29th October 2004, 10:27 AM
Arshad ji namaskar...
pehli baar aapko yaha dekha...aur para...bahut asardaar likha hai..har shair ek dard ka ehsaas ek niraash liye hua hai..bahut hi acchha likha hai aapne jo sochne per bhi mazboor karta hai...hamari dhair saari daar kabook kijiye aur u hi likhte rahiye..
udas
DARD JAB HAD SE GUZERTA HAI TO GAA LETI HOO
ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO
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"Haale dil to dil me hi rakhte hai, in ankho ka kya karai.n
Jinse yaad main tumhari hardam aansu behte hai"
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