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Wah kya thought hai.... !!!!! -
27th August 2005, 08:44 PM
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Aaj to lagta hai meri factory production phir se shuru ho gayi hai....lol... This one sounds too good... although melancholy but wah kya thought hai... wah mazaa aa gaya.. zara gaur farmayein... i hope you all like the thought and you all also say "wah kya thought hai...!!!!" --------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sagar mein suraj pighalta hua aaj phir inteezar mein "koi" hai jo nahi soya Aasman mein laal rang phelta hua aaj phir daaman hai lahoo mein dhoya Sard hawa ghane andhere mein behta hua aaj phir muskan ke peeche dard hai khoya Kaale Baadalon se pani barasta hua aaj phir kiski deewane ka dil hai roya -- Rohin Bhargava ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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27th August 2005, 08:59 PM
rohin bhaiya's factory sounds gud bhaiya ahcha hai factory ki output ko ghatne mat dena bas aise hi badhaye hue rahkna.bas likhte rehna.
aapka LUCKY  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Re: Wah kya thought hai.... !!!!! -
27th August 2005, 10:44 PM
correction...
--------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sagar mein suraj pighalta hua aaj phir inteezar mein "koi" hai jo nahi soya Aasman mein laal rang phelta hua aaj phir daaman hai lahoo mein bhigoya Sard hawa ghane andhere mein behta hua aaj phir muskan ke peeche dard hai khoya Kaale Baadalon se pani barasta hua aaj phir kiski deewane ka dil hai roya -- Rohin Bhargava ---------------------------------------------------------------------------- |
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28th August 2005, 09:17 AM
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dear rohin, all i need to say is tht after every nite u have a brite sunny morning.sum nites are just long,may be its one of those long nites n be sure ,the day after will be really bright n bring us our smile back. i know ur smile n happiness lies in meeting ur fate, life, ur everything . so intezaar ki yeh gadhiyan jald hi khatam hongi n u will reach to ur destination, ur life.well i thx to u frm the bottom chore of my heart for taking out time frm ur hectic shedhule. ahead the thing u never wanted wont happen, as i understood wat u needed to explain me. thx for teaching me a lesson. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters. with love urs ET,OR SQ  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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28th August 2005, 09:47 AM
nice one...grt thought
keep writin take care bhaiya Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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28th August 2005, 12:59 PM
really WAAH KYA THOUGHT HAI
 tata...... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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28th August 2005, 08:03 PM
hmm thought to achha hai...
jaise chaand ko chaandani me hai dhoya jaise raag ko raagini me hai piroya |
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28th August 2005, 11:45 PM
hey rohin very intense feelings.....very touchy.....can feel them....deewane ka dilhai roya to deewani khush kaise rahegi...?
luv Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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29th August 2005, 11:14 AM
Sagar mein suraj pighalta hua
aaj phir inteezar mein "koi" hai jo nahi soya Aasman mein laal rang phelta hua aaj phir daaman hai lahoo mein bhigoya Sard hawa ghane andhere mein behta hua aaj phir muskan ke peeche dard hai khoya Kaale Baadalon se pani barasta hua aaj phir kiski deewane ka dil hai roya Hmmmmmm.... Aashaar bhut hi khoobsurat hain par baat wohi hai... Deewane ka dil roya to uske aas paas uske chahne waale kaise khush rahenge.....! Nice taiyyari thou...! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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29th August 2005, 12:19 PM
Rohin Praaji......
Dard umad aaya hai...haan lekin keh sakte hain ki doorion ka dard..... Khayal bahut hi gehre..... khush raho.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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29th August 2005, 06:23 PM
no words 2 say...rohin.
its special!! tc komal |
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29th August 2005, 07:07 PM
rohin bhaiya.........
thinking of ur thought juz this thought comes to my mind...... waah........kya thought hai.......... hehehe.......really......bahut shaandaar..... last two lines bahut dar bhari hain...... do keep writin.....and as lucky says so do i........factory ka output ghatne mat dena yaar varna hamari factory jo ki abhi-abhi set-up hui hai uska kya....???? luv u, KasaK..... Judaa huye haiN bahut log, ek tum bhii sahii, Ab itnii sii baat pe kyaa zindagii haraam kareiN .. |
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30th August 2005, 07:14 AM
Hey rohin,
Too good yaar...bahaut accaha likha hai tumne...bahaut diff bhi hai...loved reading it...kaise ho tum? Luv ya Palak =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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31st August 2005, 09:39 PM
Hi Lucky,
Thanks for reading and appreciating my thoughts... ----- Hi Jasleen, I know you didnt like it but sometimes read as just a thought... ----- Hi Karthik, I am glad you liked the thought. ---- Hi Kuhulika, Yehi to mein bhi keh raha tha.. wah kya thought hai... ---- Hi Garima, Nice Lines sweetu... ---- Hi Priya, i am glad you loved the feelings... aur deewana rota nahi hai.. bus deewani ko yaad karta hai ---- Hi Pulkit, Khayal hi hai usse jyada kuch nahi... ---- Hi Aman Praaji, Dard ka kya hai pani ki tarah hai .. kabhi aasman se to kabhi aankhon se baras hi jaata hai... ---- Hi Komal, Yes a thought is always special... ---- Hi Kasak, Lucky to kehta hi hai... tum bhi kehne lago... I am glad you liked it... ---- Hi Palakh, I am glad you enjoyed reading it... -------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi Everyone, Thanks for Reading and taking the time out to reply Thanks Rohin |
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1st September 2005, 07:28 PM
Sard hawa ghane andhere mein behta hua
aaj phir muskan ke peeche dard hai khoya Kaale Baadalon se pani barasta hua aaj phir kiski deewane ka dil hai roya Hello my sweet brother Kehna padega bhai Waah kya thought hay ......Nice one..... touching poetry......Kuch panktiyaan likhne ka mann ho raha haySard hawa ganhe andhere mein behta hua Lagta hay Badalon ke Anchal mein kuch hay khoya khoya Chandni Raton mein mukhda kisey ka hay khoya hua Lagta hay chand chandni mein kahin hay khoya khoya Keep writing Sada kush raho |
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5th October 2005, 06:27 AM
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Sorry for the late reply... I am glad you found it touching... aur aapko acha lagi is ka bayan hain aapki khoobsurat panktiyan... fantastic... Apna khayal rakhiyega Rohin |
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