 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
 |
|
|||||||
 |
 |
 |
 |
|
|
Thread Tools | Rate Thread | Display Modes |
 |
na jhukaate bhii nazar aur milaate bhii nahiN - tarahii ghazal |
 |
|
|
|
(#1)
|
|
Registered User
  
Offline
Posts: 1,646
Join Date: Oct 2013
Location: Mumbai, India
Rep Power: 22
|
na jhukaate bhii nazar aur milaate bhii nahiN - tarahii ghazal -
26th September 2014, 04:38 PM
dostoN,
Daagh Dehlvi saab kii ghazal, uzr aane meN bhii hai aur bulaate bhii nahiN ke misre pe ek tarahii ghazal likhne kii gustaakhii kii hai.... aapkii raaeye kaa muntaziir rahungaa...........  misraa: uzr aane meN bhii hai aur bulaate bhii nahiN ---------------- na jhukaate bhii nazar aur milaate bhii nahiN hai muhabbat jo unheN kyuN wo jataate bhii nahiN fikr unko jo mare hum na mare to ye kahe maut hai aage khaDii aur wo jaate bhii nahiN unko ki jo wo kahe hum wo suneN kuchh na kaheN wo ki sunte bhii nahiN hum ko sunaate bhii nahiN hum rahe dar pe haram ke ki kisii ne ye kahaa kaise baiTHaa wo yahaaN log uTHaate bhii nahiN parda-daari bhii ajab hai na jo ho to bhii kya roo chhipaate bhii nahiN noor dikhaate bhii nahiN unko kehnii hai jo baateN wo kahe maiN sunuuN yuN hi baTHaa maiN rahaa aur wo bataate bhii nahiN dar se guzruuN to ye sochuuN ki wo kiis baat pe KHafaa uzr aane meN bhii hai aur bulaate bhii nahiN ~ Adil "Safiir" ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 244
Join Date: Sep 2014
Location: New Delhi
Rep Power: 14
|
26th September 2014, 04:55 PM
Quote:
Waah....kya ada hai ........kya bechaini hai ....sahab !!! bahut pasand aaye aap is kalaam se.....dhero daad....aise hi kuch likh diya humne aapke initiation per...is sher ko bhi dekhen.. Ishq me kuch to jagah hoti hai izhaar-e-dil ki lekin ... Wo chupate bhi nahi aur jataate bhi nahi ...... Magar wo apni hi fitrat se hardam haar jaata hai !! (Pankaj Mishra 'Nawaab') |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
26th September 2014, 08:53 PM
Quote:
waahhhhhh kyaa andaaze bayaN hai safeer saahab.... dil khush kar diyaa aapne.... lagta hai ke aapki kalam choom loon..... ek behad purkhuloos, purmuqammal ghazal kahi hai aapne is baar... meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad aapko.......... dil se daad bhai mere.... likhte rahiye Shaad...... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
26th September 2014, 11:56 PM
Saaheb
Namaste Umdaah aur dilkash Ghazal likhi hai aapne. . Bazm ki shaan ko aage bhi yuunhi badhaate rahiye. . Dil se daad Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
Birha Tu Sultan
Offline
Posts: 1,810
Join Date: Aug 2001
Rep Power: 10
|
27th September 2014, 02:02 AM
Aadeil miyaaN,
aadaab aur namaste bhai pehli baar aapko paDhne ka lutf haasil hua hai aur malaal bhi ke is se qabl kyoN aapki kaavishoN par tavvajo na gayi, ba-sad-mazrat yahii keh sakta hooN ke yeh meri naalaayiqi rahi aur mera bharpoor nuqsaan bhi hua hai kya Ghazal kahi hai! aapka sukhan aur aapki fiqr yaqeenan daad-o-mubaarikbaad ki haqdaar haiN to bhai meri taraf se "Tikaa" lijiye aapka shukriya adaa karna bhi mera farz ban'ta hai, shukran alag se "Tikaaiiye"  rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
  |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,724
Join Date: Dec 2010
Rep Power: 37
|
26th October 2014, 09:49 PM
waaaaaaaaaahhhhhh !!!!! behad hi khoobsurat tarahi ghazal kahi Adil sahab aap ne!! Padh kar behad lutf haasil hua .... gehri fiqr aur dilkash bayaan !! Daagh saahab ke andaaz ka ehsaas bahaut achchee tarah se mehsoos hua !! Zabardast koshish rahi !!! Aap ko bahaut si daad aur dher saari mubaarakbaad !!
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
MaiN Our Meri Tanhaayii
Offline
Posts: 984
Join Date: Oct 2006
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 31
|
27th October 2014, 08:16 PM
Waah Adeil sahab kya baat hai.......ek behatreen Ghazal hui hai ........ Janab Bahut Khubsurat Ghazal Inayat Ki Appne. Dili Daad Qubool Kijiye. Likhte Rahiye Aur Khush Rahiye
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
||||||
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,646
Join Date: Oct 2013
Location: Mumbai, India
Rep Power: 22
|
28th October 2014, 12:36 PM
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
Quote:
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
|
||||||
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
Linear Mode
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
