sirf ek ahesaas maangta hai..... paas hone ka ahesaas maangta hai.... woh mil jaaye..... to zindgi ka safar aasan laage..... par aaj maie is dil ki is maang se sahemat nahi hu... sirf itna kyun maangta hai? kyun jara si khushi maie jahaan paa leta hai??? Aey dil itna bhi 'bada dil' na ban... ke woh apni chal chal jaaye khub.. hathh maie thhama de apni tasweer or kahte jaaye, lo ab ho jaao khush... rakho humesha apni nazro ke saamne meenu di |
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22nd October 2004, 10:59 AM
hello sunitade..............
itna dard..............wah di apne to kamal kar diya.bahut accha likha hain....................apne ek aur accha kaam kiya jo itni acchi shairi likhi ke meenu di ne apna maun tod diya................sachmein meenudi ka jawab bhi bahut accha laga..sachai bayan kar di ap donone.....dono ko hamara salam............................... aapki mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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22nd October 2004, 08:06 PM
Sunita ji..
Kya baat hai! Bahoot hi achchha aur dilkash yah qalam likha hai aap ne.. Har shbd.. apne pak mohabbat ko lafzoN mai bayaaN kar raha hai.. ek babasi, ek dard ke saath… WaaH se aaH tak har ehsaas dil mai aata hai aap ke qalam ke liye.. Likhti Rahiye.. MayanK |
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22nd October 2004, 08:18 PM
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uff ... bohat hi dard hai .... kaise kahun ki accha hai... khoobhi se dhala hai aapne apne jazbaton ko alfazon main shikyat nahi tumse ye mere dil ki aahen hai... tere bin jo lee jitni bhi sanse woh mere liye sazayen hai rooh jal jayegi tujh bin ye mere dil ki sadayen hai ab na karo mujhe bekrar hum poori duniya ke satayen hai di bohat khoob likha aapne yahi soch paya bas apna khayal rakhna Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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23rd October 2004, 06:03 AM
Jab tak tum saamne rahoge...
Dil yeh machalta rahega...  yehi gaana yaad aaya aapki shuru ki kuch line's padh ke.. Lekin uske aage... uske aage bahut dard mehsoos hua Di... Aapke andar itna dard hai ki kya kahun.. aap jab bhi likhte ho apni dard-bhari kalam se... ki bas seedha kaagaz ko jala daalte ho... us dard se.. us peeda se.... Aap please apna khayaal rakho.. aur aapki email ka intzaar kar rahi thi.. aayi nahi abhi???? busy ho kya??? jaldi reply dena.. Take care dii.. ~Priii "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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29th October 2004, 11:12 AM
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udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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29th October 2004, 11:20 AM
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 are....such me main bahut hairan hu aur khush bhi hu ki meri maun di ne maun-vrat tor diya aaz mujhe khushi hui di ki aapko ye pasand aaya...aur ha di aap ne sahi kaha..ham aur hamare ye dil kitna innocent hai na jara si khushi pakar hi khush ho jaata hai...bas apne usko saamne paaker hi sara jahan pa lene si khushi mehsoos karta hai...ha.n ye baat alag hai ki ek chahat puri hone k baad dusri chaahat sir utha leti hai...aur tabhi dil kehta hai ki bas itni si baat se hi kyu khush hai..aage baaki aapne likh hi diya..thanx di...aap yaha aaye aur apne vichar diye bahut acchha laga... urs udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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29th October 2004, 11:23 AM
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 anyways...thanx for coming...take care..bye.. udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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29th October 2004, 11:25 AM
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udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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29th October 2004, 11:27 AM
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udas ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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29th October 2004, 11:30 AM
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such kaha priya tumne ki dard se kagaz bhi jalta hai aur dil bhi...lekin dard hi nahi jalta...afsos....thanx priya....tumne sahi mehsoos kiya ise par kar...aur yahi ek likhne waale ki safalta hoti hai ki uske likhe ko vaise hi samjha jaaye jaise vo samjhana chahta hai..aur tum ye bakhoobi samajh leti ho...is se bar kar mere liye aur khushi aur sakoon kya hoga..thanx...ok bye..apna dhyaan rakhna.. urs di.. ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO ******** "Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai" ~~~~~ ** |
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1st January 2010, 11:52 PM
udasji,
yeh nagme dard me bheege hue se....inme sooraj ki tapish mehsoos hui... aapki bayani dil ko chu gayi....... likhte rahe..... khush rahe...... duao ke saath Aandhiya Gam Ki Chalegi To Sawar Jaoonga Me Mai To Dariya Hu Samoondar Me Utar Jaaonga Me Mujhe Suli Pe Chadane Ki Jaroorat Kya Hai Logo Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me (When i received You in my heart everything changed for me) |
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3rd January 2010, 11:53 PM
Amit kya baat hai lagta hai meri purani nazmo ko nikaal nikaal kar laana tumhe acchha lag raha hai...dekho bhai koi naraaz na ho jaye...ha.ha.ha.
is rachna ko upar la kar bahut kuchh yaad dila diya tumne... thanks a lot.dear.  ~*~*~* उदास पथिक ~*~*~*दिल की चीखे जब बढ जाती हैं और जज्बातो की आंधी रोके नही रुकती.. तो लिख लेती हू.... |
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