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9th July 2003, 02:10 PM
Aye dil,
Zara dheere chal, Ye Dhadkan kahin Chhuut na jaaye. Aye saanson, Zara tum bhi Thhehro, Ye yaadein kahin, Bikhar na jaayein. Dur des me, Mera Chand kahin, Chayn ki neend, So raha hoga. Aye hawa, Yun na machal, Mere Chand ke sapne, Kahin Toot na jaayein. Aye raat, Zara lori suna de, Khwaabon me sahi, Hum mil to jaayein. |
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bahetareenn -
9th July 2003, 02:49 PM
afshandost,
bahetareen likha hai tumnae... Aye hawa, Yun na machal, Mere Chand ke sapne, Kahin Toot na jaayein. isqh hi isqh hai harsu tum hi tum ho khwabo maie.. oos chaand ke... yah to tay hai. |
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9th July 2003, 02:53 PM
Us Chand ka haal,
Woh hi jaane, Humara haal to behaal hai, Kal kya hoga, Rab hi jaane, Fihaal to sab sawaal hai. Pyaari Meena, Kalaam paRne ka, aur himmat bandhaane ka tahe dil se shukria!!!  |
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9th July 2003, 04:17 PM
Good thought. Waise humari aapni Meena ne boldia ab mein bolu toh keya bolu! Please keep on writting like this. Take care. God bless.
Shimul. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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9th July 2003, 04:19 PM
Thanks Shimul! Tumne jitna bhi kaha..kaafi hai..
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10th July 2003, 05:41 PM
Dur des me,
Mera Chand kahin, Chayn ki neend, So raha hoga. specially this lines r really good |
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waah banno ji -
10th July 2003, 06:46 PM
salaam banno ji......kya khuub likha hai aapne......bahut cute hai.........i just love it........each and every line.....keepp writing......
aapki tareef ke liye shabd nahi mere paas...........u r too coooool in shairi....sachi!!!! take care khudahafiz byeeeee@-- |
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12th July 2003, 12:00 PM
Mita ji, tareef aur waqt ka tahe dil se shukria!
Sohina ji, apko humaare kalaam itne pasand aate hain, jaankar behad khushi hui! Koshish yahi rahegi ki aage jo bhi likhein, aap sab ko pasand aaye. Shukria! |
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13th July 2003, 02:17 PM
Afshan.
apani paak mohabbat ke paak jazabaato ko...pak tarike se aapane utaara he..wo isi tarah se ye ek paak nazam ban gai he afshan...aur puri gazal me hame khuda ki paak mohabbat ki zalak dekhane ko mili he.....to isitarah aaj ham in-directly khuda se bhi mile he.......unase ham guzaarish karate he ki wo aapaki mohabbat ko kamayaabi bakshe. |
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13th July 2003, 02:20 PM
Ameen!!
Shyam, mohabbat to mohabbat hoti hai.. aur har sachchi mohabbat pak hi hoti hai.. aur tumne sahi kaha tha.. Khuda ki rehmat jispar rahe, use kya ho sakta hai.. bas, yunhi dua karte rehna dost.. !! |
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Nice work -
9th August 2003, 11:05 AM
Hey AFSHAN!
this is really very beautiful.. u know what it's sounding so like a hindi movie song.. i guess JAVED AKHTAR ko aapne complex ho jaayega.. lol  I specially liked these line.. Nice Work! Dur des me, Mera Chand kahin, Chayn ki neend, So raha hoga. Aye hawa, Yun na machal, Mere Chand ke sapne, Kahin Toot na jaayein. Aye raat, Zara lori suna de, Khwaabon me sahi, Hum mil to jaayein. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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9th August 2003, 12:09 PM
OHO!!!!.. are!! Aap kahan hume itne baRe shayar se compare kar rahi hain?? LOL.. kahin hume hi complex na ho jaaye..
 Shayad ye kalaam dil se likha gaya hai.. jab jazbaat aape me nahi the.. kuchh der ke liye hi sahi, is dil ke ehsaas dil se nikal kay, kalam par aa gaye.... kahir...Itni honsla afzai ki hai aapne.. bohat bohat shukria! |
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9th August 2003, 03:34 PM
Afshan Jee, bohot hi khub likhha hein.
Ha yeh toh dilki baate hein aur mein chahungi ke yeh dil ishi tarha hi rahe. Kabhi koi dusman ki nazar na parjaye ke yeh bikharke rahjaye. Sham bhi khub hein paas mehboob hein zindegi ke liye aur keya chahiye ashiqi ke liye aur keya chahiye keya hasi hein samha dharkane hein jawa dosti ke liye aur keya chahiye. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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9th August 2003, 03:36 PM
Shukria shimul! Tareef ka bhi.. aur saath hi khubsoorat kalaam post karne ke liye bhi...
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9th August 2003, 03:37 PM
Afshan Jee, Sorry I hit the wrong button some how.
Gana jab likhrahi thi toh mein gane ke sath sath thora sa behek gayi thi. Gana hi aisa hein ke keya kahe. Aapka yeh dilki kalam parke mujhe nehi raha gaya. Thanks for sharing. Mujhe bohot achha laga. Itni hadh tak ish ki mehsoosh kee ke keya batau!! thanks. Take care. God bless. Shimul. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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9th August 2003, 03:43 PM
Afshan Jee, sukriya reply ke liye.
Aur ek hojaye fhir? Keise mukhre se nazre hatau ke tujh meh hein Rab deekhta rab deekhta!!! Tujhe dekhna meri pooja hein tu hi tu hein aur na dujha hein nehi tere nazaro se jii vharta rahe samne tu yehi jii karta jii karta hein mera!!! Thanks & take care. God bless. Shimul. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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9th August 2003, 03:46 PM
Bohat khoob!!
Shimul ji, kya ye kalaam aapke apne hain?? Agar haan, to bohat khoob hain! Very romantic.. bohat achhe lage |
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9th August 2003, 03:50 PM
Afshan Jee, thanks for reply. Yeh meri dilki baate hein,
waise ganeka bol bhi. Agar abhi tak gana nehi suna hein toh zaroor suniyega. You would definitely like it. Waise toh yeh dil hi hein jo ganeka bolko mehsoosh karte hein Aur hadh ka pata usko hi chalsakta hein jo usi meh duba hua hein. Baas itna hi bolna tha. Mere khayal meh yeh jo ahsaash hein aap zaroor samajh payengi. Take care. God bless. Shimul. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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