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~.. Khuda sach hi maiN ho - 2nd May 2012, 04:35 PM

khudaa sachi hi maiN ho aisa nahi hai
magar meri koe suntaa nahi hai

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai

zubaaN se 'fikr' kadvaa hi bhale ho
suno insaaN buraa dil ka nahi hai
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2nd May 2012, 07:37 PM

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khudaa sachi hi maiN ho aisa nahi hai
magar meri koe suntaa nahi hai

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai

zubaaN se 'fikr' kadvaa hi bhale ho
suno insaaN buraa dil ka nahi hai

aasan alfaaz men bahut umda byaani..................acchee ghazal huyi bhai.
   
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2nd May 2012, 08:36 PM

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai


Bahut Saadhgee Se ... Bahut SachChhi BaaTe Karte .. Ash'aar Likhe HaiN !

Khoobsurat Andaaze BayaaN ... Nihayat UmdaaH ... Kaamiyaab Ghazal ... !

Asar Angez ... Maaiine Khez ... PurKash ... Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad ... Vikas Bhaii !!!




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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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3rd May 2012, 08:58 AM

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khudaa sachi hi maiN ho aisa nahi hai
magar meri koe suntaa nahi hai

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai

zubaaN se 'fikr' kadvaa hi bhale ho
suno insaaN buraa dil ka nahi hai
tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai


bahut khoob ... vikas bhai

poori ghazal hi khoobsurat hai ..... dil se dheron daad

radhe radhe .................


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khudaa sachi hi maiN ho aisa nahi hai
magar meri koe suntaa nahi hai

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai

zubaaN se 'fikr' kadvaa hi bhale ho
suno insaaN buraa dil ka nahi hai
very nice.....................


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khudaa sachi hi maiN ho aisa nahi hai

magar meri koe suntaa nahi hai

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai

zubaaN se 'fikr' kadvaa hi bhale ho
suno insaaN buraa dil ka nahi hai
bahaut acchhe kiqr ji. kharee kharee baat kartee huwee apkee ghazal sachchayee se bharee huwee hai. sabhee sher acchee lage, par yeh to khaas taur se pasand aaye ...

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
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khudaa sachi hi maiN ho aisa nahi hai
magar meri koe suntaa nahi hai

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai

zubaaN se 'fikr' kadvaa hi bhale ho
suno insaaN buraa dil ka nahi hai
Vikas bhai yun to aapki har rachnaa qaabil-e-tareef hoti hai par yeh kuch gudgudahat bhari hai

saral bhi aur sateek bhi, spasht bhi aur gehri bhi - umdaa baat kahi hai

Yunhi to ek lay mein bandhi hai upar se neeche tak par yeh ek sher behad pasand aaya

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

likhte rahiYeGaa

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khudaa sachi hi maiN ho aisa nahi hai
magar meri koe suntaa nahi hai

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai

zubaaN se 'fikr' kadvaa hi bhale ho
suno insaaN buraa dil ka nahi hai

vikas ji bahut umda gazal hai aapki ye her share meeaning ful sach mein bahut khoob yu hi likhte rahe ..............


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tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bahut hhi acha likha hai apne...aur itni sadgi se simple tarike se apni feelings ko likh dalana bahut mushkil hota hai ....very nice


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31st August 2012, 12:13 AM

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khudaa sachi hi maiN ho aisa nahi hai
magar meri koe suntaa nahi hai

ghar apna dekh kar ye sochtaa huN
sabhi kuch hai magar aikaa nahi hai

sharafat leke tum aa to gaye ho
ye sikka khota hai chaltaa nahi hai

Muhabbat ka sila bhi ho muhabbat
ye dunia hai yahaN aisa nahi hai

meri basti hai khudgarjoN ki basti
yahaN pahla hai sab doojaa nahi hai

tujhe bhi ek din ye tazrubaa ho
jo tera hai wahi tera nahi hai

bhala kar ke bhalaa hoga yaqeenan
ye jumla hai magar sacha nahi hai

zubaaN se 'fikr' kadvaa hi bhale ho
suno insaaN buraa dil ka nahi hai

bahut hi khoob janumanu ji,
bahut hi accha laga padh ke
dhero daad kabool farmaye
khush rahe likhte rahe


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