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** aaj unko bahut kareeb paya hai - By Cute_ashu, mukhra and Shrdh ** -
5th March 2006, 12:32 PM
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aaj unko bahut kareeb paya hai
kissi ne mere dil ko samjhaya hai
kyun aaj chand nahi hai falak pe
kyunki vo to mere liye zameen par utar aaya hai (cute_ashu)
Dikh rahe hain khushiyon ke rele
Aaj saare ghamon ko humne bhulaaya hai
Ab aur kuch nahi chahiye duniya se
Unki muskaan mein hi meri maaya hai (mukhra )
tu paas hai har pal mera humsaya hai
tune mere sapne ko sajaya hai
phool se khusbhu, chand se shitlata
kirno se chanchlta le kar tujhe banya hai
tu jo muskara de ye duniya khilti hai
pariyon si seerat kaha aaj milti hai
na udas ho tu kabhi dua yahi karte hai
tere ehsass ne mere man ko mahkaya hai (shrdh)
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hope u like it
Ashu
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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.....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»......
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5th March 2006, 01:08 PM
bahoot khooB!
App tino ne bahoot achchha likha hai.. Ek dum mast likhte raho.. Daad kabool farmaaiye....
aap ka..
MayanK
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5th March 2006, 02:20 PM
buhut acha likha hai aapn tino se really nice wording...keep posting frends
unforgetable simran
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Ju PaL mIlE uSs PaL kO jEe lO
sHaYaD kAl Ho Na Ho......
love is seeing yourself in someone's
eyes and finding yourself in somebody's heart!!!!!(*-*)
(¨`·.·´¨) Always
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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ITS STATE OF MIND.....
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5th March 2006, 03:51 PM
thanx Mayank
aapne padha au raapko accha laga
ye jaanke humien bahut acha laga
waise my hearful thanx to shrdh dee and warda
they made it so beautiful
keep coming
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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.....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»......
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5th March 2006, 03:55 PM
thanx simran to also
i just started it and shrdh dee and warda make it so b'ful
keep coming
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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.....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»......
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10th March 2006, 06:05 PM
kehte hain ek se do bhale par yahan toh aap teeno ne bahaut badhiya likkha hai...sach bahaut accha laga..khush rahiyega.
"Roz Kii Taraah Aaj Bhii Taare
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN
Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN
Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN."
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wah -
10th March 2006, 06:05 PM
bahut khoob magar ye kahana hai
ikatthe kavita likhte huye mujeh bhulaya hai
kya masoomshayer ab itna hee paraya hai
apane hee hathon se khud ko rang lagata hoon
kaise is baar holee ka ye tyohar aya hai
just kidding pyara hai sab se baree sath rahane kee bahwana badee hai good
Anil
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
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10th March 2006, 07:38 PM
very nice
If you have it [love],
you don't need to have anything else.
If you don't have it,
it doesn't matter much what else you do have.
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10th March 2006, 08:03 PM
bahoot badhiya likha .. kamaal ki combination hai ye... par jahaan team work ho waha mere khayaal se apna naam alag nahi karna chahiye tha..
meri baat galat lagi ho to maafi chaahti hoon..
Thanks
Garima
Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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10th March 2006, 11:17 PM
oyy ashu!!!
wht the heck!! u posted this??? when??? i didnt even kno ...hehe..wow!
and ya, garima di, ur right, names are not needed, well, its juss, written by us...
well, ashu, thanx for posting it!
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»~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~«
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I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life,
marveling at the different plants and flowers
on the way....some hurt, yet some love...
~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~
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11th March 2006, 12:51 AM
thank you farhana for reading this
it is nice to hear that u liked it
keep coming
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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.....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»......
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11th March 2006, 12:53 AM
anil bhaiya humne aapko bhulaya nahi hai
aisa kaise ho sakta hai ke hum aapko bhul jaayen
aate rahiyega
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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.....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»......
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11th March 2006, 12:54 AM
plaulovable hanx for reading it
nice to hear that u liked it
keep coming
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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11th March 2006, 01:15 AM
garima ji accha laga ke aapne padha
keep coming
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11th March 2006, 01:17 AM
warda i thought that u have already seen this post
it's nice that u read it finally
but thanx to u to make it so nice
bye TC
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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11th March 2006, 08:51 AM
ashu tumne hum teeno ki post kar di i did not know
ye to tumhari post thi bus use padhkar reply mai humne kuch aage likh diya bus itna hi tumne likha hi itna pyara tha ki dil ke kahyaal apne aap reply mai utar aaye .
aaj saath padhi to achha laga
thnx for this post
shrdh
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11th March 2006, 06:21 PM
shradha dee ...
maine jab saath mein padha to mujhe bahut acchi lagi thi
to maine ek saath ikkatha karke post kar diya
aapne bhi to mere shabdon ko CHAR CHAAND laga diye the
maine kaise rok pata apne aap ko dubara post karne se
Yun Mile Ke Mulakaat Na Ho Saki,
Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki,
Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi,
Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm)
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12th March 2006, 04:01 PM
bahut acche ashu ,kidoo aur dd bas hume bhi saath le lo hum bhi roshan ho jayenge aapke saath....................
bhaut accha likha hai bas yuhi likhte raho sabhi ke sabhi........
meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi
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12th March 2006, 05:05 PM
aap tino ne bahut acha likha hai
aese hi likhte rahiye
god bess u all
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12th March 2006, 05:10 PM
Hi All three....
Very sweet very nice... a combination is always difficult to do... but here it seems seemless... good one...
Take Care
Rohin
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